SIN OF BETRAYAL

By koos_flower

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"Do you think betrayal never gonna pay back?" Come on let's go and seek it! One line ⬇️ It's a crime thrill... More

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Mrng
At namjin residence.




Chimmi ravile thanne kannadi de munnil yuddham aah...

(don't mind his shirt 😛)



Chimmi: madhupwole peyytha mazhaye manassake azhakayi hmmm 🎶 ah innu kurachoodey sundhari ayi....*giggles*

Joon: chimmi~~~

Chimmi: ah~~~ appa dha varuva.... *step down* povam?

Joon: ah edi innu meet cheyyan povunne aalde details okke undallo kayyil....

Chimmi: und appa ayale njn innu chakkil akkiyirikum....

Joon: pinnalla ente koch mwuaah

Chimmi: mwuaah

Jinnie: ah allelum chakkil akkan nammade mwole kazhinje ullu joonichaa vere aarum....

Joon chuckled...

Tae: enthuva ravile thanne oru vatta mesha sammelanam....

Chimmi: mwonu enthokke ariyanam... Valiya alukal samsarikunne aduth ninak entha Da kariyam eh?

Tae: hehehe

Chimmi: ayyada avante chiri kando

Joon: ninakk innu cls ille cherkka?

Tae: illa appa njngaldey managing director Thatti poyi.... So. Leave

Joon: ooh ooh njn ningalde Princi de status kandirunnu....

Tae: karthave itharappa sree krishnano?

Joon: ente krishna

Felix: engane und ente make up...

Jinnie: ith aaru febi krishnan ooh?

*le febi

Febi: enikk prize urapp alle?

Joon: pinnillathe ente cherkkanu alland aark kittan.... Ninakk 1st thannillel njn avane okke vann idikkum....

Febi: pinnallah....

Jinnie: ho entha bhangi ennu nokkikke.... Mm sheri sheri va krishnan vannu kazhikk

Tae: krishnan aah amma venna kodukk

Jinnie: poda avane kaliyakkathe....

Febi: pinnillah angane angott paray aunty...

Tae: make up ichiri kuranj poyallo da... Felixe ninakk kurachoodey ittu kodukkayrunnu 😬😂

Febi: ayya da ookkiyath aah alle? ithrem venam girlfriend ne impress cheyyan ullatha

Tae: ah adipwoli

Jinnie: da cherkka ninakk food edukkatte...

Febi: ayyo njn kazhikkan nikunnilla pova... Lunch school il ninnu aah...

Joon: makkale nee njngalde koodey va njn drop cheyyam

Febi: ah njn ningalde koodey thanna....

Chimmi: ha enna va povam...

Febi: tatta

Jinnie: tattaaa

They left.....





Tae: oh avan ninte aniyan thanne.... Girlfriend ne impress cheyyan poyekkuva

Felix: ah DNA de gunam.... 2 um Thantha de pakarppa....

Tae: hahahaha...... Eh? 2 um?


Felix: kiniyeda kinikk nee... Huh....

Tae: sry aliya....ayyada poda enikk chiri vanna njn chirikkum nee poda....

Felix: eda ninne njn innu....

Jinnie: Eda vaada kazhikkam......

Felix chaadi Tae de purathekk veenu

Tae: kazhichitt idikkano idichittu kazhikkano?

After 5 seconds of thinking.

Felix: kazhichat idikkam.... Baa

They left for breakfast kazhikkal....

















Meanwhile
At sope residence.

Suga: edi 2 days vtl kidakkam ennum paranj tv um phn um kand irikkanda.... Chennirunnu 2 aksharam padikk

Kookie: utharavu pwole...

Suga: avan vilicho? Aa cherkkan veluppine eneett poyatha enthelum kazhicho aavo

Kookie: ho entha sneham

Suga: ah athey athinu ninakk entha?

Kookie: oh enik onnulle.....

Suga: enna mindathe po....

Beaky: kookiee... Ninne dhe appappan vilikkunnu...

Kookie: ah *she left*

Jos: ah madam

Kookie: enthe viliche

Jos: itha.... Ninakk mediche aah *give a laptop*

Kookie: eh? Sherikkum enikk ahno? Sho.... Thank you...

Suga: eh enthina appa ippo ithokke medikkan poye? Ividey orennam irupp undallo ath use Cheyytha pore avalkk?

Kookie pout

Jos: aah lap yoongi de alle? Avan ath use cheyyumbo ayrikum ival chenn choykkunne njn kanunne aah 2 um koodey ulla pidivali.... Chitti kittiyappo njn orthu avalkk oru lap medich kodukkam ennu... Nee vechodi makkale

Suga: ah sheri appante ishttam...

Beaky: njngal njngaldey koch mwolkk medich koduthenu ninakk enna di?

Suga: shey da ithippo ellam koodey ente mekkittu aahno?

Hobi: ath ninte naakinte preshnam aah.... Nee varunno ente koodey?

Suga: do.. Ah mindathe irunno... ah varunn...

Hobi: enna vegam vaa...

Suga left while pirupirukkal....

Hobi: oh praki kondu povunne nokk.... *chuckled*

Kookie: ath mwon vilikkathathinte aah....

Beaky: athey

Hobi: ah appa pinne matte plot sale aytt und... Nalla oru amount namukk kittum... Minnichan vilichirunnu..

Jos: nannayi da.... Minho vilichirunno? Kochinu engane undeda?

Hobi: ah ippo kuzhappam illa... Cheriya paniye undayrunnollu.... Pinne amma kk vanna feeding ullond kochinum varum....

Beaky: ippo kuzhappam onnullallo ath mathi...

Appo angot ekk suga vannu.

Suga: povam?

Hobi: ah... Enna njngal eranguva.... Cherkkan varuvanel enthelum kazhippichitte vidavu ketto amma.... Ee edayayitt avanu oru sredhayum illa.... Full time pani pani....

