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HA...YA...NA...
Shravan: sumo tum mazak kar rahi ho....heina...??
Sumo: nahi shravan....I'm serious....tum bhi tho yahi chahthe the....Muje yahan se kahi door bechna....lo ab mein jaanekeliye ready hoon...
Shravan: sumo...vo mein....
Nanu: suman.....hum sab jaan chukka hoon tum dono ek dusare se pyar karthe hei...tho phir beta tum kisi aur se shaadi kyu karna chahthi hei....
Sumo: nanu mein kab kaha ki mein shravan se pyar karthi hoon....agar muje shravan se pyar hota tho uss din mein chachiji ki baat maan letina...
Sorry nanu....mein jaanthi hoon aaplog chahthe hei ki mein shravan se shaadi karu...lekin ye mumkin nahi hei....
She looked down on her plate....she knew that his gaze on her....
Shravan: nanaji....ab muje chalna chahiye...bahuth raat ho chukka hei....
He stood up from chair....nd walked towards the door...he wanted to look at her once more...he turned around while he realized that her gaze on him....
Shravan: sumo....apna gayal rakhna....(he said with a teary eyes..)
A lone tear escaped from her eyes....
After one week....
He didn't call her,didn't meet her throughout the week...it was too difficult for him to live without her when his heart filled with pure love...nothing else....
One day......he called her....
Sumo: he...hello....
He closed his eyes when he hea her voice...
Sumo: hello shravan....shravan...
Shravan: vo mein....
Tum kaise ho....
Sumo: mein teek hoon....aur tum...?????
Shravan: hmm...I'm fine...
Sumo: ek baat poochu...
Shravan: hmm..
Sumo: tum itne din yahan kyu nahi aya....meine bola issliye??
Shravan: kyu aana hoga muje....??kisse milne keliye...
Sumo: vooo...vo....naanu baar baar pooch raha tha tumhare baare mei...
Shravan:sirf nanaji....heina....???tum muje milna nahi chahthi ....??
She sat on her bed....
Sumo: mein kyu chahungi ki tum avo....muje tumse koi kaam nahi hei...
Shravan: ha I know....tum uss din bhi yahi kaha tha na...issliye nahi aya...kyunki tumhe koi pareshani na ho....
Sumo: aaj phir call kyu kiya..?
Shravan: aaj shaam ko mein vahan ayunga....ready rahna...
Sumo: aaj shaam ko....kyu..?
Shravan: doctor ke paas jaana hei tumhare checkup keliye....
Sumo: mein nahi ayungi....agar muje jaana hoga tho mein khud chali jayungi...aur ab mein bilkul teek hoon....
Shravan: mein tumse pooch nahi raha hoon...bata raha hoon...ok...
Sumo: acha....kis haq se tum muje lejaogi..
Shravan: I know muje tumpar koi haq nahi hei...par aaj tumhe mere saath chalna hoga...ye tumhari health ka sawal hei...doctor se milne ke baat mein tumhe ghar drop karunga....don't worry....
He cut the call...
Sumo: itne dino baat call kiya...aur aiseee....mein nahi ayungi.....pagal aadmi...
Evening time...7pm
Shravan: naanaji...mein sumo ko lene aya hoon doctor ko dikhane keliye...aap kaise ho...
Nanaji: mein teek hoon beta...
Rachna zara suman ko bulake avo...
Rachna: ji babuji....
At suman's room...
Rachna: tumne abhi tak ready nahi huyi...shravan aya hei....aur babuji tumhe bula rahi hei...
Sumo: mein nahi jayungi uske saath...
Rachna: acha...tum kuch zyada hi bakwas karne lagi hei aajkal....itna acha ladke ko meine aajtak nahi dekha....hum sab ne ye sab bhool gaya...aur usse tumhari baare mei har cheez yaad hei....
Sumo: vo sab uska naatak hei...mein jaanthi hoon usse....sirf kuch dino keliye hei...uske baat phir se vo khussa wala chehra leke mere saamne ayega vo...
