Naruto of the Sand ( editing...

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What if Naruto's parents never die but instead the lord third did in they're place?? What if they neglect Nar... More

Meeting Naruto Namikaze Uzumaki ( RE-EDIT )
Meeting Gaara of the Sand
New Family
Forgetting the forgotten
Days before the Chuinn Exams
Good to be back................................... ' YEA RIGHT '
We always cause trouble it's our habit, blame Kankuro
The Chuinn Exams Begins
Part 1 of the Chuinn Exams begins NOW
Welcome to the Forest of Death / ' Gaara help.....'
SOOOO...... ( smut )
please be alright Naru
IM Sorry Naru
should we start where we left off or so we thought
Father?????
Preliminary part 2
Preliminary Part 3
Preliminary Part 4
One Month later / 3rd Exam begins
END Part 1 / 3rd Exam Part 1
everything comes to an end Part 1
everything comes to an end Part 2

Preliminary

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* cough cough *  umm does anyone else want to retire??? oh umm i forgot to mention that from now on it will be individual battle so you may raise your hand based on your own judgement " explained Hayate, Memma got mad " Kabuto why are you leaving " asked / yelled Memma " I'm sorry, Memma but my body is all beat up " explained Kabuto then he left but not before he smirked once again at ' Rasa ' then walked away " I'm sorry Memma and Sasuke, i wish i could play with you more but I'm a spy after all, i just cant reveal my true face here " thought  Kabuto as he left through the door " you're job of gathering information is done " thought ' Rasa ' 

everyone looked behind them then face forward to continued the test, Sasuke started having pain on his left shoulder " ugh.....the waves of pain are becoming more frequent " thought Sasuke as held onto his shoulder " Sasuke-kun, i knew it " thought Sakura as she looked worry " umm now * cough cough * there are no more retiring right??? " asked Hayate for the third time just to make sure " huh?!!! " said Sakura as she looked around " S-Sasuke-kun, you should also quit the preliminary " said Sakura making Naruko and Memma look behind them " you have been strange since that Orochimaru guy attacked us, the mark still hurts right " asked Sakura " what mark " asked Memma " you wouldn't know since you knocked out right when the fight started, remember the weird guy that attacked us he gave Sasuke this weird mark on his neck " explained Naruko making Memma sour because he knocked out early in the fight 

" if you continue " trailed off Sakura as she remembers the words of Orochimaru ' i gave him a going away present, Sasuke-kun will seek me, to seek power ' Sakura was about to raise her hand but Sasuke stopped her " stay out of my business " said Sasuke " Sasuke you don't have to be so stubborn " said Naruko as she folded her arm " yea you bastard!!! stop acting all cool!!! idiot Sakura is worried and " yelled Memma but was cut off by Sasuke " Memma i want to fight you " said Sasuke but the pain came back " ugh " moan Sasuke in pain " i thought so " said Minato " what should we do?? " asked Ibiki " we should remove him from the exam and have an Anbu watch over and protected him " demand Anko as she walked over towards them " he's won't agree that easy * everyone looked towards the voice * since he's from the Uchiha clan after all " said Kakashi, after auguring about Sasuke they agree that they wouldn't tell his parents and that he could stay throughout the exam

Naruto couldn't help but over hear they're conversation " Orochimaru!!!! that snake bastard is here " thought Naruto as he made a fist, Gaara looked over at him " Naru is everything alright " asked Gaara " yea just peachy " said Naruto making Gaara give him a weird look " that bastard just wants him body, he must have given a curse mark but how can i take it out without getting to close to him " thought Naruto " um now * cough cough * now let's begin the preliminary * cough cough * this preliminary will consist of one on one fighting so you will basically fight as if in a real life confrontation " said Hayate making everyone pay attention to him " since we now have 22 entrants, we will conduct 11 matches and * cough cough * umm the winners will advance and to the third test " said Hayate after that an electric scoreboard showed up against the wall " this is an electric scoreboard will show the match-ups for each battle. Now, this is sudden but lets announce the 2 names of the first tight " said Hayate making everyone look up waiting for the name to show up then a few sec passed 

* Sasuke Uchiha vs Yoroi Akado *

everyone was surprise but Sasuke was smirking and so was that Yoroi guy " no way!!! why does Sasuke have to..?? " thought Sakura as she was shocked " now these two entrants come up to the front " said Hayate, all rookie 13 was wishing Sasuke good luck in their thoughts " now, we will start the first match so will everyone except the 2 participants move to the upper level " said Hayate making everyone walk the stairs except for Naruto, Gaara, Kankuro and Temair shunshined 

everyone was walking over to their sensei " hey Kakashi-sensei " yelled Memma but what everyone didn't notice was Kakashi giving Sasuke advise in not using his sharinagan and the effect its has on the curse mark which could cost in his death, everyone was just staring at them from up above waiting for the match to start " be care Sasuke " thought Kakashi " now, please begin " yelled Hayate 

