This was really not that hard of a decision to make because I just had the epiphany of how horrible this "story" was and is. First off, it was not well structured, second I did not follow the 5 stages of writing, and last, I need to practice. I know that this was my first story and it should be shitty because it's the rookie story. In the future I will attempt to write a well-STRUCTURED story that does not suck ass. The good thing is that I will leave this here for your own enjoyment to laugh all you want at this and I might do a surprise chapter that I've had here for a long time, but for now, good bye. ~Maria
Hope in The Things Unseen
By mariloo2020
(Keep in mind that this was the first "story" that I ever wrote.) Maria Ruiz is twelve year old girl. She obs... More