Beaky: ah njn kazhippicholam....

They left....





















Time skips
12: 15 pm at
Bangtan hybe company.

Joon: makkale chimmi

Chimmi: ah appa oru second....

Chimmi: sry.... Ah yes yes paranjolu.... Mm gandhi nagar 3rd street right? Okay ippo paranjath alle phn num? Okay njn note cheythatt und I will call him tomorrow.... Okay...OK... Fine... You're welcome...

Joon smiled at her like a proud father.

Chimmi: ah appa paray....

Joon: ara di viliche? Matte client ahno?

Chimmi: ah athanne appa.... Aah alla appan enthe viliche....

Joon: Nee headache inte tablet preman oodu medikkan paranjo?

Chimmi: ah appa cheriya oru thalavedhana...

Joon: mm ucha ayallo enna nee poykko bakki njn nokkikolam.... Meetting tharkkalam njn attend cheyytholam....

Chimmi: appa ath....

Joon: sarila poykko.... Njn ninakk vandi vilich tharam allel car edutho...

Chimmi: 2 um venda... Njn poykolam....

Joon: ah enna sheri.... Poytt rest edukk....

Chimmi nodded and left....









Moments later.

Chimmi (on call) : ahm ennalum ayal nalla famous alle? Business okke? Njn oru meeting il vech aale kanditt und...

Yoongi: mm athey.... Ith aaro nannaytt arinju pani kodutha pwole und... Whatever inippo paranjit enthina....

Chimmi: athanne.... Uff enthokke ano avo ee lokath nadakkunne.... Mm enna nadakatte investigation

Yoongi: Mm enna nee athikam ninnu veyil kollenda vengam vtl poykko... Chennu kidannu onnu urangu appozhekk ready avum...

Chimmi: ah enna sheri vtl ethitt vilikk...

Yoongi: okay... Nokki pone chimmi

Chimmi: ah sheri *smiled*

Yoongi: luv you

Chimmi: *chuckled* luv you too....

Call ended.






























Time skips.
Afternoon at
namjin residence.

Jinnie: ah vanno appan enthiye di?

Chimmi: appan vayikitt avum amma...

Jinnie: ninakk entha vayye?

Chimmi: ah entho vallatha thalavedhana um body pain um...

Jinnie: hsptl il pono?

Chimmi: eyy njn onnu kidakkatte.... Tae enthiye?

Jinnie: avan mukalil und...

Chimmi left to upstairs.

Moments later.

Tae: ah eppo vannu thamburatti ?

Chimmi: poda... Angott neengi kidakk....

Tae: venel keri appurath kidakk.... Njn neengulla...

Chimmi: oh ingane oruthane anallo enikk aniyan aytt kittiyath.... *while keri kidakkal on bed*

Tae: ah sahicho.... Alla pinne

Chimmi sighs...

Tae: nee entha vallaathe irikkunne....

Chimmi: thalavedhana....

Tae: achodaa enna urangikko.... Njn maari tharam

Chimmi: venda... Nee kidanno... Da cherkka ninakk 24 manikoor um ee game thanne ano pani....

Tae: hehe

Chimmi sighs

Chimmi: felix enthiye?

Tae: ah avante appan kananam ennum paranj vilichirunnu.... Avan angott poyi... Thirich febi yem kootti varum ayrikum...

Chimmi: ahm... Enthinulla vili ano avo

Tae: deivathinu ariyam....

Avar angane oru kochu varthamanam paranj paranj eppozho kidann urangi....

Kuttan: ayinu

Jango; ningal chenn aa panchayat ground vazhi 4 round odu...

Kuttan: okay njn ippo oditt varam...

Jango: ente deivame kurach bhuthi undayrnnel manthabhuthi ennu enkilum vilikkarnnu 🥲



























Time skips evng
At namjin residence.

Joon um jinnie um sitout il irunn kushalam paranj irikka....appo angottekk felix um febi um vannu...

Jinnie: enth aayeda makkale?

Felix: oh athiyam bhayankara sneham okke kanichu... Nee avanem kootti vada makkale ini ingane onnum undavilla ennokke.... Njn kulungilla ennu kandappo bheekshani ayi... Njn paranju entha ennu vecha cheyy enikk onnulla ennu...

Joon: ithonnum kandu ningal tension avanda.... Oro adavu aytt erangirikkunne aah.... Ningal poyi fresh avu

Febi: Tae Chettan enthiye aunty....

Jinnie: chimmi um Tae koodey nalla urakkam....

Febi: okay tae chettaaaahhhhhhh~~~

Felix: da vilikkanda..... Urangi eneettitt game kalikkaam..... Ingane oruthan...

Joon: da makkale enthayi da 1st alle?

Febi: alla 2nd...1st vere oru thendikk aah... Avane kandal Christmas pappa ahnenne parayu

Everyone laughed....

Febi: but ente girlfriend impress ayi.... Ath mathi enikk😉

Jinnie: aha koch kallan... Ini entho venam.....

Febi: eeeeeeeh

Felix sighs....

Jinnie: sheri poyi fresh avu... Kazhikkan edukkam....

Felix: ah.... Da poyi kuliche po...

Febi: oh nale avatt...

Felix: da nilleda avidey.... Odalle.... Ninne innu njn....

Febi: enne

Felix: ha

Febi: innu

Felix: ah

Febi: thinkalazhchayo?

Felix: ah😬

Febi: hehehe illa velliyazcha avatte *rushed to his room*

Felix: ninnu salim kumar kalikkaathe poyi kuliyeda.... *he too rushed*

Joon: ee pillere kondu *chuckled*


























Meanwhile
Sope residence.

Kookie was lying on bed while checking her phone. Appo hyunji de call vannu...

