Our Spirits Within (discontin...

By mercur4

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Real Summary
A Loaf of Bread
Max POV
Not A Chapter
Charlotte and Ginger
Walk Like The Poor
Pudding Are You Sure?
Separate Rooms
The Rich Have Nice Beds
Alice
No One Lives Forever
Discontinued/Rest of Story Explained

After Dark

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By mercur4

Neo Chapter 6

While i was showing Alice how to steal properly,yes there was a proper way of stealing, I learned some stuff about her she was 7 years old and this was her first time in the outside world it turns out she was raised in a forest with a drunken maid to look after her so she was uneducated in the world and how cruel people could be I also learned that she was looking for her father so she could ask him an important question that she had to know it must have been important if it meant her leaving the only world and home she had ever known just to ask him i wonder what it was but i knew secrets should stay secret sometimes so I held my tongue "good good now you just have to come up with a back up plan if you're ever caught" I said when she finally completed some pick pocketing without being caught i had told her not to go after merchandise cause that's were the guards are always watching but they normally forget to watch in a crowd when a magician is showing off or when people get into brawls for some reason people seem to love them and even the guards love them so it's way easier to steal then cause everyone's thinking of the fight or the magic act and no one pays attention to some person brushing against you it's so easy it's why I taught Alice to do that instead of stealing from a stall with a guard

"Good you should be good enough now to survive by yourself now" I said after Alice had stolen from a guard while two street kids got in a fight about what i don't know but it provided enough distraction for Alice to be able to go up to a guard and steal his purse right out from under his belt it was her final test before i let her stop practicing her stealing technique Ii now know she can even steal from a low level guard so normal people should be no problem for her as long as she does as i taught her "really!?" she said excitedly jumping up and down like a kid who had just gotten her first present "yep" I looked up at the sky realizing for the first time that it was almost night "alright time to go find you an inn to stay at" I said as I started off towards the residential district where some cheap inns where they weren't the best but they had doors that locked which was good enough "aw...really why I thought we could stay out and practice some more" Alice said looking down as she started to follow me she looked really sad so i decided to explain why it was time to get off the streets "I'm not trying to being mean or make you upset but at night most of the guards go home or got to taverns to get blackout drunk and that's when the really bad people come out" I said looking down at her she was cute looking like a expensive doll you find in the rich toy stores I mean with her blonde almost white hair and those blue eyes it's like she see's everything and knows everything if she gives you the right look she needs to be even more careful with her looks there's no telling what the real evil people would do if they get their hands on her the only thing i can do is warn her about never going out at night and hope that her animal is a big one I haven't seen her animal yet but i'm sure it's under her cloak she kept sneaking food under her coat when we stopped to eat at one of the food stalls and every now and then I'll see the lump under her cloak move I can understand why she has her animal hiding I'm guessing Alice is around 7 years old that means her animal isn't even close to being half way grown it would be no help in a fight at all and would just get in the way if she let it run by itself when she had to make a quick getaway "oh okay" she said looking even more downcast and sad

I sigh she wasn't getting it I needed to pound it into her mind that she can't go out at night i stop and grab her arm yanking her to me I bend down so our eyes are even "you can NOT go out at night as soon as the guards start going away you get away and find an inn or someplace safe to wait out the night there are very bad people here and they come out at night and they aren't nice they will take you and harm you and you'll never escape them not even if you chew off your leg to get away they will keep you alive forever you will never know peace" I said to her sternly I could tell she was afraid she was shrinking back away from me and her eyes were wide tears gathering in her large blue eyes i sigh yet again looks like I had gone to far I lower my head to hers and rest my forehead against hers "I'm sorry I didn't mean to scare you i just don't want you to get hurt trust me when I say this with how you look you will surely be taken by one of the bad men that come out at night and you will not like it it's horrible the stuff they make you do" I said taking a deep breath and with one more look at her i stand back up and say "come on then the only thing you need to worry about is making sure your off the streets at night and behind a locked door so always make sure the inn you stay at has doors that lock or if you can stay at an inn or there's not one around go into the forest or just find a tall tree climb it and sleep on the highest branch you can get to and don't make any sound and most importantly don't come down no matter what till it's morning and the guards are back on the street okay?"I looked down at her at her as we cross into the residential district I spot an inn almost immediately it was a good one too i had stayed there when i had first come to town i stayed there for months till the money i had stolen from my trainer ran out and i was used to being above ground again it had beds not the best but better than nothing it also had doors that looked plus they even served breakfast again not the best but it was better than nothing "look see that inn over there with the sign with the red dragon?" I question her as I pointed out the inn to her she nodded her head as she looked to where i was pointing "good that's where you'll stay ask for Letty she'll give you a discount tell her Red sent you okay?" I said as we neared the inn Red was the name i used back then I've used many names in my life but the best one is Neo which is why I go by that most of the time I don't remember my real name if I even ever had one if the first place it's hard to imagine that my so called mother bothered to name me before she dumped me alone in the snow and i know him and the trainers would never get attached to a baby enough to name it after all they had to be ready to put us down at any moment if we proved to not be good enough it's why all the girls worked hard to be the best we all hated each other cause if they lived that meant we may get put down because the other girl was better it's why I was always working always training so I would never be that close to death again i shook those thoughts from my head and asked Alice if she knew what to do

