I was stunned, not because of the piercing shriek in my ears from what we called 'our doorbell' but because of what elliot just told me. My Mother. Esmeralda Black would becoming. i new she would find some thing wrong in my children because that was the type of person she was, everything is wrong with everyone else but She.is.perfect. Nothing wrong with her right?. WRONG her once blonde hair hasn't been washed in years. she is an extremely overweight pure blood maniac. her eyes a blunt black, Here hair so greasy it looks like it was i piece of burnt bacon, she smelt of stale bread and old cigar. even worse is what she was wearing. a filthy overworn purple cap, an old black robe that was practically grey, a pair of bright green hightops they were disgusting i couldn't even stand looking at her. anyone would think we were poor, we however are not, the black family is one of the richest wizarding families in britain.
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