Kookie: entha di......

Hyunji: k-oo-k-ie... Ath njn

Kookie: eh? Entha di entha preshnam nee okay ano?

Hyunji: edi.. Njn... Njn oru swapnam kandu

Kookie: ho athre ullo? Njn angu pedich poyallo koche....

Hyunji: edi kookieeeee

Kookie: oh sry sry.... Sheri para... Aarya kandey?

Hyunji: edi.... Enikkippo felix ne kaananam....

Kookie: enthonnu?

Hyunji: edi... Avanu entho Pattitt und... Enikk ippo kaananam.....

Kookie: edi nee... Ninakk thalakk adi onnum kittiyillallo alle?

Hyunji: nee kalikkalle Kookie...

Kookie: edi vilich choycha pore... Avan ippo Tae de avidey alle?

Hyunji: ninak varan pattuo ille? Allel njn poyikolam.... Enikk ippo kaananam...

Kookie: OK ok... Nee samadhanikk... Nee oru kariyam cheyy vegam ready aytt bus stop il va njn ippo varam....

Hyunji: ah sheri....

Call ended.




Kookie nere Tae ye vilichu but call connect ayilla... So felix ne vilichu but avanum eduthilla...

Kookie: ha ivarellaam ith evidey chennu kidakkunnu... Oh angottekk ingane chennu keriyal... Avidey.....sho ithippo enikk anallo tension.... Ah ennayalum keri chellendey alle? Poyekkam.... Aa. Kaduva ye onnu njettikkam... *giggles*






























Time skips
At namjin residence.

A/u POV

Hyunji um Kookie um koodey gate inte veliyil nikka...

Hyunji: edi vaa....

Kookie: edi oole nee kaaranama... Ho ente cherkkante kayyum pidich keri varenda veedu aah...

Hyunji: ah.... Ith nalla avasaram alle? Ellarem kanallo.... Ith ninakk kittiya lottery aah Nee vegam vanne...

Kookie sighs.

Hyunji: ah ninne ninne... Njn avane kaanana vanne ennu enganum paranja ninne njn kollum...

Kookie: eh pinne? Ninakk enthedi vattano?

Hyunji: oru avashiyam aytt poyappo ingott keriyatha ennu paranjamathi...

Kookie: deivame ivalk entho kariyam aytt pattitt und *mind voice* nee enthelum okke para... Vaa ingott.....

*conning bell 🛎 rings*

Jinnie: joonichaa onnu nokkikke.... Aranavo

Joon: jennie ayrikkum...

Jinnie: eh aval varilla ennu vilich paranjath alle... Aval nale varullu.... Vegam chenn thurakk manushiya....

Joon: ah ah sheri....

He opened the door.

Joon: manassilaayilla.... Alla mwole njn evideyo?

Kookie: ah ath pinne.. Njn...

Hyunji: njngal teavin inte friends aah uncle.... Avan ille?

Joon: ah undallo va va.... Alla ennalum ee kutty...

Kookie: ah uncle nammal oru day mall il vech meet cheythatt und

Joon: aaaah jiya right?

Kookie: athey *smiled* name okke orma undallo.... Nalla IQ anallo uncle nn...

Joon smiled at her.... Va irikk....

Kookie um hyunji I'm couch ilekk irunnu.



Jinnie: ara joonicha

Joon: avante frnds aah...

Jinnie Kookie ye thanne nokki ninnu.

Joon: ninak manassilayille? Nammal annu kande koch


Jinnie: mm manasilayi...

Hyunji: njngal oru avashiyam aytu vannappo onnu kandekam ennu orthu... Felix um undallo ividey...

Jinnie: ah und... Avar mukalil kaanum ningal chenn vilichitt va.. Njn kudikkan edukkam..

Kookie: ayyo venda aunty....

Jinnie: athonnum pattilla.... Ningal athiyam poyi avarem koode vilichitt va....

Kookie: okay aunty...

They left upstairs.






Hyunji: eh di dhe 2 um urakkam...

Kookie: ath sheri chechy um aniyanum koodey urakkam analle.. Chummathalla vilichitt kittathe...

Hyunji: enna nee chenn vilikk njn purath nikkam

Kookie: nee chenn felix nod samsarikk

Hyunji: eyy ath venda....

Kookie: ninte avasanam innu ente kayi kondu aayirikum.... Nee pinne enthina vanne?

Hyunji: ath pinne... Sheri sheri njn povam... Nee chenn avane eneeppikk

Kookie: ah..









A/u POV

Kookie nere akathe ykk poyi... Enitt urangunna Tae ye kure neram nokki ninnu... Then she clicks some of his photos. Enitt melle she kneeled down and kissed on his forehead.

Kookie: halo.... Taeichaaa

Tae: 😴

Kookie: ichaaa eneette

Tae: po kookieeeee~~~

Kookie onnu njetti

Tae: luv u kookieeeeee~~~ *smiling*

Kookie: eh? *laughed* ingerkk urakkathilum ente sound kettal ariyallo.... Sho... Paavam.... Ente chakkara.... *again kissed* onnu eneek manushiya....

Tae: 😴

Kookie: edo kaduveeeee

Tae flinched....

Tae: *he opened his eyes* eh aara entha? *Kookie ye kandu* eh ippo swapnam okke ingane kaanan pattuo? *smiled at her* sho swapnathilum ente koch enth sundhari ya... Thakkudu.... *pinched on her cheeks*

Kookie: aaahhhh~~~~ *tap on his head* edo eneekkedo.... Swapnam alla reality aah...

Tae chaadi eneettu...

Tae: nee enthedi ividey? Eh? Deivame arelum kaanum... Erangi oodri....

Kookie: ayyada njne mathil chaadi alla vanne... Anthass aytt front door vazhi thanna.... Ningalde appana door thurann thannath....

