Author's Name: JonieLax
chapters I've read: 1
my opinion: your description described the story well and it was full and long,despite other descriptions in other stories yours contained a lot of details which is something i personally prefer, for the first chapter it was a bit to long and it would have been better if it was in the character's point of view, and i found the names really hard to pronounce lol but nonetheless it was good, and sorry i rejected your story by mistake xD
Rate: Good :) xoxo