Manan SS Barfi ✅

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A story of Manan that revolves around the famous Ranbir Kapoor. They both were 2 crazy girls and their brothe... Meer

Character Sketch
Brothers & Sister's
Brothers & Sisters Part-II
Naughty Nandu
Am i right or i am right ?
meet the great actor Nandini Murthy..!
Manik already knew about it..!
Tantrum Queen..!
here comes Ranbir ..!!
Mission Ranbir..!
ManDhruBir
First Meeting
stubborn sisters..!
ice cream craziness..!
new entries..!!
movie date and after effects..!
something is fishy..!
THE Date prep's
THE Proposal
hera pheri begins..!
Meet Mrs.Malhotra..!
Naughty Hot Nandini
punishment time..!
Bickering cute NavNi
Party and after effects..!
Hangover Tantrums..!
The Dark Night..!
End of the Dark Night
Falling back in place
Le Passe
Secrets Coming Out..!
Broken Hearts..!
EPILOGUE
Authors Note
Missing Pieces

Girls in trouble

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Girls in Trouble

Present :

Manik and Cabir were watching each and every recording in the mall to get atleast one clue about but didn't find any. Their eyes again filled with tears watching the clipping in which nandini and navya were coming out of the watch shop and laughing on something. Abhi and Dhruv stood by their side for support.. they werereal brothers . On finding nothing they came home.

Manik and cabir were totally shattered. No one dared to speak anything as they knew no words to console the duo. Their love and their dearest sisters were missing and now it had been 2 hours since they got kidnapped and there was no way they were able to trace them. The door bell rang and their heartbeats raced. Aliya went to open the door after getting signal from dhruv to do so and the moment she opened the door she gasped.

Raj and Nyonika entered the house and it didn't take them a second to find out that something was fishy. Abhi told them about the kidnap and Nyonika fainted that very moment. Mukthi and aliya took her to the room and raj sat with the boys in the hall itself. He called commissioner to get the investigation started and he called his special team to find nandu and navya.

***

Navya was coughing badly due to the dust around and the same man who spoke few minutes back came there and removed the cloth from her mouth and splashed water on her face. The light was very less and she wasn't able to figure out who the person was and to find out atleast some clue she yelled

"kaun ho tum.. kyun kar rahae ho yae sab.. what do you want..?"

To which the person replied 

"tch..tch.. navya.. itnae sarae sawal.. don't you think you are talking too much... aur yae sab mai aapkae bhai aur aapkae pyarae pati ki wajah sae karna pad raha hai.. you will know everything soon.." and turned to leave when navya again shouted "mard ho toh marae bhai ka samna karo.. aaisae humhae yahan bandhnae sae tumnae apni mout(death) ko khud invite kiya hai.. aanae do marae bhai aur cabir ko.. unkae aanae kae badh tum ek aur minute kae liyae bhi zinda nahi rahanae walae.. jao bhag jao yahan sae agar tumhe apni jaan pyari hai toh.."

The man came near to navya and slapped her hard and said "ek baath aur tumnae bola na.. toh I wont mind to harm you more.." nandini was screaming but wasn't able to say anything as the cloth around her mouth wasn't letting her speak anything.

He came towards nandini and removed the cloth around her mouth. She gathered some air before speaking and said "kya chahiyae tumhae...?" he left the room without saying anything. Nandini and navya were about to say something to each other when HE returned with two files in his hand.

***

The door bell of malhotra mansion rang and this made shiver pass down their spines and this time Raj went to open the door himself and heaved a sigh of relief an finding Harshad.(Harshad Saxena - ACP and Aliya's brother. A close friend of cabir during collage days but they both were not in touch as harshad's profession didn't let him stay in the city for long. He worked in several rescue operations and finally reached Banglore his home town after 4 years )

"uncle where is cabir..?" was the first question he asked after seeing raj and raj pointed in the direction where cabir was there and harshed ran to cabir and hugged him tight. Cabir also reciprocated the hug with equal force and after breaking the hug harshad said 

"any clues of nandini and navya..?" cabir nodded a no and said "humane purae mall ki cc tv footage bhi dekhi but we didn't find anything.."

"can I see it again.?" Harshad asked having a hope to find atleast something and dhruv played the video. Harshad was observing everything very keenly and after watching it for 2-3 times he said "bro it's a loop.. yeh original video nahi hai.."

