Ahkmenrah: The Fourth King of...

By HackedByAWriter

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He was prepared to say his last prayer. But the blow never came. Instead his saw the Nubian fall to the groun... More

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Copywright
Prologue
Chapter 1: Race
Chapter 2: Wrath of the Pharaoh
Chapter 3: Banquet
Chapter 4: The Tablet
Chapter 5: Fair "Maiden"
Chapter 6: The Heirs
Chapter 7: Three Ways To Kill A King
Chapter 8: Cobra
Chapter 9: The Knife
Chapter 10: Poison
Chapter 11: Sea Storm
Chapter 12: Big Brother
Chapter 13: Self Defense
Chapter 14: Crocodile Tears
Chapter 15: Resurrection
Chapter 16: Long Live the King
Chapter 17: Dreams of Serpents and Victory
Chapter 18: The Storm Has come
Chapter 19: Being Reckless
Chapter 20: Fear Silence and Secrecy
Chapter 21: The Crown of the Nile
Chapter 22: The First Flash of Lightning
Chapter 23: Dark Horse
Chapter 24: Ramses the Great
Chapter 25: Wild
Chapter 26: Learning of Sargon
Chapter 27: Keeping the Peace
Chapter 28: The Messenger
Chapter 29: The First Blow
Chapter 30: Man, Woman and Child
Chapter 31: Remembering
Chapter 32: Nightmares
Chapter 33: Threads of Mortals
Chapter 34: This War
Chapter 35: Martyrs
Chapter 36: Have Faith
Chapter 37: The Most Spectacular Fashion
Chapter 38: Fight Song
Chapter 39: Blood Gold and Lions
Chapter 40: Conquered
Chapter 41: Defiance
Chapter 42: New Hope
Chapter 43: Phase One
Chapter 44: Vengeance
Chapter 45: Most Dangerous Job
Chapter 46: Thirst and Hunger
Chapter 47: A Promise
Chapter 48: Return of the White Lioness
Chapter 49: Thirteen
Chapter 50: Hathor and Sekhmet
Chapter 51: Fame and Glory
Chapter 52: Pain
Chapter 53: Life and Death
Chapter 54: The In Between
Chapter 55: Death March
Chapter 56: Lies
Chapter 58: Rogues of the Nile
CHapter 59: Embody
Chapter 60: Heated Moments
Chapter 61: Food is Power
Chapter 62: Love and Hurt
Chapter 63: Raging Hearts, Nervous Smiles and Sentimental Slop
Chapter 64: Shattered Rain
Chapter 65: Strangeness and Honor
Chapter 66: Old is Gold
Chapter 67: Flesh and Bone
Chapter 68: Heartless
Chapter 69: Scars to her Beauty
Chapter 70: Love's Labours
Chapter 71: And This
Chapter 72: A Race
Chapter 73: Guardian
Chapter 74: Knives in Hearts
Chapter 75: The Plummet
Chapter 76: Method and Madness
Chapter 77: War Against Love
Chapter 78: Monster
Chapter 79: Blind Fools and Thieves
Chapter 80: To Kill A King
Chapter 81: A Clash of Swords
Chapter 82: The Truth of Kings
Chapter 83: The Plunge
Chapter 84: Of Whores and Mothers
Chapter 85: Fire and Water
Chapter 86: The Winged Soul
Chapter 87: The Smile
Chapter 88: The Throne
Chapter 89: Threads of Silence
Chapter 90: Racing the Sun
Chapter 91: Queen
Chapter 92: Exile
Chapter 93: Gifts
Chapter 94:
Chapter 95: Just Like Old Times
Chapter 96: Queen Slayer
Chapter 97: An Ambrosia of Ashes
Epilogue 1/3 - The Stories of Our Lives
Epilogue 2/3 - Who Would Want to Live Forever?
Epilogue 3/3 - King of Kings

Chapter 57: Tears

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His muscles were tensed and hot burning in the searing sun. Ammon could see nothing but darkness. Time may have passed, time may not have. He was not sure. All there was, was the burning sands against his skin, blood like fire in his veins, the painful greed of hunger and thirst.

He felt faint. He couldn't tell if he had slipped in and out of consciousness all he saw was black. Whenever he could feel himself falling forward or too the side he could hear the shouts of fellow comrades telling him to stand straight. Tchanun's voice the most passionate of them all. After all Ammon had taken his place in this punishment. But it was worth it, for what Tchanun had done was something great. Defiance. That was best thing that had happened in the time they had been on this dreaded march.

Peril surrounded him.

His hands were bound behind his back, his feet bound as well as he knelt. Ten spears, angled towards him surrounded him in a circle. They were tipped with poison. Any wavering, any wayward sway he was dead. This meant he was unable to sleep for feel he might fall unto his death. Hence the calls from his comrades every time he wavered, in order to keep him awake.

The first few hours had been easy, but unconsciousness threatened to be the end of him.