Tae: oh ente deivame vtl thookkiyennum paranj nee enthina udane kettum bhandavum okke eduth ingott vanne... Edi namakk enthelum vazhi undakkam.... Edi enikk pani onnum aytt illallo nammal engane nammade pillere nokkum... Nee oru kariyam cheyy va namakk poyi appante kaalu pidikkam....

Kookie: phaaaaaaa!

Tae: eh?

Kookie: ningalk enthonnu manushiya... Njn um hyunji um aytt aah vanne... Ningale kaanan... Allathe njn erangi vannath onnum alla... Athiyam poyi onnu fresh ayikke aah urakkam angu potte...

Tae: ayisheri.... Sho verthe aagrahichu

Kookie: ayyoda.... Eneett va manushya

Tae chuckled.

Appo anu pettannu Tae aduth kidanna chimmi ye sredhichath....

Tae: eh ival enth ividey.... Deivame ellam kett kanum...

Kookie: eyy nalla urakkam aah...

Tae: edi chimmi~~~ lokatthile number 1 kozhi nee ah di chechy....

Chimmi thirinj kidannu....

Tae: ah nalla urakkam aah.... Bha... Namakk povam...

Kookie: eh?

Tae: ah.... Urakkam allarnne ippo enne chumaril thookiyene aval... Nee va njn onnu mukham kazhuki tt varam

Kookie nodded....





























Meanwhile

Hyunji nere chenn felix inte room il Thatti.... He opened the door. Hyunji ye kandu felix onnu njetti...

Hyunji: entha?

Felix: onnulla....

Hyunji: enna maaru angott...

Hyunji nere chennu bed il irunnu...

Felix: entha?

Hyunji: enth?

Felix: entha ividey ennu?

Hyunji: enthe enikk vannoodey?

Felix: enikk arem kananum illa mindanum illa

Hyunji: ayya da... Ayinu aar ninne kaanan vannu... Kookie kk Tae ye kananam ennu paranj.... So vannu.... Ith Tae de veedu alle?

Felix: ath OK... But enthina ente room ilekk vanne...?

Hyunji: ah ath pinne... Njn... Njn febi ye kaanan vannatha...

Felix: avan illa... Avan ground il poyi....

Hyunji: oh....

Felix onnum mindathe erangi thazhekk poyi.... Purake hyunji um...























Meanwhile.

Tae: oho appo angane anu kariyam.... 2 inum parasparam ishttam ahnu.. Enna athott sammdhikem illa...

Kookie: sathiyam.. Enitt bakki ullavare eduthitt alakkum....

Tae: ah namakk nokkam evidey vare povum ennu....

Kookie: ah... Alla chechy...

Tae: avalkk vayyathe kidanne aah
.. Headache... Nee va... Aval eneekkumbo varum....

Kookie nodded and they left to downstairs.

Jinnie: ah va.... Aval eneettille?

Tae: illa....

Joon: enna va irikk.....

Jinnie: itha chaaya kudikk ellarum... Pinne enthokke und mwole vishesham?

Kookie: mm sugam... Aunty ko? Sugam alle ellarkkum

Jinnie: ah kuzhappaylla....

Hyuinji: sho uncle nem aunty yem. Kandal parayilla ithra valiya makkal und ennu... Looks like newly married couples

Joon: ahno? *chuckled* mm pinne ningal okke ore cls il ahno?

Hyunji: eyy alla ivar njngalude seniors ah...

Joon: eda nee ragging vallom cheythatt pilleru idikkan vannath aahno?

Tae: onnu po appa...

Joon: da. Felixe nee entha ingane mari irikkunne? Enth Patti?

Felix: eyy onnulla. Uncle..... *smiled at him*

Kookie: job okke engane ponu uncle

Joon: oh entho parayana mwole stress ahnu ennalum...aval il ahnu predheeksha... Ee kizhangane kondu company onnum nokkan pattilla mwole

Kookie laughed.

Tae: apppaaa~~~ *oh ee Thantha innu nattikkum* ah mathi mathi amma avarkk kazhikkan vallathum edukk..

Jinnie : ah va ellarum

Then they spend their time......





































Time skips.
Crime spot.


Jack: aliya dhe athanu dead body kidanna spot

Yoongi: da call details kittiyo?

Han: ha da kitti.... But samashayikatha vidham onnum kittiyilla..... Casual calls...

Xiu: eda ith rooftop il ninnu veenath thanne ahnu confirm... Oru s***ide attempt ayikoodey..

Yoongi: eda ath OK... But for what? S***ide cheyyenda kariyam illa.... Because aalu perfectly okay ayrnnu... Financial aytt anelum family il anelum.... A perfect family man.... Business um nalla reethikk povunnu.... Athum alla aalde mwonte marriage ahnu next week.... So ingane oru attempt nadathan oru chance um illa...

Han: appo then there is 2 chances... 1st one maybe slip ayi aalu thaazhe veenatt undavum or someone's black hands are there...

Yoongi: eda athilum oru preshnam und oru fight nadannathinte yathoru symptoms um illa... Appo 1st paranjthinu aahnu chance kooduthal.... Family de statements kittiyo...

Jack: kittittilla statements eduth kondu nikka.... Bakki okke autopsy reports vannate parayan pattu....

Yoongi: mm

Appo angotek Dr vannu

Dr : yoongi...

Yoongi: yes Dr.

Dr: aalde bodyil oru fight nadannathinte symptoms onnum illa... But oru kariyam sure ahnu death reason heart attack ahnu...

Yoongi: Maybe mukalil ninnu veenathinte avam... There is a chance...

Dr: but spot death ahnennu thonnunnilla marichittu kurach athikam samayam ayath pwole und.... Urappikkanda reports varatte...

