First Impression: Love the summary and the cover! Excited to read :)
I love the idea of this story, and you have a great start! There's not much for me to say, because you only have one part published, but if you continue developing the story well, it will be great!
Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)
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- bluecrayonlady