( alright the match is the same as in the manga expect for Naruto's fight  )

* Sasuke wins * 

once the match was over Kakashi shunshined behind Sasuke who was sitting on the floor " good job " said Kakashi, Sasuke was having trouble moving an inch " that bastard, took the remaining bit of my charka " thought Sasuke as he looked down at his hand trying to move his fingers but couldn't. everyone was shock at Sasuke was able to beat him without using any jutsu, at that time the medical ninjas came to take Sasuke and the other guy " Sasuke Uchiha, let the medical team treat your injuries now " said one of the medical guys as the others took Yoroi away  " you guys aren't needed, i'll take care him " said Kakashi then he knee down behind Sasuke " I'm going to take you back and seal that cures mark " said Kakashi then he shunshined them away

Naruto saw everything and started to move back slowly so that no one could notice, once he was in the shadows he made a clone to take his place then he shunshined " umm we will now start the next match!! " yelled Hayate making everyone look at the screen up in the wall 

* Abumi Zaku vs Shino Aburame * 

everyone was waiting for Shino and Abumi to make their way down stairs and once they did " we will now begin the match between Abumi Zaku and Shino Aburame " yelled Hayate having everyone excited except for Hinata who was worry for him " ready and start " yelled Hayate. during this time Kakashi had finish writing the seal on Sasuke body with ink " all right! hang in there, just a little longer " said Kakashi as he did multiple hand seal and was about to touch Sasuke until a voice stopped him " stop right there " yelled someone making Kakashi stop and look up thats when he saw someone come out from the shadow " i don't think thats a good idea " said Naruto as he walked closer to them " Kakashi got into a fighting stand " calm down............... whats your name again " asked Naruto " Kakashi Hatake " said Kakashi making Naruto nod " Naruto " said Naruto " i know but what i don't understand is what are you doing here " asked Kakashi 

" i came here to take out that seal plus your seal is never gonna work " said Naruto Kakashi looked disbelief " what do you mean take out the seal and how do you know my seal is not gonna work " asked Kakashi " ugh omg i hate explaining things " mumbled Naruto as he sigh making both Kakashi and Sasuke sweat-drop " i know my way around a seal, my father taught me as a kid so i grew to love making seals if it wasn't for him that is. i gonna take out that seal that snake bastard put on him " explain Naruto " how do you know Orochimaru?? " asked / yelled Kakashi " long story " said Naruto as he didn't want to give out to much information 

" i want to know why are you helping me, i thought you hated me " asked Sasuke as he was confuse to why someone like Naruto was helping after everything he's done to the blond " yes i do hate you...............a lot but i hate that snake bastard more and i don't want him to have his way and thats why I'm helping you so be grateful " said Naruto as he walked towards him and took out a scroll, he bit his thumb to draw out blood " summoning jutsu " yelled Naruto as he placed his blood on the scroll and the room filled with smoke all they head was a  * puff *  sound

once the smoked clear Kakashi and Sasuke saw this little fox on the floor which confused them even more " Naruto-sama you summoned me " said the little fox " I'm removing one of Orochimaru seal so please stand by and yet ready once i warn you " said Naruto making the little fox nod then move outside of the seal " Kakashi if you'll excuse me " said Naruto making Kakashi move out of the way 

Naruto wiped the sealing mark around Sasuke neck that Kakashi had placed " well...................this is gonna hurt and you're gonna feel it a lot, so................. lets begin " said Naruto as he made really fast hand sign that even Kakashi couldn't copy with his sharinagan " unsealing jutsu " yelled Naruto and he place one hand over Sasuke shoulder while his other hand was supporting the other 

" ughhhhh " yelled Sasuke in pain " just a little more " thought Naruto as he saw that something black was coming out from Sasuke shoulder " Haku get ready " yelled Naruto to the little fox who nodded as he moved closer to them, after a few sec Naruto threw the black thing on the floor that turned into a snake who try to get away but Naruto's fox stopped it from running away 

" phew " mumbled Naruto as he wiped off sweat from his forehead " there the seal is off so you shouldn't have any more problem " said Naruto as he walked over to his fox and took out a scroll. once again Naruto did really fast hand sigh " sealing one thousand years jutsu " said Naruto as he seal the snake in it " thats solve this problem " said Naruto as he turned back towards to Kakashi who was shocked and Sasuke who was knocked out 

" a thousand year sealing jutsu " questioned Kakashi " oh that yea, its one of my own " said Naruto sounding proud " i better get going " Haku the fox as he *puff * " i better get going too so see ya " said Naruto as he shunshined before Kakashi could ask anymore questions then need  

....................TO BE CONTIUNED 


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