MaNan - Childhood Best-friend...

By mananhamesha

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It's an another version of kaisi yeh yaariyaan I will try to focus not only manan but all of the main charact... More

Note
Character sketch
SORRY
chapter 2 - Abhi Toh Bas Shuruvat Hai (2)
imp note
chapter 3 - Mumbai
chapter 4 - shopping
chapter 5 - Woh aawaz
note (dress)
i have to do it again
chapter 6 - First day
chapter 7 - Partners
space & apartment design
Note
chapter 8 - Finally Friends
chapter 9 - Its them
chapter 10 - Antakshari with twist
BREAK
new cover
chapter 11 - movie
chapter 12
happy new year
Slow updates
Vote plzz

chapter 1 - Abhi Toh Bas Shuruvat Hai

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By mananhamesha

hola howz everyone...my first chap...
there is a note at the end do read it..chalo ab start reading
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Jannat Mansion

Manik's pov

Manik: nandu... plzzzzz ruk jao plzzz I am tired guys.. rahem kardo is bechare par plzz

Nandini: cabiir tumne sunna THE MANIK MALHOTRA ne please kaha 😱

Cabir: haan yaar nandu yeh toh gajab hogaya

Alya, dhruv, Abhimanyu, navya, Aryaman and Sapna were trying not to laugh but because of nanbir they couldn't control and started laughing like manic including nanbir and manik was giving a cute little angry pout and on other side Mukti was tiptoeing coming toward them and

All: muktiiiiiiiiiiii
Alya: Mukti u spoiled my dress and made an almost crying face

Seeing every one ponce on her but she escapes and starts running and they following her...

Present

Mukti: kitne cute lagrahe hai na bhaiyu

Cabir: hmmmm

Cabir in mind: pakka ye unhai yaad karahah hoga...I wish hum sab jaldi mile... I know koi kehta nahi but we all miss US soo much....

Mukti snapped in front of cabir and

Mukti: bhaaiii.... kaha khogaye...come on don't u remember what are we here for

Cabir: ha...haan...kuch nahi...chal lets have some funnn (rubbing his hand)

Mukti and cabir in usion: 1...2...3....

And a bucket full of chilled ice water was on manik

Same time Manik's pov

I was having such a cute dream remembering our best days of our lives but wait what happened why do I feel as if I am I all wet wo bhi itna thanda as if I am sleeping in snow wait I think actually it did snow or something lekin mein toh ghar mein hoon oh shit chat se tip tip barsa pani and woh bhi Australia mein (buddhu) and I waked up in a jerk and what I saw was enough to make me boil in anger, they were not other than my lovvvvely siblings aka evil twins with me drenched in ice cold water

Manik: ahhhhh!!! Pagal ho kya tum log, yeh kya tarika hota hai kisiko uthane ka wo bhi itni thand mein, subha shubha neend kharab kardi

Cabir: well... kumbkaran if you have forgotten let me remind you ke

Mukti: ke we have to go to Mumbai today itself (note that scarsam) aur agar hum thoda sa bhi late hue then u know momsy kia karenge

manik: toh you could have waked me up thoda achche se (glaring Mukti Cabir)

Cabir, Mukti: achcha baba we are...not so sorry

and they ran from there as manik would have killed them right there only.

Pagal he murmured and went to fresh up

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All were shouting for breakfast banging spoon on table and in kitchen Neyonika was smiling seeing them act like kid but while coming

Neyonika: kya hai...aarahi hoon naaa, chillane ne ki kya zaroorat hai....and you mr. malhotra.... aap bhi inke saath bachche bangaye

Mann: toh kya hua can't I even act like kids with my kid haaah....

And made that fake angry pout with others. And at the same time manik came saying

Manik: chordo naa momsy .... bechare mere daa ko kyun dant rahe ho.... he is kid only naa.... With sarcasm.

And that was it Mann started running after manik all around the house jumping on sofas climbing on bed but manik got trapped and fall on the bed and raised his hand up in the air saying

Manik: sorry sorry sorry please chordo naaa... a...agge se aise nahi boloonga plzzz

But Mann did had mercy on him instead he started tickling him and laughing and giggling was all around making the house feel like heaven... finally they stopped breathing heavily

Mann: chalo wanna tumhari momsy will kill us and then tum India ke bajaye uper hoge mere saath

And they started laughing again and went down. By that time everyone started eating and was almost finished

Neyonika: aagye aaplog.... ab jaldi se kalo or else you all will be late for the flight

By this they ended their food took their bags and went out. Fab5 looked at their house for the last time. Mukti was in Cabir's arm hugging him and silent crying and dhruv creasing alya's hair to calm her down. they were silent all the way to airport.

Neyonika: Mukti alya bachche don't cry naaa.... achcha listen we will come soon to meet u guys thik hai

Mann: haan.... Aur waise bhi you all r good and strong girls naa then...chalo wipe ur tears

Cabir turned mukti to him saying

Cabir: I hate tears pushpaa.... oooppps ab kya karoon tum log toh do ho aur kisi ka namm pushpa bhi nahi...ok so line cancle

All in union: CABIRRRRRRR....

They heard the announcement "passenger boarding flight no ***** Melbourne to Mumbai please report to gate no **"

Neyonika: chalo bachchon apna khayaal rakhna, call karte rehna and any problem just give us a call and will be there

Mann: khayal rakho apna bye

And with this everyone hugged Mann and Neyonika and bid bye to them.

In plane manik was sitting on window seat with Cabir at their back was dhruv and alya and at the front of Cabir manik was Mukti on window seat with a guy so it was like

¤¤ ¤¤¤ ¤¤
¤¤ ¤¤¤ dhruv alya
¤¤ ¤¤¤ Cabir manik
¤¤ ¤¤¤ ¤ Mukti
¤¤ ¤¤¤ ¤¤

(Rows are this way if u didnt got me)

(Tv and colour of seats )

Manik (in mind): why do I feel as if ajj I will get something that is really close to my heart as if we will meet ...no no this is impossible...ufffff pagal hogaye ho tum manik...aisa kuch nahi hoga(mind)............but I hope aisa ho, I miss them soo much not only me, we all miss them soo much(heart)

Mukti: omg he is soooooo hot yaar but why do I feel as If I know him bohot achche se

Precap: nandini side (same day same time)

Ufffff finally my fingers are hurting...do let me know how is it by comment and don't forget to touch that choootu sa star

Guys I don't want to force you guys to comment but if u guys comment then I can know how it is going and weather u guys like it not

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