First Impression: I love all the covers of your book.
This is a great start to the story! I like that the summary is short and cute, and easily hooks the reader in. The prologue has a lot of action and brings in a tense atmosphere that leaves the reader hanging off the edge of their seat. You have great vocabulary that helps with the descriptions, and I'm excited to see where this story will go! There are some minor spelling errors, but those can be fixed when you edit.
Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)
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- bluecrayonlady