—okay so this story tbh is pretty good, i mean, the storyline is a bit all over the place and murky, but it's readable and understandable. the grammar is an issue that can always be edited, so the book overall is good.
the cover once again is fine, i'm just being me hehe.
xxDemellexx :D
—i also forgot to mention that you don't need to credit me in your description/s/whatever because i dont particularly care. if you do it's also fine, i just don't need the recognition i suppose. i'm happy doing what i'm doing :)