Book Reviews 2 [SLOW UPDATES]

By bluecrayonlady

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This is the second book for Book Reviews! The first one is completed, so please don't comment your request th... More

FORM!
Review #1: One Night, Alone
Review #2: Memory Shards
Review #3: The Elements: Air
Review #4: Hailey's Comet
Review #5: A Ripple in a Void
Review #6: What?
Review #7: Whispers of Spilt Blood
Review #8: Taken - Zootopia
Review #9: Wait For Me
Review #10: My Pretend Boyfriend
Review #11: Amnesia
Review #12: Timing A Runaway
Review #13: The Unspoken Words
Review #14: The Awkward McFlurry
Review #15: Falling for the Fallen
Review #16: Love at First Fight
Review #17: Pluto
Review #18: Sunset
Review #19: I'm Aurora
Review #20: Phone Calls
Review #21: That Boy At My Attic
Review #22: Before
Review #23: Stranded
Review #24: Awakening
Review #25: Saku no Akumu
Review #26: The Fox and The Forest
Review #27: The Wrongs He Made Right
Review #28: Midnight Promises
Review #30: Colored Pencils
Review #31: The Butterfly Effect
Review #32: Fading
Review #33: Astral Saga
Review #34: scintilla
Review #35: Never Too Late
Review #36: Essence
Review #37: Beyond the Fence
Review #38: Dear Mister Bully
Review #39: #24 Hours With A Stranger
Review #40: Pieces of Olivia
Review #41: The Complications Between Penelope Nelson & Ashton Wright
Review #42: Becoming the Perfect Bitch
Review #43: An Unexpected Serving
Review #44: Esthara: A Call for Blood and Peace
Review #45: Hayden Mackay and the Forgotten Kingdom
Review #46: Rebirth
Review #47: The Perks of Being Invisible
Review #48: A Tough Life
Review #49: Random One Shots
Review #50: Lollipops
Review #51: Dear You
Review #52: The 24th Hunger Games
Review #53: Forever the Best Friend
Review #54: The Beanie Boy on Plane
Review #55: The Truth or Dare Kiss
Review #56: The Boy Who Sat Next to Me
Review #57: Miss Heartbreaker
Review #58: The Girl You Knew
Review #59: Silent Angel
Review #60: Through the eyes of his bully
Review #61: Childhood Enemy
Review #62: Unclichรฉ
Review #63: Paper Trails
Review #64: Bonded
Review #65: Beneath the Marfa Lights
Review #66: Unhappily Ever After
Review #67: Oblivious
Review #68: The Omega Chronicles - Alpha and Omega
Review #69: All That Leads to You
Review #70: Delicate
Review #71: Saving Annabel
Review #72: Like Hurricanes
Review #73: Limerence
Review #74: Penance
Review #75: Chelsea Grins
Review #76: D.O.G.: Executive Order
Review #77: Broken Until Him
Review #78: Theodore and Jade
Review #79: The Longest Ride

Review #29: Zac and Zelda

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By bluecrayonlady

startri98

First Impression: cute cover!

I love the idea of telling the story through their letters, and you have great vocabulary/word choice. Your start is very captivating, and definitely hooks the reader on. What I'm confused by is why they are writing letters to each other, and why they are reminiscing about their past. Are they still together? Are these letters unsent letters? Maybe find a way to elaborate more on that. I like how the two characters have their own personality that fit together, and I like the way your story progresses. Great work!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you give one of my stories a read, follow me, or give me a shoutout. If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make something for one of my stories, and I will post it!

Please comment below a rating of how helpful this review was for you (out of 5 stars) Be honest, it will help me! Thanks :)

- bluecrayonlady 

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