Rachna: maanthi hoon baba....tumse zyada koi nahi jaanta usse...issliye tho hum sab tumhare saath deraha hei...tumhara har faisle mei....ab avo...
After some time....
Sumo: nanu mein bilkul teek hoon....doctor ke paas jaane ki koi zarurath nahi hei...
Nanu: nahi beta....issbar mein shravan ka saath hoon...tumhe uske saath jaana hoga...
Nanu: par var kuch nahi....jao....
Sumo: teek hei nanu....lekin sirf aapkeliye....
She looked at him....
Nanu: ha teek hei....
When they were about to leave...
Nanu: shravan beta....ek baat bolna bhool gaya....suman ko ek acha rishta ayi hei...ladka acha hei....dilli mei buissness kar raha hei...ghar Mumbai mei hei....suman ne haa bol diya.....
Shravan was shocked to hear this...his breath skipped a bit....
Shravan : nanaji hum chalte hei...
Nanu: teek hei....lekin ek baat mei bolna chahtha hoon...tum bhi zindagi mei aage bado...suman ki tarah....isse acha ladki tumhe mil jayega...
Sumo: haa nanu teek kehraha hei shravan....ab tumhe bhi ek achi sanskari ladki se shadi karna chahiye...jo bilkul meri opposite ho...
Shravan: chale....
Both of them sat on the car
Sumo: aaj ke baat tum meri chinta karna chod do...muje kuch bhi zarurath ho tho mein apna would be ko bolungi...
He couldn't control his emotions anymore....he started the car with maximum speed...
Sumo: shravan ye kya hei....muje dar lag rahi hei shravan....accident hojayega...
She put her hand on his shoulder....
Sumo: shravan plzz gadi aram se chalado...plzz....mereliye....
He stoped the car n ithe side of the road....
He wiped his tears....nd looked at her...
Shravan: mujse aur nahi hoga sumo....mein itne dino se tumhare bina kaise jiya hei ye tum nahi jaanthi....aur aaj tumhari shaadi ke baat sunne ke baat saans bhi nahi leparaha hoon mein...
Sumo:par kyu shravan....jab aditya ke saath mere shaadi karane keliye tum mar raha tha....shaadi ka saare responsibility khud udaya muje khud se door karne keliye....aur ab mein khud ja rahi hei ....
shravan muje nahi pata tum ye sab ab kyu bol raha hei....hum dono ne mere hospital jaane se pehle decide kiya hei ki hum dono ab kabhi nahi milegi...ek dusare se door rahegi...hum dono jab dekho ladtha rahtha hei....uss vajas se hamare family ko bhi problems face karna pad raha hei....issliye mein iss shadi keliye ha kaha...muje tumse koi problem nahi hei... lekin hum dono ek saath nahi rah payega....ye mein jaan chuki hoon....
Shravan: sumo tumhara vo letter padne ke baat mein kaise yakeen karu tumhari iss jawab ko...
Sumo: ohh shravan meine kitni baar kaha hei vo letter ek bewkoofi thi meri...muje yaad bhi nahi hei vo letter mein kab likhi thi....uss letter ki vajas se tum apni zindagi barbat mat karo...
Shravan: doctor wait kar raha hoga hamara....hume chalna chahiye...sorry muje ye sab batana nahi chahiye tha....
At hospital:
Doctor: ab suman tum bilkul teek ho....bas apna health ka gayal rakhna...time pe khana aur time pe sojana...zyada stress mat lena.....
Sumo: ok doctor....
Shravan: thank you doctor....thank u very much....aapki vajas se aaj sumo...
Doctor: nahi nahi....mere vajas se nahi tumhari vajas se Mr. Malhotra.....
She looked at his face....
Ms. Suman aap bahuth lucky ho aapka honewala pati aapse bahuth zyada pyar kartha hei....aur tum dono ka shaadi mei mein zarur ayunga...muje buladogi na??
Sumo: ji doctor....
Shravan looked at her in confusion....
Sumo:hum chalte hei...
