Hi @clchic0729, I read your chapter 1, and yeah, I liked it a lot! A little advice, although your story is very good, I think it is a little too similar to a lot of storylines, and maybe trying making some plot twists? I've read a lot of teenage romance stories, and this one is not much different, but the writing skills and story is a little bit different.
And for someone people who write POV like me, I think you can try doing different variations of writing so your fans will adore you more! I don't have many, but I have achieved High Distinction in a writing National Competition before, and I have written a lot, maybe trying looking at my writings or maybe @MyLovelyWriter? She's very famous for her series Celeste Academy or sthing like that.
And by the way, I like your story title. Much more different than others.
Keep up the Good Work~!
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BloodyDireWolf xox