sweet southern love

By ybbtespidergirl

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two teenagers became good friends then fall in love and want nothing but to spend the rest of lives together... More

chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10

sweet southern love(nanowrimo13)

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By ybbtespidergirl

A/N this story is based on real people I own all the people in this story

this takes place in Marianna AK

Bess has long blonde hair and blue eyes. she about 5.7. she loves to listen to her music mostly rock and country. her birthday is July 17 1983. She drives a old vw beetle color pink. She met Dominic when they were both in 10 grade.

Dominic has sort black hair with brown eyes. He is about 5.8 he loves to draw and loves to draw pictures of Elisabeth. He drives a 2000 red flatbed ford pickup. He is born in May

It was a warm summer night they were both laying the back of Dominic red flatbed ford truck. He had his arm around Bess as Taylor swift played on the radio. She had lost in his brown eyes putting her head on his chest. Dominic looked up at her kissing slowly before they fell sleep in each others arms. Bess had always loved Dominic but a long time has passed before she told him she loved him with all heart. Bess could remember when she started talking to him after a long time and found feeling for him again.

That day

The first time they talked on facebook she knew that liked him the same way she did in highschool. When Dominic came one this time instead of calling her Hun he wrote hey baby I missed you. Bess wrote back hey sexy missed you. He told her he wanted to see her because there was something he wanted tell Bess he couldn't say online. The next she met him at the park. When Bess saw Dominic pull up in that truck her heart skipped a beat. They sat on a bench and talked.

"Bess I wanted to tell that for a long I've had feeling for you." He grabbed her hand holding it Dominic when in for a kiss it was on of sweetest kisses she ever had. She turned to him smiling.

"You want me to be your girlfriend."

"Of course baby I want you and only you." He put his arm around her pulling her closer to him. Bess put her head on her his shoulder as Dominic held her tight.

"Baby lets get in my truck and drive somewhere to be alone." They got into Dominic's ford pickup and drive to field with a lake. When they got the field Dominic pulled out a blanket sat in grass lying down taking Bess by the hand and pulling her close to him. She loved how he put his arms around her holding her tight. Dominic could tell her hair smelled like strawberries and lilies and he loved that smell. They started to kiss long and good, this was the best day of Bess's of life. Dominic got up and put on the radio the song that was playing was "the world is our tonight" and turned to Bess.

"Honey that's our song. You wanna dance." He grabbed Bess hand and the two started to dance. Bess love the way hands felt against her hips. She put her head on his should soon they were kissing. Dominic's kisses were so sweet. As they were dancing and kissing it started to rain. They didn't care and just kissed some more. Then Dominic and Bess ran to the pick up and they sat in each other arms. He drove to his home all he know was how he want be with Bess all night long. He took her into his bedroom. Dominic threw her a dry shirt he could tell that Elisabeth was cold.

"Honey why don't you climb into bed and I'll be the in a minute." Dominic crawled into bed wrapping Bess in his arms, Bess put his head on his chest smiling back at him. Dominic kissed her forehead looking to her blue eyes. This was everything Dominic dreamed about for years

When they were highschool

Dominic never forgot the first time he met Elisabeth. She was the amazing girl he laid eyes on.

Elisabeth was sitting at the lunch table listening to music the first time Dominic met her. He went to up Bess, he was nervous.

"Hi what are you listening to?"

"Staind that's your named I'm Elisabeth Morris."

"Dominic Corbin." They both looked each other smiling. Bess could tell she was getting on crush on him and she knew he was really cute. He sat next to listening to sing his heart slipped a beat. He knew at that moment he was in love. He took out his sketch pad and started to draw her. When his pencil fell to the ground they both when to grab it and their hands touched and everything felt good, even though it was just for a second. Dominic would feel his heart flutter. The next two days Bess and Dominic sat together at lunch. All they could think about was how they were falling in love with each other. Bess noticed how sweet he was that made her fell more in love. When she was on bus she put on her Britney cd and just played the song "that's where you take me" and would think about Dominic. Soon they became good friends still thinking about how they wanted to be more than just friends. Elisabeth best friends could tell she was in love.

"You like Dominic right."

"He is so cute and sweet. I really want to go out with him. But we've became good friends. I'm afraid what he'll say."

"I think he likes you too. I've seen the way he looks at you. He is cute darling."

One year later

It was time for the prom and Bess was the only girl that Dominic wanted to take to the prom but he was afraid she didn't like him that way, or it was ruin their friendship. So he asked out so random girl. When they two got the prom Dominic saw Elisabeth in a long pink gown with her hair flowing down the back of the gown made his heart skip a beat.

"Bess you look so amazing in that dress, I love that you did with your hair. "

"You look real handsome." Dominic want to ask Bess for on slow dance but couldn't work out his nerves he had no idea he would get his wish to dance with her.

"We're gonna crown the king and queen of the dance. Our king is Dominic Corbin and our queen is Elisabeth Morris. Time to the spotlight dance." "Two People Fell in Love" started to play and Dominic put his arm about Elisabeth. She put her head on his shoulder and being caught in the moment Dominic kissed Bess at this time Bess didn't want this moment to end. She kissed him back it lasted for 30 second to them it felt like lasted for a life time. After the prom, Dominic and Bess sat out of the gym and talked the dance. Smiling as they sat close together.

"I can't believe that we won the crowns." All Dominic could think about I can't believe we kissed what do I say how about we go out with each other and kiss some more. I love you.

Bess turned to him waiting to hold his hand or holding he hold hers.

"That was a great prom I loved the dance together." All Bess could think was I loved that kiss I want to ask him out so we can kiss more. God I love him. On Monday they showed up playing like that they never kissed. They didn't forget out but the kiss. They were both single but they never wanted address their feelings. The next day Dominic wasn't at the school, everyone would tell Bess was lost without him she just sat there in daze. Her best friend Marie came up to her.

"What a matter you miss Dominic."

"Yeah I do."

"Why don't you ask him out already I saw the kiss? Everyone could see the chemistry."

When they are together

Dominic woke up look at Bess lying in his arms, slowly kissed her lips. She woke up and could see that Dominic still had his arms around her. Bess looked at him with a smile.

"I love you. Last night it was perfect."

"I love you too Hun. I loved you for so long. I'm glad you're finally mine."

"I feel that same way too." Dominic and Bess looked in each other eyes and just kissed. Dominic took Elisabeth home long enough to change. She came out wearing a pink sundress with matching pink sandals. Dominic's heart dropped.

"You look incredible I can take your pic."

"Thanks of course." He pulled out his cell phone and snapped her pic. Dominic drove to their spot this day it was really hot. They decide to take a dip in the lake. When they jumped in Dominic went it for a long underwater kiss, it was sweeter underwater.

"Honey that was an amazing kiss. You wanna kiss again."

"Sure anything for you." They drove underwater for one more kiss, Dominic had his arms around Bess. She never wanted this moment to end but knew soon they need air. When they came up Dominic still had his arms around Bess. Elisabeth gave him one more kiss. Dominic went to his truck and put on some music. The song that was playing was the one they danced to in prom. This was Two People Fell in Love by Brad Paisley.

"Babe that was the song we danced to at the prom."

"That was the best night of my life. You know I never forget about that kiss." he jumped backed into the water kissing Bess soft and sweet.

"I never did either."

"That was the night that I know you were that one only one for me. I wanted to ask you out that night."

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