Advice from Lo-
Look at the stair steps if you're going up or down on them. Trust me. There might be more steps left than you think.
This sketch is called Seeking
:)
**Not done yet**
Okay, I know her head's bigger than proportionate.
Here's why: I start with drawing the base pose first. Everything's perfectly fine at that point. But when I add hair and other head accessories, the head looks bigger and that throws off the proportions >..<
I have to work on that ;-;
Any feedback?
k I need some advice here. Comment on one: (for overall artwork)
~Too much detail (LOL IS THAT HER DRESS OR HER HAIR? I CAN'T TELL. MAYBE IT'S HER NECK)
~Detail's just right (STOP RIGHT THERE, HANDS UP)
~More detail (MORE MORE, MAKE ME PLAY I SPY)
Also:
~More chapters, less drawings per chapter (1-2)
or
~Less chapters, more drawings per chapter (3-6)