Jack: Dr procedures onnu speed up akkanam..

Dr: Ah speed up akkan parayam.... athupwole body ile chila parts il oru blue colour thelinjitt und... I mean entho oru chemical aalde body il und... Victim entho high dose medicine edukkunnundavanam athum aytt ee chemical react cheyythitt und that's why ingane oru blue colour visible ayath..... But ee chemical maathram aytt direct consume cheyyano inject cheyyano onnum pattilla....something is wrong here.... Ente oru nigmanam anu.... Lab reports vannale kooduthal detailed ayt parayan pattu... But one more thing spot il ninnum mattoralde footprints kittitt und... Ath suspect inte anenn namakk urappikkan pattilla.... But maybe avam... But finger prints ippo onnum kittitt illa... But namakk nokkam...autopsy varatte....

Yoongi: okay sir..... Footprint..... Njngal ath onnu anveshichu nokatte.....

Dr: bakki oke ningalde sir um aytt njn samsarikkam....

Yoongi: okay sir... Fine!

Dr left....

Jack: eda inippo nammade pani kazhinjallo....

Yoongi: illa nee va namakk aa cctv footages onnu edukkanam

Xiu: ah enna va... Ath kayyode edukkam....




























Time skips
Namjin residence

Kookie: dhe ith kando aunty.... Ith chimmi chechy de performance aah...

Jinnie: ah allelum ente kochinu ente Ella kazhivum kittitt und...

Kookie: ath sathiyam.. But sownthariyam ath aunty de athra kittitt illa

Jinnie: sho ee kochine kondu enikk vayya..

Kookie: dhe ith arennu manassil ayo?

Jinnie: karthave felix alle? *laughed* ee chekkan ith enthuva ee kanikkunne

Kookie: athey athey.... Avanu thanne ariyam... Ayyo annu njngal chirich oru vazhikk ayi....

Tae: ente kanikkalle jiya mwole.... *kannu kondu plz ennu kanichu*

Kookie: hm ath entel illa...

Tae: bhagiyam

Aa spot il thanne Tae kk wp ilekk Kookie aa video ayachu.....

Tae: hehe undayrnn alle? *low voice*

Kookie: enthe?

Tae: onnullayee....

Kookie giggles 🤭


















Meanwhile

Felix purath sit out il irikkuva appo angtokke hyunji vannu felix inte aduthirunnu...

Hyunji: ahem

Felix: mm?

Hyunji: febi late avuo?

Felix: areella...

Hyunji: njn avane kandatt illallo innu onnu kaaananam ennu ortheya

Felix: enthina sympathy kanikkan aah no *pucham*

Hyunji: *sighs* ninakk sugano?

Felix: mm....

Hyunji: hm pinne... Athey

Felix: entha...

Hyunji: onnulla

Felix sighs

Hyunji: athey

Felix: entha? 😬

Hyunji: ippo bike odikkar undo?

Felix: eh?

Hyunji: undo?

Felix: ah und entha?

Hyunji: odikkumbo helmet itt odikanam

Felix: eh? Ninakk entha?

Hyunji: onnulla njn paranjenne ullu...nokkim kandum odikanam athra thanne.....

She left.


Felix: eh? Ivalkk ith entha? Entho undallo? Inippo avalk ennod? Eyy no... Da felixe... Ninakk kittiyath onnum pore... Venda onnum venda...




















Meanwhile

Joon: nee kollallo di kaanthari.... Mm enitt

Kookie: enitt entha njn paranju ini arelum ente chimmi chechy ye thottal avante kayyi njn vettum ennu.... Ippo ellarkkum enne pediyaa....

Tae: ente ponneh enthu thalla ee pennu thallunne ha enthayalum chakkilakkikko bhaviyil upakaram avum *mind voice*

Joon: ho appo chimmi kk avidey prethyekam bodyguard okke undayrunnu alle.... *chuckled*

Kookie: pinnallah

Appo angotekk chimmi vannu.

Jinnie: ah madam vanno....

Joon: engane und makkale? Kuranjo

Chimmi nodded.

Kookie: hlo nammale okke ariyo?

Chimmi: edi kookieeeeeeeeeee

Kookie: eeeeeh

Chimmi chenn Kookie de aduth irunnu....

Jinnie: Kookie ath kollam nalla peru

Kookie: pinnallah..... Ente ichaayan itta peru aah....

Jinnie smiled at her.

Chimmi: nee eppo vannu....

Kookie: kore neram ayi.... Ippo erangan nikkuva....

Chimmi: appozhekk povano?

Hyunji: vanatt kore neram ayi chechy..

Chimmi: aha nee um undo? Sho enna enne vilikkathe enthey......

Kookie: chechy kk vayyathe allayrno sarulla... Njngal vere oru day varam

Chimmi smiled and nodded as okay....

Kookie: enna njngal eranguva ketto....

Joon: edaykk varanam ketto...

Kookie: okay uncle..... Aunty enna sheri povu aane tattaaaa!

Jinnie Kookie ye hug cheyythu... Then give her a kiss.... Ath kanda ellardem mukhathe oru punjiri vannu...

Jinnie: ini enna vara Kookie mwol...?

Kookie: leave kittumbo nere vannekkaam

Jinnie: varuvallo?

Kookie: promise varum...

Jinnie: iyyooo kolluvo penne *chuckled * enna nokki poytt va 2 aalum...

Hyunji: sheri aunty... Tae...

Tae: ah poytt va...

Hyunji: da Felixe Tae sheri enna.....

Tae: ah di okay....

Felix just nodded.

They left....









Felix: Tae vaada febi ye kandillallo nokitt varam... Pinne hyung vilichirunnu avan aah thattukadayil nippund...

Tae: ah enna va... Amma njngal poytt varam...

Chimmi: eda enne koodey kondu poda....

