Structure.

By iamjanessaelliot

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Sequel to Heart Under Construction. More

Sequel
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 5
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 9
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
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Chapter 15

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Part 1


Shay POV
1 Week Later

I woke up by the feeling of a cold, empty space...

I thought to myself for a second and automatically wondered what time Carter was gonna be back tomorrow. I could barely think because I was sooo deeply asleep...

Carter was gone for 5 days and depending on how his aunt in Texas felt, he was supposed to me coming back tomorrow.

He was taking care of his aunt and her son because her husband was deployed to Afghanistan 7 months ago so she needed help to juggle everything since her son, Mateo, started acting out because his father wasn't home. So Carter needed to give him a talk to remind him exactly why his dad was gone...

I understood the situation and supported it but I still felt like I haven't seen him in foreverrrr 😩

I breathed out for a second before I looked at the clock on the nightstand to see 1:08 p.m.

I stopped squinting my eyes from the small, thin rays of light coming through our huge room so I could wake up.

I slowly rubbed my tired eyes and continued to lay under the silky, thick covers until I suddenly remembered what day it was.

My mother's birthday.

I breathed out stressfully because I didn't feel like going through the sad thoughts even if there wasn't a lot of them.

I wanted to just be cuddled up with my baby today but I think he forgot about it because he was said he was gonna be gone part of the day today in Texas running errands for his aunt.... I also think it was errands for his schooling that he's enrolling in when he decides which branch of education he's going into, which I'm so proud of him for doing for himself and for us 😌.

His aunt is a collegiate admissions director so it was nice to see him getting closer and closer to what he was gonna do...

I slowly sat up in the amazingly comfortable bed while thinking about going somewhere so I wasn't by myself, when I suddenly smelled something.

I scanned our master bedroom to see multiple white and red rose petal trails with small candles lit.

I was in shock for a couple of minutes because that meant that he came back a whole day early for me.

I felt my heart and cheeks heat up like fire before I put my hands up to myself before giggling.

I looked on my fiancé's side of the bed to see a part of a white rose peeking out of the covers.

I laughed a little bit because my heavy sleeping almost dismantled it.

I carefully grabbed the delicate flower before I studied it for a second and ran my fingers over the baby soft petals.

I smelled it and smiled again at the gentle scent.

I shook my head for a second at how amazing my fiancé is at surprising me when I was always the one that did the surprising for everybody.

I sat the flower down and got out of bed to feel my toes landing on a fluffy little red petal.

I smiled and stretched before I started to walk on my soft, gentle trail.

This specific trail let me to the bathroom. I slowly walked as I tried to stop smiling at the view.

He had the whole bathroom decorated in candles and rose petals.

I looked at the tub to see a brand new Victoria's Secret set on the top of the huge bath tub, along with my gray silk robe and a selection of bath bombs that I've been wanting to try out.

Next to those, was a note.

I grab the crisply folded white paper and opened it.

Because you need to let some of that stress out of your hard working body... Than continue to follow the trail -Mr. Johnson

I blush hard without caring. And I could tell by this little scavenger hunt that he wasn't here.

I breathed out still very excited and turned on the bath water.

I peeled my shorts and undershirt from my sore body and sunk myself into the hot tub as the bath bomb worked it's magic on my tense muscles.

I've been working 12 hour shifts to keep myself busy.

I leaned my head back against the porcelain tub and closed my eyes to get the full effect of relaxation...

Zechariah POV

"It's so damn cold" I spoke to Alisha. "I'm about to crawl up in yo hair honey" I added as I fixed my cardigan tighter.

We were in the grocery store in the freezer section getting meats and other things for this little dinner we were double dating on at my house.

We all just wanted to get together even though Carter has been planning this day for my big booty boo Shay since he texted me at 12, so their doing that.

I'm so happy that he makes her feel the way that he does. And the way they look at eachother.... 😍 Don't get me started honey yessss.

I looked at our cart and started to slowly push it away from the section.

"Girl I'm so excited for this food. My fat self is starving right n-" I continued to talk before I looked to my side to see that Alisha wasn't there.

I turn my head to look at Alisha to see her smiling warmly to herself while texting.

