One Last Bite (completed)

By dOlAn_DeSiRe_

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"Don't you know it's bad to underestimate Vampires sweetie?" Ethan snarled "Ready?" I hear Grayson and my eye... More

1: First encounter🖤
2: Alone🖤
3: Woods🖤
4: I need answers
5: A dark room
6: Tear Stained Cheeks
7: Another Game
8: The Hunt
9: Phone Call Home
10: End.
•A/N•
•Sequel•
The Sequel is out NOW
I NEED YOUR OPINIONS...

•Re-Write?•

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By dOlAn_DeSiRe_

So I have been looking through this book and I really think it has moved too fast, something big happens in every chapter so it's quite chaotic. I also think some chapters are really short so I need to make them longer.

I am going to try make the re-write more interesting and with a lot more chapters.

Lots of love,

OXO

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