Write Better, Write Happier...

By HeyMysty

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Enjoy your writing! ☺ 2022. Help from a Watty Award-Winning Author, Wattpad Creator, and long-tenured Senior... More

Why Mysty's Book?
① ✍️ Writing Tip: How To Stay Inspired
② ✍️ Writing Tip: Notice "Was"
③ ✍️ Writing Tip: The Reader Isn't You
④ ✍️ Writing Tip: Finding the Middle Way
💚 Write Happier 💚
⑤ ✍️ Writing Tip: Show, Don't Tell
⑥ ✍️ Writing Tip: Using Descriptions as Space
⑦ ✍️Writing Tip: The Word:Idea Ratio
⑧ ✍️ Writing Tip: Double Justification
⑨ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Gaining a Following
①⓪ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: The Truth About Feedback
①① 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Intro to Contests & The Wattys
#1 in Nonfiction - Thank You!
①② 🧡 Wattpad Tip: User Contests and Wattpad Genre Profiles
①③ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Naver, Wattpad Stars, Studio, Etc.
①④ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Appearances + Blurbs
①⑤ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Cover + Title
💚 Positive Motivation - ☯︎ Yin 🌚
💚 Positive Motivation - ☯︎ Yang 🌞
①⑥ ✍️ Writing Tip: Where You Write Matters
①⑦ ✍️ Writing Tip: Editing with Basic Tips
①⑧ ✍️ Writing Tip: How to Begin a Book
①⑨ ✍️ Writing Tip: Outline Your Story
②⓪ ✍️ Writing Tip: "Said" Never Died
②① 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Chapter Length, Rankings, and Release Schedules
②② 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Keeping Up With Your Release Schedule
②③ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Wattpad Burnout
②④ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Your Happiness
❤️ More Help! ❤️
②⑤ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Help Books and Advice
②⑥ ✍️ Writing Tip: Write Stronger Characters
②⑦ ✍️ Writing Tip: Write Stronger Characters ❷
②⑨ ✍️ Writing Tip: One Main Character
③⓪ ✍️ Writing Tip: POV and The Narrator
③① 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Avoid the Mature Rating
③② 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Multimedia
③③ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Wattpad Friendships
③④ 🧡 Wattpad Tip: Dealing with People on Wattpad
💚 Meditation For Writing and Wattpad 💚
③⑤ ✍️ Writing Tip: Pacing
③⑥ ✍️ Writing Tip: Editing, and Giving Your Story Some Space
③⑦ ✍️ Writing Tip: The Art of a Paragraph
③⑧ ✍️ Writing Tip: The Semi-Colon
③⑨ ✍️ Writing Tip: The Ellipsis
④⓪ ✍️ Writing Tip: The Dash, and Read a Book!
💚 You Get Out What You Put In 💚
④① 🧡 Wattpad Help: Getting Others Involved
④② 🧡 Wattpad Help: Getting Others Involved ➋
④③ 🧡 Wattpad Help: Disclaimers, Front Matter, Warnings, etc.
④④ 🧡 Wattpad Help: Copyright
④⑤ 🧡 Wattpad Help: Mirror Sites
④⑥ 🧡 Wattpad Help: Translations
💚 It's Never the End 💚
𝘾 𝙖 𝙡 𝙢 🌼 A Pocket Guide To Breathe Easy
➊ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Writing Poetry
➋ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: The Thesaurus
➌ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Is It Too Big?
➍ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: The Perfect Story
➎ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Asking For Follows
➏ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Trying to Surprise the Reader
➐ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: The Problem with Flashbacks
🧩 Bonus Advisory - You MUST Do This 🧩
➑ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Rich Fictional Settings
➒ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: No Really, When Do I Get Readers?
➊⓿ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Planning Your Story Saves Lives
➊➊ 🌱 Bonus Seminar: Writing Drama
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②⑧ ✍️Writing Tip: Characters, A Big Entrance

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By HeyMysty

It doesn't matter how interesting your characters are, if they don't make a splash when they first appear.

When you introduce a character, they need to leave a strong first impression. In their first scene, you need to tell your audience who this person is and what they're all about.

This doesn't mean it can't be subtle or clever. It just means that whatever your character does, that should encapsulate them. Let's give examples by looking at some of the cast of Winnie the Pooh.

If you were introducing TIGGER for the first time, what would you do? Tigger is a loud, boisterous, fun-loving tiger who loves to BOUNCE, so...

When he appears, he should probably be loud, boisterous, and indulge in one his infamous bouncing tackles. He shouldn't just walk in and say hello. 

What about Eeyore: a slow-talking, tired, and incredibly gloomy stuffed donkey?

Well, he should probably demonstrate how gloomy he is. He will throw out some deprecating remarks, slouch, and generally seem like a sad sack of potatoes.

And what about Winnie the Pooh himself?

He is innocent, jolly, endearingly dimwitted, likes to sing, and loves "HUNNY". So SHOW your audience that, the second you meet him! 

It takes a lot practice to get this right, but it's important to try early on. To show your audience as much as you can as quickly as possible, remember also the word:idea ratio (see that chapter for more), because you've got to keep things moving. Don't tarry!

Another tip to make your intros memorable is to SPREAD THEM OUT. In the very first Winnie the Pooh film, we are introduced to each of the characters individually. So, allow  each of your characters to hold the spotlight before bringing in someone new. It really helps, no matter the genre or the story!

A word of caution, though. Don't forget who the main character is. It's great to have a rich cast of players, but don't let them get out of hand!

It's probably worth talking about this, actually.

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