Reviewed by Hipstersheep
To belowsealevel
1| Plot: 8.5/10
Awesome plot! Keeps the reader hooked and wanting for more. :) A bit cliché, but hey, what book doesn't have at least a little bit of cliché?
2| Grammar + Spelling: 8/10
The spelling is good, but there are some mistakes. The same goes with the grammar. But it was only a few mistakes, so that's okay. I know some chapters were unedited but there were a bit of mistakes in the edited chapters as well. I only found one run-on sentence.
3| Cover: 9.5/10
The cover is lit. Seriously. It's awesome. 'Nuff said.
4| Summary: 7.5/10
The summary is on point! It actually made me really interested to read it even though I don't usually read books like these. No grammar mistakes or anything. :) The only reason I didn't give it a 8 or 9 is because the summary emphasized on Lulu's locket, but it wasn't really that much in the book itself.
5| Chapters 6.5/10
I think the chapters are a little bit too short. Maybe you should make it a little longer, since there are some chapters that could be merged and not separated into two different chapters.
6| Character Description 9/10
I love the way you describe the characters. You describe Lulu as not being perfect, and as I have seen too many perfect characters nowadays in books, she seems more real. The way you describe antagonists as well make me just want to kill-
Just kidding. Sorta. Not really.
7| Consistency 9/10
Your writing style doesn't change, throughout the chapters so far everything seems to be very consistent!
8| Title 7/10
Interesting title, but I'm not exactly sure yet of its relevance to the story? Maybe it's just because you've only uploaded a couple chapters, idk.
9|Paragraphs 9/10
You separate everything very well. Easier to read since nothing is jumbled up together or anything. (:
10| Description Skills 10/10
OM. I'm jealous of your descriptions skills. The way your started it off too was so amazing.
So your final score is 84/100! Am I being too harsh? Idek.
My rating of this story is 4/5. I recommend this story to people who like reading romance books (99.99% of the ppl on Wattpad XD jk). Pretty good story all in all, and what I really liked about it is your description skills. Go and add it to your library guys!