Doctor: ok bye...
They walked out from there....
Shravan: tumne aisa kyu bola hamare shaadi mei unhe......invite.....
Sumo: ho shravan....tum kis baat ko leke baiti ho...
Doctor ne kaha tum dono ka shaddi mei bula dena....
Meine kaha...ha....
Tum apna shaadi mei bulado....
Aur mein apni shaadi mei bulaungi ...teek hei??
Ab chalogi....raat hogaya hei...
They were in the car going back to tiwari killa......
Suddenly a stone hit on the front glass of the car...,.he stoped the car...
Sumo: shravannnnn......
Shravan: sumo....tum teek heina...kuch hua tho nahi....
He cupped her face...
Shravan: sumo tum gadi pe baito....mein dekh ke aata hoon...shayad kuch problem hei vahan....
Sumo: nahi tum mat jaana...dekhona vahan police kuch logon ko maar raha hei...kuch bada problem hua hei....
She said while holding his hand...
Shravan: sumo...hume yahan se jaana hei...issliye mein kisi se pooch kar ata hoon...tum yahan baito....yahan se mat utarna...ok...
He pulled his hand from her hold .....
He was walking towards the spot...
Man: sir aap kahan jaraha hei....vahan mat jao....police aur kuch logon ke beech maar peet ho raha hei....vo log sab ko mar raha hei....ek minister ke bête ko kisine maara hei....issliye ho raha hei ye sab..
Shravan:ohh...mere gadi hei yahan...aur hume iss raaste se jaana hei....
Man: yahan se jaanahi saktha....aaj raat bilkul bhi nahi....aapko aaj raat koi aur jagah pe rukna hoga....aur main ab tho main road pe bilkul bhi nahi....vo partywale log pure dilli mei goom raha hei...
He felt someone holding his hand....
Shravan: sumo.....meine kahana vahan baitne keliye,....yahan kyu aya....
Sumo: tum yahan....
Suddenly a stone hit his fore head....he wrapped his arm around her...nd covered her body with his...
Shravan: sumo....avo mere saath.....
He made her sit on the car...nd he sat beside her....
Sumo: shravan....ithar dekho....
Shravan....khoon.....ye kaise....
Shravan: .ek chotasa chot hei....
Sumo: chota ho ya bada ho....abhi ke abhi hospital jaana hoga...
Shravan: tum pagal hogay ho kya..?hum yahan fas chukka hei...ab ghar bhi nahi ja saktha...saare raaste band hei...yahan se kahi aur gadi park kartha hoon...hum main road pe nahi ja saktha....
Sumo: kya..??hum ghar nahi ja saktha...??matlab aaj raat kahan rukenge...
She asked while tearing her dupatta .....
Shravan: car ke andar....
Pehle yahan se chalna hoga....
Sumo: lekin kahan??
Shravan: muje nahi pata...lekin ab hum main road se nahi jayega...
Sumo: ek minute....
She cupped his face....nd made him to face her....then slowly she covered his wound....shravan was staring at her lovingly....
Shravan:(to himself)I know sumo....tum muje pyar karthi ho....par muje nahi pata tum ye sab kyu kar rahi hei....
After sometime he stoped the car in a forest area....
Sumo: tumne ghadi kyu roka..?
Shravan: puri raat muje drive karna hei kya...?
Sumo: lekin yahan....
Shravan: mujpar viswas nahi...mere pyar par viswas nahi...ek aakhri baar trust karo...mein tumhe nahi khane keliye nahi laya hoon yahan.......
Sumo:light tho on karo.....kitna andera hei yahan... muje nanu se baat karni hei...vahan sablog pareshan hongi...
He switched on the light inside the car....
Meine apna phone nahi laya....tum apna phone dogi...??
Shravan:phone kitna bhari hei...jab bhi bahar jaogi phone saath mei nahi rakhna.... ye lo...
He gave his phone to her....
She dialed the number....
Sumo: nahi mil rahi hei...
She stepped out from the car....
