Why is romance so cringy?
Example: (play the music above) (( read in romantic voice ))I looked into her orbs and she looked into mine. I smashed my lips against hers and we kissed like no tomorrow. My tongue touched hers and she was okay with it. I pushed her against the wall. It was the moment of our lives. Lick Lick Lick Kiss Kiss Kiss Mwahhhh. I twirled her hair and we hugged then kiss again cause you gotta love that kissing right? MWAHHHHHHHH
Sorry if you cringed, laughed, cried, or felt disturbed. I did get the point across either way and you are probably now getting therapy... sorry about that.
Why This Is Annoying: Aren't you supposed to make the reader enjoy the story? (Also sorry if you cringed.)
How To fix this: It makes me really uncomfortable when I am looking through my stories and find a book like an example. It is really cringing to read and I stop reading because I did not enjoy the experience. Try and make it so the reader will actually enjoy the little romantic moments. Re-read your chapter before you publish it. If you can't get through the lovely Dovey stuff than fix it till you do feel comfortable.