"It's so adorable! Even though you had limited tie to develop your characters, you showed them perfectly through their actions. Deserves way more notice than I currently has."
MusicxThunderstorm
"I decided I might as well read this. :) I'm in love with the way you described her drowning. I've never tried it, exactly, but I can imagine how hard it would be. For me, anyway, haha. :) I plan on reading more as soon as I have the time" @Sparkes
"Like this a lot! It's so atmospheric from the start and I can really picture it. Plus good cliffhanger...now to part two! :)"
"Loved it from beginning to end. Brilliant, magical and have such beautiful images in my head. :) Well done and please write more like this."
morganalefay
"Great descriptions. Nothing like the white, sugary sands of the Gulf coast. Thanks for the Ded. I'm downloading your next story now."
Kadee33