Tae: ninakk vayyathe alle?

Chimmi: njn okay anu... Enikk thattu dosha venam

Felix: enna oodi vannu kerikko povam...

Joon: da enna car edutho.... Food oke kazhichitt va.....athikam late avanda

Tae nodded. They left....













Joon: jinnie nee okay ahno?

Jinnie: mm....

Joon: entha?

Jinnie: aa koch.... Enikk entho... Vallatha oru aduppam thonnunnu....

Joon: mm enikkum thonni.... Nalla koch....

Jinnie: athey....

Joon: Namakk nammade taekk nokkiyalo?

Jinnie: eh? 😍 Njn ath angott parayan irikkuvayrunnu.... Chimmi de kett kazhinjal undan namakk aa kochinte vtl poyi samsarich veykkanam.... Athinu athiyam ival onnu sammadhikkandey.... Ithinu oru theerumanam ethrayum pettannu edukkanam joonichaa....

Joon: hm samayam undallo nokkam....

Jinnie: ha... Enikk entho athine angu ishttam ayi...

Joon: mm oru muyalum kunj ine pwole und...

Jinnie: *chuckled* sathiyam.....























Time skips
Night at sope residence.

Kookie: enitt enthayi appa....

Hobi: enitt enthavan ivalde Thantha padi de kadayil full njn moothrapunniyaham thalichu....

Kookie: ath kalakki *laughed*

Suga: oh ente thanthe parayan entha angerkk ulsaham... Ah. Pinne ayalude kayyil irippum angane ayrunnallo.....

Hobi: ah athanu... That's point...... Alle di makkale *laughed*

Kookie: athey..... Athokke ente jos appappan... Pwoli aahnu pwoli...

*le jos


Jos: pinnallathe.... Angane angott paranj kodu koche....

Hobi: ente deivame oru lap top kittiyappozhekk penninte thallu kandille

Jos: da..... Oh ente karthave avalod njn Anne paranje aah thavidu koduthatt anelum nallath orennam edukkam ennu.......

Hobi: ini paranjitt kariyam illa Mr Jose 😂

Suga: aah cherkkan ithuvare kulichitt vanille? Rathri kulich ini valla pani um pidikatte appozha

Yoongi: enthuva thalle.... ningal enthina enne prakunne?

Suga: aaru praaki? Ninnodu okke Onnum parayanum padille? Chaaya veno ninakk?

Yoongi: orennam kittiyal kollam.... *left for charge nn idal his phone*

Suga: ahm ippo tharam...

Hobi: mwole di onnu chettanum koodey

Suga: oh oh... Tharam...

Jos: enna pinne enikkum edutho....

Suga: enna pinne ellarkum venam ennu angu paranja pore?

Kookie: angane engane parayum enikk venam ennu njn paranjillallo....

Suga: ninne ee vtle aytt kanakk akitt illa....

Kookie: Aammaaa~~~

Suga: ooh kidannu karathe ninakk veno vendey?

Kookie: venam😼

Suga: ah best ivale kondu enikk vayya *left to kitchen*

Yoongi nere vannu hobi de aduthirunnu

Hobi: oh nee angu ksheenichu poyallo da

Yoongi: eyy...

Kookie: ichaaayaaaaa *odichennu yoongi de aduth irunnu*

Yoongi: enthoooo

Kookie: oh ente chakkara 🙊😘

Yoongi: ano? Ooh nee ichante thanka kudam alle? 😘

Jos: oh enthoru sneham.... alla da makkale enthayi aah case... News il full niranj nippundallo nee....

Yoongi: ah ath enthayalum oru s***ide alla

Hobi: pinne?

Yoongi: oru pidivali nadanna symptoms onnum illa body il.... But slip ayath anennum enikk angott vishwasikkan pattunnilla.... Cctv nokkiyappo aalu ground floor il ninnum lift il keri.... 5th floor ahnu alkk erangenda floor but aalu lift il keriyathum cctv cameras nn entho oru technical error.... Oru camera's um working alla.... Oru half an hour around kazhinjitt ahnu camera's working ayath.... Oru kariyam sure ahnu athinu idayil entho sambhavichitt und.... Victim aa lift il ninnum erangitt undavilla ennu ahnu enikk thonnunne... So maybe it's well planned.... Kaaranam mukalil ninnu veenath koodathe Heart Attack um vanatt und... Aa flat il victim thamasikkar illa... So..... Aduthulla thamasakkarodu choychappo aalu ethelum business meetings ullappo maathre ividey vararullu ennanu arinjath.... That means alu annu arelum kanditt undaavnam.... Athil aahnu njngalkk kooduthal Samshayam ith oru m**der ahno ennath..... Mothathil enikk ee case angott digest avunnilla.... Bakki inippo autopsy varatte..

Kookie: appo aro manapoorwvam thttiyathu avumlle?

Yoongi: avam avathirikkam....

Yoongis phn rings.

Yoongi: ah jackson aah.... Ha parayeda ahno hm... Eh? Sherikkum.... Shey da.... Appo nammade ooham sheriya.... Namakk nale thanne thudangam pani... Mm okay da. Enthelum undel vilikk....

Kookie: entha?

Yoongi: now it's officially confirmed..... It's a planned m**der

Hobi: autopsy il entha parayunne?

Yoongi: appa sambhavam nadannu minutes nu ullil thane njngal body recover cheyythirunnu but autopsy il parayunnath iyyal thaazhe veezhunnathinum half an hour munne thanne death sambhavichu ennu ahnu.... Njn paranjallo cardiac arrest vannirunnu ath thanne ahnu death reason.....victim inte body il ninnum oru rare chemical spot cheythatt undayrunnu... Athine Patti Dr njngalodu soochippichatha... Ath maathram aytt body il react cheyyilla Mikkavarum ee chemical included aytt ulla enthelum medicine akath poytt undavum....Angane anenkil Death confirm ayathinu shesham ith oru Accidental or oru s***ide anennu varuthanam k*ller nn.... That's why ee drama.....