"I got it ask for Letty tell her Red sent me and ask to stay as long as I can" she said hand reaching down to check the bag of coins she had i gave her the money Charlotte gave me before i left and the rest if the money was from people she had stolen from she looked back up at me as we got to the door it was an ordinary house brown like the rest made of wood the only thing that set it apart from the other houses was the big doors with a red dragon painted on it the dragon was breathing fire and it looked like there was a village on fire behind it

the dragon was to symbolized that the inn belonged the Fire Dragon Guild and was thus protected by it if you messed with the inn or any of the people here you would answer to them "good now go on in maybe I'll see you around" I say smiling at her it would be good to see her again it's been a long time since I've helped someone without getting anything in return and she was actually kind of fun to hang out with once she got over her shock and fear of almost being taken in by a guard "if you're ever in trouble come find me" I said cause there was no telling if she would get in trouble again and i could get her out of almost anything as long as she found me fast enough "but how will I find you?" she said i cocked my head as I thought <where could she find me at?> I thought as I searched my mind for a place she could go to find me i move hide outs every couple of weeks and wait at the old one to see Max and take him there to the new one <where can she go...think come on think OH! i know> I stood up straight as I finally thought of a place "do you remember the fancy store we passed called Meet & Greet?" I asked her and waited till she nodded yes before I continued "good now if you go down the road for a while then take a right down the first alleyway you come to go straight down there and jump into the third window you see tell the lady or man you see that you're a friend of Neo's and ask for some bread that they got from me" I said I added the part about the bread so they would know I had sent her there and it wasn't some trick the guards played on them to see if they had helped a thief they knew the name Neo cause another street kid that I had talked to before called out my name in a fight when I was about to get cut down by one of the guards swords that kid had saved my life he was later caught and sentenced to death I tried to save him but i was to late I got there just in time to see the executioner's swing his sword I was so close to him i got his blood all over me it was just another memory to shut away and never let it out it belonged with the rest of them all of the people I liked that got killed because of me if I was only faster I would have been able to save them all "got it?" I ask once more and when she nods yes I smile at her and say my goodbyes and tell her to go into the inn now as I step off the porch steps she pushes open the door light spilled out of the inn and onto the street I stepped back so none of the light touched me I belonged in the shadows I should never step out into the light Max belonged in the light he shone so brightly he even lite up my shadowy world when he was around it's why I was so attached to him he's the reason I stopped here in this town and didn't keep running

Alice turned around right before the doors shut behind her she waved at me I waved back and watched her through the window she went up to the check in desk and was talking to a dark haired girl I saw the Alice talking to her and the girl said something back and went into the room behind her I watched Alice wait till the black haired girl came back with a tall skinny redhead who looked like she had been in too many fights her nose was crooked from being broken to many times in fights when she didn't duck fast enough when someone threw a punch at her face I saw Alice talk to her and she put the pouch of money on the counter between them Letty looked at it then at her and then after a while she looked around the room and eventually her eyes locked on the window I saw looking in from she smiled slightly and and mouthed hello I stepped closer to the window nodded my head to her and waved she looked back down at Alice said something else to which Alice laughed and nodded her head <probably something to do with me> I grumbled in my head as Letty turned around and grabbed a key walked around the counter and lead Alice up stairs i sighed i at least knew Alice was safe as long as she was here Letty wasn't just a check in girl or a barmaid she belonged to the Fire Dragon Guild and was one of the best hand to hand fighters they had she would look over Alice while she was here and put the word out that she was protected by them and was not to be messed with I shook my head as I imagined Letty teaching Alice how to fight I knew she would she couldn't stand weal people she either hated them on the spot or took them under her wing and taught them how to fight I sighed as I looked up at the sky "when did I start caring about people besides Max?" I question myself out loud as I head back to Charlotte's house.

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one of my longer chapters i think not including any part under the line the word count is 2456 which i think is a lot oh and I tried to add more detail/descriptions,how did I do? anyone like the song? I love it I saw it in fast and furious when it first came out I'm a big F&F fan I used to watch them when i was really young and what kid wouldn't love fast cars  

I'm sorry for not updating in a while honestly I didn't even fell like writing or doing anything on here I managed to make myself feel a bit better by posting a new story on here but shortly after I did I fell right back into my bad mood but it's 2am,my dog is taking up most of my small bed and i have nothing to do on wolfplaygame (an online game me and wolf887 play) the game is actually how me and wolf887 met (online of course i don't do human contact unless i have to outside school and any odd jobs I do) and we started talking about writing and we decided to write a story together and that's how this story came about,hopefully we'll start writing again and be able to update normally if not then we may have to slow down our updates we did have a bunch of the chapters already written before we posted them so there wasn't much pressure to write all the time but now we're almost completely caught up on our pre-written chapters and we haven't been writing recently but again hopefully we won't have to do that,you know what would help?...that's right votes and/or comments (told you i would find a way to put that in each chapter)


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