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By OvercomeSummer

Author: destinywriter07

Book: In Another World...MERGED, and Undercover Princess: East and West

In Another World...MERGED

Kailey wakes up in a body alien to her own. She isn't in Icestia anymore; she's strapped to a medical bed in a hospital located in some place called Parktown. She doesn't know anyone, yet they all seem to know her. None of her friends and family are around; no one's there to explain. She has to find out why by herself. Kailey goes with the flow in the body of the girl she's come to know as a certain Kirsten Hope. Her whole life has hit reset: new school, friends, atmosphere and life. When she finally thinks that her previous life is gone forever, there's a weird feeling tugging at her heart. It isn't just a feeling; it's a sensation; a sense. It was something that entered her body ever since she fell into the sea. It is ice. Soon, she finds herself torn between the truth and two separate, ultimately different worlds. Two different people. Two different lives. She either goes back home, or stays forever. Whatever her choice is, there's no going back.

My Review

This story had a very interesting beginning. As you make you way through Kaileys tale you feel sad for her. As you go on you meet a very interesting man. As destinywriter07 explains a little about this character I was like, ' I like him, smart and cute'. Have you ever read something and in your head, you kind of put yourself in the story were you could hear the environment that the setting is at. I have and it was weird. There was a point were the characters were in a car accident and I could hear it happen. It scared me. In Another World, does have drama but not to much were your like 'stop, just stop'. It's on a perfect level. So if you have dramafever this is for you.

Undercover Princess: East and West

Fifteen-year-old Cana Gabrielle is the princess of the West Cities. Oh, the perks of being a princess--not. The Seventh War of Cities is about to begin, and the North, South, East and West are going to clash swords. One night, her parents send her on a treacherous mission into the East to spy on the rival king and queen and report back with the enemy's battle plan. Cana discovers many untold secrets, several of which are too unbelievable to tell. With the fate of her kingdom lying in her hands, Cana learns how to spy; and devise her own battle plan.

My Review

It scary how good the dialogue is in here. The first two chapters in was hook and couldn't get enought. The moment I got to the last chapter I was surprised how Cana was acting. You can already tell what is going on just looking at the summary so what are you waiting for.

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Happy birthday and unbirthday to all those boys and girls out there.

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