Sumo: hello nanu...
Nanu: suman beta...tum log kahan hei...tv pe vo news dekhkar hum sab pareshan tha...tum dono teek tho heina....?
Sumo: nanu aap chinta mat karo....hum dono safe hei....meine issliye phone kiya..aaj raat mein ghar nahi aa payungi...
Nanu: shravan heina tumhara saath....tho phir muje chinta ki koi baat nahi....aram se aana...
Sumo: ji nanu....
Later....
She was sitting on the back seat....he sat beside her....
Shravan: sumo ek baat mein tumse poochna chahtha hoon...ye jaanna mereliye bahuth zaruri hei...
Sumo:hmm...poocho...
Shravan: sach mei tum ab mujse pyar nahi karthi....
Sumo: nahi shravan....hum dono ke beech jo kuch bhi hua uske baat mei tumhare saath shadi nahi kar sakthi....
Shravan: it's ok....meri galti hei....meine bahuth bura kiya hei tumhare saath...tum khush hona iss shadi se....
Sumo: ha ofcourse issliye tho mein ha bola hei...
Shravan: tumne dekha usse...I mean baat ki usse...
Sumo: ha...hum dono ne ek dusare ke bare mei jaana...bahuth bathe ki...acha ladka hei....ameer hei...height weight character sabkuch perfect....
A lone tear escaped from his eyes...he turned his head to hide his tears.....
He held her hand...
Shravan: sumo I'm sorry...jo kuch bhi meine itne dino se tumhare saath kiya uskeliye...aur ab mein sirf tumhari khushi chahtha hoon...tumhari baathon se lagraha hei tum iss rishte se kitna khush hei...aur mein tumhari khushi ke beech mei nahi aana chahtha....mein hamesha tumhe sirf dard diya heii...mein tumhe apna zindagi mei zabardasti nahi lana chahtha...kyunki muje khud nahi pata mein kis tarah ka insaan hoon...shayad mein tumhe aur dard diya tho....
Tum khush ho tho mein bhi khush hoon....
Sumo: thank u shravan....aur ab tumhe bhi aage badna chahiye...shadi karna chahiye....
He smiled at her....
Shravan: sojao....mein bahar hoon....
Sumo: bilkul bhi nahi...tum bahar kyu jaogi...tumhara car hei...tum yahan baito...aur sojao....
Shravan: lekin tum comfortable nahi....
Sumo: mein sorahi hoon....goodnight....
At midnight....time12-30....
She slowly opened her eyes....she was looking at him....he was in deep sleep...his mouth was slightly open....
Slowly she held his right hand........nd she saw some scars clearly visible on his hand....the scars that she gave him when she was dieing....
Tears brimming out from her eyes....
She placed a soft kiss on his palm.....nd whispered sorry.....
She caressed his hair gently....nd placed a kiss on his forehead...
"SORRY"
FLASH BACK...............
Nanu: suman....shravan ko kitna bura laga hoga ye baat sunkar...shravan tumse pyar kartha hei...aur tum uske ssamne tumhari shaadi ki baat ki...
Tumse bahuth zyada pyar kartha hei shravan....bahuth zyada...aur hum sab vo pyar dekha hei....
Sumo: mein shravan se usse bhi zyada pyar karthi hoon nanu....
Mamiji: kyaaaa??
Par tu tho kisi aur se.....
Shaadiii.....
Nanu: beta tu kehna kya chahthi hei...agar tum shravan se pyar karthi hei tho kisi aur se shaadi karne ki kya zarurath hei....
Sumo: muje bas aap sab ka saath chahiye....mein job hi kar rahi hoon hum dono keliye kar rahi hoon...
Mamaji: saaf saaf bolo suman...
Sumo: mein sirf ek shaadi ka natak kar rahi hoon....shravan ke saamne....
Ye ek pareeksha hei hum dono keliye....
