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By Thelovelygirlgroup

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Intro and Rules
Form
Life Behind Closed Doors
When Dreams Come True
Variable X
Stranded
Cracking Zeenath
Beauty of the Beast
The Giant Guy
Broken Until Him
GONE
Love washed ashore
Don't Forget To Breathe
Natalie's diary
My Collection
Infinite Love
Mr. Richie Rich and Ms. Popular
Perception
ARMED AND AFRAID
Dark Depths
It All Began With A Simple Date..
Affliction
Gravity
Only Stars Know
She is Mine

Just Breathe

61 3 1
By Thelovelygirlgroup

Title - Just Breathe

Subtitle - Let the world know how scary your thoughts are !

Author - @awesomeATC

Genre - Poetry

Let's start with the ratings first...

Title - Title very well goes with the poems you write. So I give 4.5/5

Poems - Your poems are amazing. But... ( I will tell you later ) So I give 4/5

Cover - Cover very well goes with the whole poetry and title. So I give 4/5

Now let's talk about poetry...

Your book is 7 in poetry and that is actually good. I liked the theme of your book very much. Coz people like me become very sad at times and need something like your book.

Your poetry also gives motivation but the situation makes the reader more sad or depressed. But that is the reason your poems are famous so continue in this way only.Also there were no spelling mistakes.

I checked each and every line but was not able to find even a single non-rhyming word. That means you think a lot. Also I liked that you have given warning that these poems may be triggering or sudicial so read at your own risk.

Overall Story rating I give 4/5

Reviewer - @Passionofwriting

Good job !

Keep Writing !

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