hokkyleaf RUNNING TOWERED HER. but a StarKlan cat named Bublesfor [ what is that even supposed to be? Bubblesfur? ]
jumped infront of her screamign NPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP. [ once again with the 'nope' ]
She jumped in ftorn of her scremaign and HolyLeaf hit him insted!1!1! He died. [ well that escalated VERY quickly ]
StarGlean woudl have ben really upset but her kits were coming. [ oh shoot yeah forgot about that ]
She almost creamed out in paun but she wais a string brave tac and so she didnt. [ she was a 'string, brave tic-tac' is what I'm reading. ]
It hirt allot. [ Well yes I can imagine giving birth does hurt ]
Dhere was alot of piano in her stomich [ that must be extremely uncomfortable to have a piano in her stomach. I hope for her sake it wasn't a grand piano ]
AND SUDENLY TTHERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWERE111!1! [ thanks for letting us know. we definitely weren't aware ]
SHE LOOKED DOWN AND THEIR was BRAKE in her stomchi. [ possibly a car brake?? does that mean we could've stopped her before?? ]
Hillyleaf was finished with bubbleFur so she was coming tword her agein. [ WOAH I WAS RIGHT IT WAS BUBBLEFUR ]
"NOOOOOOOOO STARGLEAM WHALED." [ Canon. Starstar is a whale ]
But just as HOlyLeaf was about to hit her..... IT WAS BLUESTAR! [ so hold up. the rest of the clan was just letting 'Holyleaf' attack a pregnant she-cat? I know that she's annoying, but come on. ]
Starglem wtchad in ANGR [ woah woah starstar calm down no need to be so ANGR ]
as BlueStat nocked Hollyleaf over and she put her claws in her throt. She made HoluLeaf unconsece. [ oh I'm sure it'd do a lot more than that ]
But be4 HolyLeaf went blak she svratched BlueStar"s! There was red bloud comiming from her chest!111 [ red blood. In oppose to green blood or magenta blood ]
"I love you JazzPaw I lways have." iad blueStar when she deid. [ hold up what. ]
BLEUSTAR NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" said GleamStare! [ bleustar? like the cheese? .. I'm sorry this is supposed to be a sad moment I'll be quiet now. ]
She was sad. And jhe hurt from her was going to be so HRAD!11! but looking at BleStars body filled her with GOPE. So she pushed. [ so looking at a dead body made her hopeful... okay ]
AND THE KITS CAME OUT!111!1! [ oh boy. here we go. ]