Kookie: eh? But who?

Yoongi: rooftop il ninnum oru footprint kittirunnu.... Ippo jackson um han um koodey ee flat inu opposite ulla oru shop ile footages eduthu... Athil clear allel pwolum suspect avam ennu ulla oral..... Ayale kittiyal maybe kurachoode clear avum....

Hobi: any fingerprints....

Yoongi: oh yes ... Body il ninnum 2 fingerprints kittitt und... Onnu aalde PA.... Ath confirm ahnu... 2nd one.... Ath aarum ayttum ithuvare match aytt illa.... PA pidich onnu kudanjitt und avanmar but athil kariyam und ennu thonunnilla....

Hobi: victim inte flat il nokkiyo?

Yoongi: illa ithuvare angott poytt illa... Rooftop and body kidanna spot 2 um maathre ippo nokkiyullu.... Allu flat ilekk varunnath aarum kandatt illa ennu anu parayunnath athum alla flat lock ahnu.... Key missing ahnu....

Hobi: athil dhuroohatha undallo....just go and... Spare key vech thurann nokkanam... Avidey ethelum fingerprints ooh footprints ooh... Or any other.... Enthelum undo ennu check cheyyi....avidunn ethelum prints kittiyal ippo kittiyathum aytt onnu cross check cheyyanam.... Incase Match ayal victim aytt close aytt ulla not only his family I mean bhariyum makkal um maathram alla close aytt idapazhkunna ella relatives um ayttum friends ayttum pinne nee paranjath pwole ethelum official or unofficial meet up nadannittu undel avardem ellardem onnu cross check cheyyanam... 70% chance und... Inippo match ayillel ippo currently list il ulla Ella criminals intem check cheyyanam.... Local gundakal ulpadey.... Pinne ee parolinu irangiya ellardem list eduth athum ayttum nokkanam.... Ethilelum koluthathirikkilla....

Yoongi: ente appa.... Ath sheri ahnu... Aa vazhikk onnu nokkanam....

Kookie: alla appa appanu engane ithokke ariyam.... Appanu entha pandu police il ayrnno pani?

Hobi pettannu onnu njetti...

Hobi: oh ithinu police onnum avanda ichiri common sense undaya mathi....

Jos hobi ye onnu thrappichu nokki... Ath Kookie kandu.....

Kookie sighs...

Kookies POV

Appante kallakkali njn thookkunnund..... Sho njn anel aa diary ini nokkan ividey sthalam onnulla... Appan rekshapettu ennu vicharikkanda njn ath thappi edukkum.... Enatt venam ellarden kalla kali pwolikan *smirk*

Appo yoongi de phn veendum ring cheyythu....

Yoongi: jacksa

Jack: da nee onnu vegam spot il vanne...

Yoongi: urgent ahno

Jack: ah ne vagam va...

Yoongi: okay *call ended*

Hobi: entha Da... Njne onnu spot il poytt varam...

Suga: daaa~~~

Yoongi left.

Suga: ente deivame.. Njn Anne ningalod paranje alle manushiya avane ee panikk vidanda ennu..

Hobi: nee onnu poyedey...






Appo Kookie ye tae vilichu so she nice nu schoot aval from there to her room.....

Kookie: hello....

Tae: ah evdanu madam.... Edi kalli nee appanem amma em nice nn kayyil eduth alle? Ho ninne pokki paranjond nadappund 2 um koodey...

Kookie: sho ahno? Pinnalla ee Kookie enna summava

Tae: hm... Pinne kazhicho nee...

Kookie: illa kazhikkanam.... Avideyo?

Tae: illa.... Ini thanne....

Kookie: avarokke evidey?

Tae: ah Ellam koodey aah febi de thallum kettu irippa... Avidey ellarum enth parayunnu.... Lap okke kittiyallo njn ninte msg kandirunnu phn il charge illathond aah apo vilikkanje...

Kookie: ah athey athey.....ividey ellarum und... Yoongichan oru case inte kariyam paranjond irikkuvayrunnu.... Ah appo ille ee appan kore hints paranj koduthu ichayanu.... Like a pro COP 👮......

Tae: eh?

Kookie: njn paranjille evideyo entho oru thakarar und..... Confirm ahnu appanum ee pani nannaytt ariyam.... But then what happened...ath venam kandu pidikkan....

Tae: enitt aa diary kittiyo ninakk thappi nadappundayrnnalo nee

Kookie: illanne.... Njn ini nokkan sthalam onnulla...

Tae: avidey thanne kaanum...pinne enthayalum ninte exams kazhiyatte ini akappade 6,7 ooh months alle ullu... Mm ath kazhinj namakk onnichu Investigation thudangam.....

Kookie: okay set.....

Angane avar avidey samsarich irikkatte....









Time skips
11:47 pm
At sope residence.

Hobi: ah vanno... Enthayi da...

Yoongi: case closed....

Hobi: eh? Seriously?

Appo angotekk Kookie um suga um beaky um vannu.

Yoongi: appa.... Appan ippo ee idea itt thannath nannayi.... Oohichath pwole flat inte key ee m**der plan cheyythavarde kayyil thanne ayrnnu.... Njngal flat il chennappo munne kittiya same footprint um pinne fingerprint um kitti... And one more thing.... Oru syringe.... So oohnagal ellam sheri ayrnnu....