"what..?" another shock for all of them "yes.. see this.." he said pointing at one corner of the screen where the time was stuck but the video was running which was already a recorded one and continued "yes..  mall kae log bhi involved hai uss kidnapper ke saath.. some one in the security has helped them.. warna its not so easy to get the girls out in broad daylight.. we need to go to the mall again.." he got up from his chair and the others too.

Harshad appointed his guards around to house and strictly instructed them to watch each and every activity and inform him even if they have slightest suspicion on anyone around.

***

"sign these papers.." HE ordered nandini and navya throwing the files and pens in front of them. The girls looked at the files and then at each other and said in unision 

"what if we don't.." to which he laughed evilly and said 

"tum logon ka attitude.. wah..! manna padaega tumharae bhaiyon ko.. itna attitude.. tch tch tch .. isn't good for you.. now lets not talk nonsense.. im coming straight to the point.. yae papers sign kar do.. and you are free to go.. now common.. sign them.. your brothers must be waiting for you na.. becharae kitna pareshan hongae tum dono kae liyae.. chalo sign them.." and pushed their respective files towards them. He reached the wall nearby to switch on the lights and after watching him navni said "tum...!"

***

Harshad was beating blue out of the security person who was involved in the kidnap.

"bol.. kaun hai vo..? kahan lae gayae vo log ladikiyaon ko...?" and kicked him hard and finally he spoke

" Karan obroi.. unhi nae mujae paisae diyae thae yae sab karne kae liyae.. mujhae nahi pata kahan lae gayae.. bas yahan tak bataya tha mujhae ki cameras mai record nahi hona chahiyae kuch bhi..

The word Karan obroi was stuck in manbir's mind. He was the same person whose business was taken over by them last month against his wish as his company was running in losses manbir had gained a huge profit in the takeover.

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"sign the papers dammit...!!" karan yelled looking at Navya and nandini and nandini turned her face away in disgust and navya just looked away. He came towards navya and made her look at him holding her chin navya gave him an angry look and said 

"chodo mujhe...!!!" and he immediately slapped her hard and said 

"sign karo I don't have whole day..." nandini and navya were shocked to the core.

He moved towards nandini and freed her right hand and threw a pen towards her and papers to be signed. He said looking at them and said "sign it fast warna tumhare pati bhi khatarae mae hongae.. tumhae yahan bandh saktha hun toh un dono ko marna mujhae kuch mushkil ki baath nahi hai.."

nandini immediately said  "no no.. I will sign.. please manik aur bhai ko kuch math karna.." and took the pen and papers and signed them and looked at navya. Navya also signed the papers and karan verified those papers and laughed and said "ab thoda maza ho jayae.." and came towards nandini taking a knife from the table beside and took her free hand into his and in a light speed cut her hand and she winced in pain navya shouted "nanduuu...!!" and he tied nandini's hand back.. blood was running from nandini's hand and she started crying.

He then turned towards navya and navya looked at him with a horrified expression looking at which he said " kyu Mrs.Navya Cabir Dhawan dar lag raha hai kya..?" she nodded her head in a NO confidently and he continued "oh.. so fearless navya is back in action.." and still moved close towards her and again slapped her hard and she shouted

"cabir... bhaii...!!!" And karan again laughed and she retorted 

" tumhae mil gaya na jo tumhae chahiyae tha.. now get lost.. chod do humhae..." he came to nandini and pulled the scarf form her neck roughly and wiped the blood from her hand and said "are itni jaldi kya hai.. zara un dono ko bhi pata chale ki yahan kya kya ho raha hai.." and moved to the opposite side where a camera was placed and said 

"ab aayega maza... baki ke aadhe shares mare naam ho jayae tab mera kaam pura hoga jo ki tum dono kae bhai sign karange.." and took the camera off the stand and moved out of the room switching off the lights and making the room dark again. Nandini was loosing conscious due to the loss of blood and navya was calling her name to keep her awake but nandini was too weak mentally and physically to bear all that navya was looking around helplessly shouting for help.

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Too emotional right ????

i hope it didnt make you cry *sniffing* because I really cried while writing..!!

Keep smiling

take care

loads of love

Neeraja :)

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