Catter 1 The Fiht Aganst the Sitters 1 [[Wha...]
"Oh nose!" yellded StarPaw she wus so horrorifed. "LakePaool is buck and seh is NUT OKA!" [[I wonder what lead to that conclusion]]
"Of coarse im not okay!" LakeFall screchemd loadly she issed at StarGlame. "I'm being posesd by HolyLeaf wut do you THINK!" she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so surpissed [[ew]] she culdn;t mofe [[I can't, it's late at night and I'm dealing with this]]
Then... "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" It was... [[OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO]]
REDPAW! Redpaw runnth over to StarPaw and jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta. [[Two sacrifices. Two]]
"Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" [[SHE'S FINE]] she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then he did. [[Life's simple joys: having the word 'died' mixed up with 'did']] StarFlame locked at RedPaw she wus so buttifly then StarGleam shock her hud. "No Im STRREET!" [[Auurgh]] she taught madly. [[Don't teach anyone anything]] "but now what do we dao agant LakePaw!" [[I wonder.]] she lucked up. [[+1]] LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she was WIDESPED! [[Widespread? So her cells are everywhere?]]
"NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem [[there's a prolonged word, a command and an exclamation mark in a sentence which Stargleam whispered]] and she ran towed LionBlaze and she hit LakePaw, who did to. [[Who hit who?]]
"StarGlame I will get u for thiss11 sed LakePaw as SatinClaw drag away to hellClan [[W.T.F]]. He waswerng oink naie Polish. [[W.H.Y]] then StarGlame stinted [[Stunted? Stained? Tinted]] to crry as she realed that her sitter ass ded. [[Those last three words caught me off guard]]
"you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. [[Pls no]] "Ilus get you for thi!" she saud and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the Way!" [[Tarpaw. Love it]]
Tim semd to slow danw as StarPawlem run awy from the bare. [[It should be the opposite]] But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" [["I "recoggonize" you. You're the one that's stuffed with fluff." Quotes from Tigger]]
"Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. [["Oh, good old terra firma!" Quotes from Tigger]] "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW! [[I'm gonna slam my head on the desk.... why did I do that]]
"Omg jyew!" [[Too many things wrong with this]] elld FamePaw she locked at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." They all locked at the lizard. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away. [[Why.]]
"... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! [[Why.]]
"Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it [[You're dehydrated!]] at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. [[Yes, burn]] "You're never get moi to ete it!" [[Tu es une imbécile]] she esked and then she held "YOUE NEVER TOOK ME ALIV!" [[I don't have the energy to respond]]
"are you so sur?" aksed TigerClar and then he lung [[deep breaths]] at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 [[You'll never Catherine me!]] he laght meanly. "Im gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he luf. [[So Stargleam can run away from there]]
Guyx I ben working relly hard on this wile I was gon. im sor'ry for the wait. Revew betetr and ill updat mor quick [[1. I doubt you put any more effort 2. I wish you have never continued 3. I don't think you'll be updating very quickly then if it's by good reviews]]