I smile at how happy she was and shake my head while pushing the cart again.

"Girl come on!" I said with a laugh...

Shay POV

After creaming myself up with my favorite VS lotion, I put my silky robe on.

After that, I started my way back on the trail of flowers.

I followed the next trail, which led to our closet. I looked on the island in the middle and seen another note with 2 big wrapped up boxes next to it with bows ontop.

I smiled at the view and grabbed the note.

Special outfit for a special woman. Put this on and get ready before you follow the rest of the trail.-Mr. Johnson

I opened the box to see a beautiful white dress that flowed at the bottom with a design at the tip.

I breathed out as I held it up.

My baby knows my style 😭.

I put it down after admiring it and went to the smaller box....These clearly must be the shoes.

I tore apart the purple and silver wrapping paper to reveal a designer box.

I seen the famous LV and other initialing for my new shoes.

Can't go wrong with the classics...

I opened the seemingly luxurious box and pulled the bag out carefully. I pulled out the heels carefully and started squealing.

These was some bad mothafuckas right hereeee :)

They were everything and especially because they were the same color as the design on the bottom of my dress, which was a pretty navy blue.

I damn near ran into the bathroom to get ready because I was so excited.

*45 Minutes Later*

After doing my little bit of makeup and putting water with some curly cream in my hair to let it be in it's natural state.

I finished slipping my feet into my new heels before I stood up and looked at myself.

I couldn't help but smile. I smoothed my dress down, getting a glimpse of my diamond glistening as I admired myself for a second...

I was so happy 😌

I breathed out before I started my journey back on finishing the trail.

I walked out of our room to the upstairs hallway.

I continued the trail of flowers down the stairs as I grinned.

I get to the bottom of the stairs to see another little note station.

This was the last one because the trail ended.

I opened the note.

You finished your voyage! 😃 Well.... Not exactly. There's a chauffeur outside that's been waiting in the front since I left this morning. He's gonna take you to the destination. I'm gonna take you somewhere... If it's alright with you of course Mrs. Johnson 😉-Mr.Johnson

I made the Carmello Anthony face. "Ighttt shootttt" I said as I adjusted myself.

I blew out all the candles just to be safe before I grabbed my purse that was next to the front door and headed out.

I locked the door behind me before greeting the guards. Their so sweet.... Or to me they are. Their built like big buff bears... But to me their teddy bears.

I look at the driveway to see a clean stretch.

I shook my head with my heart warm at how thought out my fiancé planned this... He always doing too much.

The chauffeur got out and introduced himself politely and I did the same.

He opened up the door for me and I seen that Carter still wasn't there.

I frowned a little because I wanted to kiss all over his sexy face.

There was a boutique of white roses in a circular box though.

I tried not to blush as I heard my door close gently.

I admired them and was grabbing the note when, Jeff, closed his driver's door after getting inside.

"Jeff, do you know exactly where your taking me or when I'll get to Carter?" I asked nicely.

I needed to know because I was feenin for my boo. Knowing he was close but wasn't with me was too muchhhhh 😩

He chuckled a little bit after putting his seatbelt on.

"Mrs. Johnson, I can't tell you any information of the plans tonight. Mr. Johnson specifically told me not to give in to your finessing skills that help to give you what you want no matter what it is... He said he does it all the time and that he can't help it but he told me to be strong because it's very easy to get 'played' by you because your so sweet and get what you want without even trying" He exclaimed with a chuckle as he started driving.

I had my mouth open at what he told him.

😟😒.... how dare Carter mess with my finesse game.

I stubbornly leaned back, tried not to smile and crossed my arms for a second... Trying to think of a plan to get some info but it seemed like it wasn't working.

I just grabbed my flowers and sat there gently moving my fingers over the fresh, soft petals....

*20 Minutes Later*

As I was looking out the window, heavy in thought, my attention was brought to.... Popeyes?

I cheesed and shook my head.

The driver went straight inside after we parked away to get enough space for the big limo.

I sat there for a second before Jeff came out of Popeyes with a bag in his hand.

He got to me and opened my door.

"For the lady...." He said as he carefully held out the bag to me.

I laughed and thanked him as I took the bag.

