Chpater oen prouloge
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
(Shine bright like a diamond)
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly.(bitch better not be taking about hollyleaf)
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of."(Mary she much?) Said the gold (he's made of gold?!) tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
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She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
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