Felled Leaf what hare you doing here" said StarGlean. "I'm here to dilevere a propheci." [ Yes, because that makes sense. A cat who isn't a clan cat, in StarClan, delivering a prophecy. Ok, gotcha. ]
He he said."I allredy kow about the propheco." [ unfortunately ]
she siad. "out of the darknedd, stargl will come and get rid of the evil tigger and holy." "Thast not one I mean." [ oh fantastic, there's another one. ]
Said Falleb Leaf. "I mean....theyr are dayk throats in the forst." [ we are aware of that. ]
"w?" [ WHAT DO YOU MEAN, 'what?'. YOU WERE KILLED BY THE DARK FOREST. DO YOU HAVE SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS OR SOMETHING. actually that would explain a lot. ]
said GlStarGleam "U see ther are still cast who dont belive in Starclan." [ nooo, really. I mean, it's not like cloudtail or mothwing are alive at this point, right? and plus, if they are in the dark forest, I'm pretty sure they believe in StarClan. I mean, STARCLAN IS RIGHT NEXT DOOR TO THEM. ]
"WHAT SIAD GLEMASTARR AFTER EVERTTHING IVE DON FOR THEM HOW OCULD TEHY" [ yeah, after everything you've done, I'm surprised they haven't assassinated you. ]
"The Dork Forest is tacking over theri minnds. Said Falled Leave. There using ClodTail and MotWig tu help them. [ Yes, because cloudtail and mothwing are evil. ]
So you must.... Start..... a war... ON THE DAERK FRSOT!11!1!##! [ this is going to go well ]
Weave all ben watting for you GleamStar." [ we have? ]
And then he luft. [ yeah, thanks for the information we already had. ]
Starlgeam dint have any tim to thick=====think becuse some1 called her nam!
"STarGleam" called SpotedLeaf. "Its time for you to b riencarted." [ DANG IT SPOTTEDLEAF ]
"YAY" [ NO ]
said Gleamstar. Thery was a portle. She locked at the portel. It was suierling 7 brihte. "Go in thru there" siad BallStar. [ NO DO NOT. Blackstar, do NOT give Stargleam back! WE DO NOT WANT HER ]
He loked said that Stargleam codnt be with him but she new hed be ok. She nugled him he felled better. [ ugh ]
then she wandred what woldu happen. "We ont know for sure." omitted BeluStar. "But it worked b4 itl wokr agaen.' [ for the clan's sake, I hope it doesn't. ]
StarGkeam was abuut to step into the purtel ehwn.... SHFUR!11! [ ASHFUR, NOT NOW. ]
"NO" HE SAID" I WNAT HER FOR HIMSELF" [ DON'T PULL THIS AGAIN. YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENED LAST TIME ASHFUR ]
"quick StarGleam getting" said hestering towered the portle [ I'm shocked, she almost spelled 'gesturing' right, I am very impressed. ]
Justs as she was about to jup in..... HawkAShfur pushed aginst her! [ wait, what.]
She was nocked forwered into the suirling purtle!111
She lookced back to se....ASHFUR Had cOm BACK ThRU TO1!11!1 [ DANG IT ASHFUR. ]
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