"Mrs. Johnson?" He said getting my attention after getting in the driver's seat and buckling his seatbelt.

I looked up at him as I tried not to smile.... Mrs. Johnson

"You have about 40 minutes before we arrive at our destination" he spoke.

".... Okay. Thank you" I said politely to the nice driver.

He nodded and rolled up the black window between our sections back up.

I sat there for a second before I started to grub on my food... Carter must have told him exactly what I wanted and because he knew that I would've have ate while waking up to such a intriguing trail...

*43 Minutes Later*

I watch the Los Angeles scenery passby before I realized that we were about to pull up to LAX.

My baby was already at the house today soooo what am I at the airport for....

Wtf? 😅

My window rolled down as I looked at the busy airport.

I must have been looking confused because the driver chuckled a little.

I let out a funny breath at the situation before Jeff got out and came to my side of the limo.

He opened my door and held his hand out for me. I took it after I briefly grabbed my purse.... I decided to leave the flowers because I didn't know what was gonna happen.

"This is your next destination. You need to walk about 30 feet into that entrance and you'll find another.... Clue" he finished with a warm smile.

I smiled back and thanked him before I walked into the entrance that he pointed to.

I just wanted to see my babyyyyy 😭

I went in the busy airport not knowing what I was even looking for.

I looked around for anybody that I knew or anybody with something that could signify a 'clue' for almost 20 minutes before I slowly started to move away from the crowd and to a corner so I could throw away my gum and sit down for a second because I couldn't find what I was supposed to be looking for.

I was kind of bummed because I wasn't gonna be able to find my clue.

I breathed out as I stood at the trash can and took my gum out while the loud airport echoed very loudly.

I slowly headed towards the row of chairs next to a huge window as I gently itched my eyebrow.

I stood infront of a chair and was about to turn around and sit in it when I felt hands on me.

I quickly realized how gentle they were. They slowly trailed from my hips to snugly around my waist.

Of course I automatically knew who's hands they were.

My cheeks heated up and I couldn't help but smile big.

I placed my hands on his as he softly kissed all over my cheek and neck... Since nobody was infront of me, I closed my eyes to take in the sensation.

After kissing all over me, he laid his face in my shoulder and breathed out.

"Heyyy" I softly spoke to him as I slowly opened my eyes.

"Hey baby" he said back like he had never left 5 days ago. He said that before lifting his face up and putting his cheek against mine.

He always smelled so good 😩

I turned around and looked at him and my nervous feeling got more intense... All this sexiness belonged to me 😈.

Carter is so fuckin fineeee 😩.

He had on a clean suit with his muscles still visible through it. His jawline was so strong and his lips was so sexy. His lineup was always perfect and his sexy little curls glistened...

Guess I was staring something tough and lost in him because he spoke.

"You just gonna stare at me with your juicyass lip between yo teeth or can I finally get me some lovin?" He asked with hands comfortably on my lower back with an eyebrow raised and a small smile playing on his lips.

I looked away and twisted my lips to keep myself from smiling as I put my head on his chest playfully to keep him from looking at me.

"Oh now my baby tryna hide huh?" I heard him say as I felt my head being moved by kisses.

I started laughing super loud as he kissed me fast everywhere and especially on my neck as I laughed uncontrollably while weakly trying to push him away.

He eventually stopped as he let out a deep chuckle.

I got it together and he was smiling warmly as he looked at me.

"Stopppppp" I said smiling as I put my hands infront of my face... I felt like I was still getting used to us being together when we've been rocking for a long time...

He just always made me feel so protected, safe and comfortable. I felt like a high school girl with a crush when I was around him sometimes... I loved the feeling but at the same time I couldn't stand it because my nerves would never be under control.

The effect he had on me was too muchhhh....

He held my hands and gently moved them away from my face.

"Can I get some kisses now?" He asked with a small smile.

"Hmmm... I'll think about it" I said as I slowly wrapped my arms around his neck.

"You'll think about it?" He repeated with his eyebrows raised.

I nodded my head as I looked at his lips as we both leaned in.

I guessss he can get some kisses 😋

His lips was so soft, the way his lips caress mine so passionately... Smh.

I swear I fall in love with him all over everyday.




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