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So I went back and read over this story and oh Lordy there were so many mistakes and so many grammatical errors and so many things I could have done to make it better 😂 but ya know honestly I wrote a good 80% of this on my phone without my spell check and it's just absolutely horrific let me tell you I cringed so bad. Well anyways I was curious and had this idea while I was going over it and just wanted to see what anyone would say. I was curious about taking this book and making it new and improved but changing the plot a little. Like giving it a new ending but mostly fixing these grammatical errors. Anyways I was just curious would any of you like a new and updated version of this book? Comment and give me some ideas and feedback and I'll make it happen.