0500 English - First Language, Wednesday, 17/4/2024, Descriptive writing
Stepping foot into the library unveils an enchanted forest of adventures. Every corner issurrounded by vast streams of bookshelves filled with expansive knowledge and dazzling tales. Newspapers chirp about stories from far and wide to the insects studying below. A lion-like lady looms along the pathways, maintaining decorum. Only the sound of the buzsing fan can be heard through the delicate rain outside. The carpets laid across the floor like moss on rocks.
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My teacher's comments:
- Actually, she hasn't marked this one yet, thank goodness
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My thoughts
- The worst one I've written yet 💀. I did it in a rush during lunch period right before class. I'll improve, I swear.