Author's Name: charmily123Hack
chapters I've read: 2
my opinion: i like the beginning it's really interesting fully described mysterious and adventurous! , i like the fact that your chapters are long, i like the humor of the triplets they are really funny espically whirlpool jackson he is so innocent, i think you should describe them more like their hair color and eye color but over all i love and i think you should continue writing it ^^
Rate: Excellent