Hum dono ek dusare se bachpan se pyar karthe ayi hoonn...jab jab hum dono ke beech jagada hua tab bhi hamare beech pyar tha na....phir bhi vo pyar hum nibha nahi paya.......muje sirf aaj shravan ka pyar nahi viswas chahiye....
Aaj tak shravan ko mujpar puri tarah viswas nahi hua hei...
Usse muje prove karna hoga usko mujpar pura viswas hei...agar sumo usse pyar karthi hei tho usse chodegi nahi....
Uske saamne meri shadi ka news,vo ladka, shadi ke functions sab kuch hoga....lekin usne ek bhi khalti ki ho tho sumo aur shravan ka kahani vahan pe khatam....
Jab aditya ke saath mera shaadi karne jaraha tha tab usse ye nahi pata tha mein aditya se nahi shravan se pyar karthi hoon...lekin aaj usse pata hei mein usse pyar karthi hoon....kyunki aaj mein aap sab ke beech ho ...mein sirf shravan keliye ayi hoon...
Meine bhi bahuth khalat kiya hei uske saath...aaj bhi kar rahi hoon...
Aaj mei khud ko prove karna chahthi hoon...mere har faisle mei shravan mera saath dega....vo faisla kitna kadva kyu na ho....
Agar shravan haar gaya tho mein bhi haar jayungi.....
Nanu: lekin beta ye sab karne keliye koi bhi ladka taiyyar nahi hoga....
Sumo: hoga nanu...meri ek college friend hei....saleem...vo yahan dilli mei stage shows aur drama karthe hei.....mein usse baat ki....iss natak mei mera saath vo dega....uska shadi tho already ho chukka hei...
Nanu: suman....muje kuch teek nahi lag raha hei...kuch gadbad huyi tho....
Sumo: kuch nahi hoga nanu....muje pata hei aaj shravan badal chukka hei...issliye mera saath nahi chodega....mere faisle mei mera saath dega....sab kuch acha hoga...
Mein aur shravan jeethunga nanu...bas aap sab ka ashiravad aur saath chahiye muje....
Nanu: hum sab isme tumhare saath hei beta...tum khud ko prove karungi....shravan ko tujpar pyar aur viswas dono hei...
FLASHBACK ENDS....
She placed her head on his chest.....
Sumo:(in mind)
Shravan....bahuth dard de rahi hoon na mei....bas kuch hi dino ki baat hei....uske baat sumo tumhe kabhi dard nahi degi...sirf tumhe pyar karungi....tumhe pata hei ussdin mein mar rahi thi tab tumne jo kuch bhi kaha tha vo sab aaj bhi muje yaad hei....
She raised her head....
Ek ek word muje yaad hei.....mein sirf tumhareliye ayi hoon shravan...muje zindagi bhar iss dadkan sunna hei....
she put her hand on his chest....nd closed her eyes to hear his heart beat....
Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Main jeeti hoon mere paas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Mera hasna pagal jaisa
Mera rona badal jaisa
Sab lagta hai mujhe khaas
Jab tum hote ho
Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Rehte ho honthon pe zikr banke
Dil mein ho tum hi fikr banke
Tumse hi toh mila pyar saara
Kya mujhme hai mera sab tumhara
Mera hasna pagal jaisa
Mera rona badal jaisa
Sab lagta hai mujhe khaas
Jab tum hote ho
Mein jaanthi hoon tumhare dil mei aaj mereliye kitna pyar hei...aur mein tumhare saath ye sab kar rahi hoon....
Her eyes welled up with tears....
plzz tumhe mereliye jeetna hoga shravan....I LOVE U SO MUCH.....
Aur jab mein tumhe iske baare mei bataungi tab muje maaf karna....karogi na..??
Koi khalati mat karna....varna hum door hogi shravan...ye mein bardash nahi kar sakthi.....tab mein sach mei mar jayungi....
Suddenly he unknowingly wrapped his right hand around her shoulder....
She bite her toungue nd closed her eyes....slowly she raised her head...nd realized he is sleeping peacefully...
"kumbakarna'
she smiled looking at her sleeping lover.....
FINALLY DONE....
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