So as I have been "editing" I have actually been re-writing more than I have been simply going through and editing stuff. I'm trying to keep the storyline the same, but I want certain things to play out differently. I want the story to have a little more impact, ya know? So from Author to wonderful, fantastic, lovely readers I HIGHLEY SUGGEST that you start from the beginning again. I promise that I will try my best to not disappoint you in all the fun stuff that happens in their relationship, I just want there to be more of that kind of stuff in the beginning of their relationship. I think I was trying to rush through this story and ended up ruining the plot I originally wanted. So again I ask you to please consider starting back at square one with me.
I love all of you with all of my heart and hope that this doesn't turn you away from the story. I really want you guys to see how this ends.
I'll try to update again tomorrow :)