Author's name: thatTJgirl
chapters I've read: 1
My opinion: your stories are really interesting especially this one but as i told you earlier you should consider editing your stories and i can help you if you want anyhow your story is really amazing and makes a person want to read it to the end, the characters are well described and funny too, the plot is amazing but as i said consider editing your stories and focus on the grammar
Rate: Intresting 7.5/10