Hobi: appo aara aalu? *smirked*

Yoongi: victim inte sister inte kamukan... I mean step sister de.... He's the k*ller.... Aval married ahnu 1 kuttim undayrunnu 2 years munne oru accident il ahnu hus um 8 months praayam ulla kuttiyum pinne ivarde sevent um marikunne.... 5 years kazhinj engando kittiya kutti ayrnnu.... But marriage kazhinj 1st year thanne ee affair start cheyythu.... Athikam arkum ariyilla ennu anu arinjath.... Actually criminal is a cardiologist...... Intention swathukkal thanne ahnu.... Twist entha ennu vecha idea sister de ayrnnu... Kamukante footprints ahnu kittiyath......ayalu confess cheyythu kazhinju.... Sister de statement ahnu sherikum njettichathu Avarde fingerprints aa syringe il undayrunnu.... Call records udane kittum...

Hobi: syringe room il ninnum alle kittiyath? But lift il ninnum aalu erangeett illa ennu alle nee munne paranje.... Appo why?

Yoongi: lift il ninnum erangiyitt illa ennath njngalude ooham ayrnnu..... criminalinte um sister dem statement vech nokkumbo, victim ne entho paranj flat ilekk vilippichitt und. victim ground floor il ninnum keri but criminal cctv cut ayathinu shesham ethelum oru floor il ninum keritt undavum lift ilekk.... Lift il vech thanne aa medicine inject cheyythitt und angane ahnu statement.... But maaraka twist ithonnum alla... Actually victim inte step sister, she's the actual gamer...

Hobi: what?

Yoongi: Avalkk ivan maathram alla vere oruthan koodey undayrunnu.... Avanum aytt ivalde marriage um 6 months munne kazhijatha.... She just used him for this... Avane kondu ee m**der cheyypichitt ayalem fool akki swathukkal um kondu mungan ayirunnu plan.... Oru fake agreement okke undakki vechitt und aah madam...... Pinne nalathe UAE mrng flight nn 2 tickets um..... Injection koduthathinu shesham body kondu chennu roomil ittu with help of her... Aa time aval nice aytt avanu pani kodukkan vendi manapoorvam aa syringe avidey ittath anu... Precautions eduthatt undavam but deivam angane vidillallo.... Fingerprints nalla clean ayt kitti.... Footprint kittiyappo njngal kamukan ah ennanu confirm akkiyath... But syrinj il ninnum kittiya fingerprint sister de ayappo ahnu twist pwolinjath.... Ithippo avarde hus nem kochinem thattiyathum avar ahno ennu samshayam und...

Kookie: urappaayittum avar thanne avum

Yoongi: Ividey nice aytt victim ne entho unofficial talk ennum paranj vilich kondu vannath anu.... Enit criminal medicine inject cheyyth aale theerthu athum aa lift il vech thanne....security kk cash koduth cctv surveillance um block akki..... So nice ayt Pinneedu flat il kondu chennu death confirm ayathinu shesham ayal thanne body thazekku iduvayrunnu.... Ee medicine body il poyal actually ath kandu pidikkan pattilla.....

Kookie: pinne engane manassilayi?

Yoongi: But victim diabetic ayrnnu... Ayal eduthond irunnath high dose medicine ahnu athum criminal inject Cheyytha medicine il undayrnna aa rare chemical um koodey react ayathil ahnu samshayam vannath... Pinne sadhanam flat il ninnum thukkkuvem cheyythallo Aa syringe il oru minute fluid bakki undayrnunnu ath test cheyythappo ahnu confirm ayath ath ullil poyath aahnu attack nu reason ennu... enthayalum appa.. Appan aalu kollam

Hobi: ah enthayalum close ayallo ath mathi...

Kookie: athil entho panthikedu ille? Sathiyam para appa...appanu ithokke engane ariyam....

Hobi: ath njn pand~~~ ingeru pandu clg il veche ingane aahdi *suga cut off*

Suga: pandumuthle kanda Investigation movie okke kandu pranth ayathanu.... Athond alle angerkk police avan pattathe vishamam mwone police akikkond theerthath....

Jos: naked truth.....

Yoongi: appa njangalde team nn aah sir full credits um thannath.... So njngalde training period short akki.... Ini ee month koodey kazhinja posting aah.... Ividey thanne kittan chance und.....

Hobi: aath nannayi..... Sheri samayam kore ayille? Chenn kidann urangu....

Yoongi nodded and left....

Hobi: ninnu kannurutti nokkathe poyi kidannu urangu penne...

Kookie: ah ippo njn pova... But....

Suga: chenn kidakkedi ...

Kookie konjnamkuthi kanichitt poyi...









Momenst later...

Suga: dhe manushiya ningal innu enthina angane okke samsarikkan poye? Kookie kk entho samshayam vanatt und...

Hobi: eyy.....aval chumma.... Aval ithinte purake povan onnum povunnilla.. Nee athonum orth tension avanda...

Suga sighs.

Hobi: enne kondu nedan kazhiyathathu okke enikk avaniloodey nedanam....

Suga: ellam nadakkum

Hobi sighs and hugged her....






Meanwhile.

Chimmi (on call) : ah appo churukki paranja udane posting kaanum....

Yoongi: mm maybe

Chimmi: posting aytt nere vtl vannu choycholanam allel njn ningale thattum....

Yoongi: choykkam ente ponnoh.... Njn onnu prepared avatt...

Chimmi : ah athokke ayikoo but late akkaruth.....

Yoongi: nee enganelum 1 year koodey pidich nikk....

Chimmi: ath ichiri kooduthal alle?

Yoongi: eyy ath kondu alla... Kurach bank balance okke avatte.... Enikk ninte sthreedhanam onnum venda.... Ente kettiyolem pillerem nokkan ullath njn undakkikolam

Chimmi: *chuckled* ayikotte.... But vegam venam oru 6 months time tharam athinu ullil set akkanam

Yoongi: hmm.... Ah okay.....

Then avar talkatte namakk povam.....


Avidey ee chapter theernnu🙊💜
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