Tchanun looked on. He wanted to cry but it seemed as if all water had been taken from him. He could not produce tears. But tears or none the guilt and gratitude were the same. He could not move at all, save every time Ammon swayed in the direction of the death tipped spears that was when he called out with all his heart and soul. He did not want Ammon to die for his sake, and for his cowardice.

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First there were whispers. So tempting so seductive, but he could not make head or toe of them. Maybe that's what attracted him towards them. The avarice for knowledge.

Then vivid colours settled. Then he saw her, Ismara with a small child in her arms. She looked at him with such sadness that he felt a twinge of guilt grapple at his heart. He hadn't protected her as was his duty. He approached her, she looked up at him with her sad grey eyes.

"Ismara...?" Kahmunrah breathed out.

"Kahmun...don't...please" she pleaded softly.

He came closer to her. He hated to see her like this so sad and broken. He tried to embrace her. To give her comfort, if not completely at least let her know he was there for her. But as soon as they touched she vanished and he was left with a newborn baby in his arms.

The baby smiled and cooed. And he recognised the child as his own. Tears welled in Kahmunrah's as he held the baby boy close to him and kissed his forehead. The scene around him shifted until dark mauve clouds surrounded him. The billowed about him sending flecks of sand towards him. Soon the flecks turned into a full He turned and bent over holding baby boy closer to him to protect the child from harm.

The winds stopped and he felt the harsh scratching of sand on his back cease. He looked up. There was a huge magnificent Pyramid made from mismatched white stones. Upon the Pyramid stood a large throne made from gold and upon it was a figure.

A sudden intense passionate curiosity burst through his soul. He had to know what was atop that magnificent Pyramid. So with the child still in his arms he stood up and made his way towards the Pyramid. He could feel the stones beneath him fracture and sink under his weight as he took his first step but nonetheless he climbed up the Pyramid. The time it took to reach the top seemed to stretch on. As soon as he was sure he reached the apex another ten thousand steps seemed to be laid before him. But with grim deathlike determination he made his way up.

After what seemed like years, he finally reached the top.

The throne was a magnificent thing gold, encrusted with the finest and rarest jewels he had ever set eyes upon. A myriad of colours shone with their own light, giving the throne and ethereal glow.

Upon the throne was the slim, crowned figure of no one other than his younger brother, seemingly asleep.

"Ahk!" he exclaimed. "Wake up! What are you...."

He trailed off seeing the dark crimson blood running down his younger brother's neck in three perfect rivulets. A impeccably thin straight incision embellished his throat. The crimson also coloured his lips a tiny creek of blood running from the corner of his mouth, down his chin meeting the slit at his throat. It all looked so flawless and beautiful, in a strange macabre way. But it shocked Kahmunrah to no end.

"No..." he whispered under his breath, something clasping at his throat so neither a sob nor another word escaped him. He looked down at his hands, hoping that the forever-smiling cooing baby could offer him the little comfort he desired. But the baby no longer remained in his hands.

There was blood on his hands!

His eyes widened and he sucked in his a breath. He wanted to scream, to curse the gods, to curse his own existence. But nothing escaped his lips. He looked back at the throne that had glowed with such beauty and life now was as dull and as grim as death itself.

Ahkmenrah's body vanished, leaving behind grey ashes. The stones beneath his feet started to crumble. He looked down and realised that they weren't stones, but on fact human bones. He was standing atop a pyramid of bones.

A huge gust of wind blew in his face, he shielded himself with his bloody hands sending splatters of crimson to his face. The now grey dull stone throne cracked and crumbled as the bones gave way beneath him.

For the first time he was a able to cry out for help. But by then it was too late. He was already engulfed by darkness.

Kahmunrah awoke with a jolt. Then a searing pain erupt throughout his body, he merely grimaced at the pain and got up. He realised his body was slick with cold sweat. But that was normal considering what he had seen in his dream. He felt it again. The power that had coursed through him. He pushed the memory of the dream away.

No! He will not let the tablet control him! He was not allowed to think it true! Maybe just maybe if he forgot this prophetic dream (for every dream from the tablet was prophetic) he might just be able to evade fate.

He sucked in deep breaths, controlling the powerful surge of emotions that threatened to burst through his sanity. His felt convulsive sobs rack his body, and welcomed fully the tears that came with it. Sometimes tears can offer relief, they can be the one thing that keeps you from driving insane, they can be the only thing that can bring you back, they are the one things that prove you have a heart.

He leaned against a wall and let it all out. The sobs shaking his body, heaving it till ached all over. Right now he needed Ahkmenrah. He never appreciated how much his younger brother could help alleviate his worries as much as he did now.

(A/N: What do you think the dream represents?)

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Khufu leaned back. A huge grin plastered across his face. The workings of his mind could now rest. They were sure to win this battle. And then...then his real ambition would be in place.

As long as the gods agree to help them all will be well. He needed to call a council. The plan had to commence as soon as possible. He wanted his crown as soon as possible.

Khufu was doing the right things for all the wrong reasons.

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