The Prodigy (Naruto Shippuden...

By YonkoX

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Y/n Uzumaki is back in the village! It's been three years since he left. How has he been? And most of all... ... More

Bio
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5 (Start of Shion Arc)
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10 (End of Shion Arc)
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14 (Start of Kigakure Arc)
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20 (End of Kigakure arc)
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47

Chapter 29

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By YonkoX

After reading the comments and seen that some people were upset about the fight and how it doesnt make sense at all, let me break it down.

1) Konan and ALL of the six paths of pain had been buffed up so they are not like their anime counterparts
2) I'm not going to lie, I should have never made Y/n run out of chakra as someone did say he is an Uzumaki and a jinchiriki which is true but it just worked for plot convenience
3) This fight was also to humble Y/n a little and to take him out the picture so people like Naruto and Sakura can shine since they haven't been seen much

I hope this clears everything up.

It starts with Naruto and Kakashi walking towards the Hokage's office as they both enter to see Tsunade, Shizune, Sai, Sakura and even Fugasaku there.

Naruto: Huh? What is going on?

Everyone has sad faces on as they were looking at Naruto

Fugasaku: So he is Jiraiya-boy's student and the twin of Y/n-boy?

Tsunade: Yes...this is Naruto Uzumaki. The "Child of Prophecy" That you mentioned.

Naruto: Why is a geezer frog here? What does he want

Tsunade: Oi! Watch your mouth, Naruto! This is Lord Fugasaku one of the great sages at mount myoboku.

Naruto: So! What does he want with me?

Tsunade: He is here to speak to you.

Fugasaku: You are, without doubt, Jiraiya-boy's student and your attitude is a bit like Y/n's!

Naruto: Jiraiya-boy!? You talk as though Pervy sage is a little kid! Who do you think you are!

Tsunade: What did I say!? I said to watch your mouth Naruto!

Shizune: He is the man who taught Jiraiya sage jutsu. He is his master

Fugasaku starts to laugh

Fugasaku: Pervy Sage huh? What a fitting name for Jiraiya-boy!

Naruto: So what do you want with me then?

Fugasaku: I don't know where to start....where should I begin...

Fugasaku thinks for a moment

Fugasaku: The most important thing is.....Y/n-boy is gravely injured and probably dead

Naruto looks at Fugasaku with a straight face

Naruto: Eh?

Naruto: W-what are you talking about?

Everyone's faces were that of very sad looks as Sakura was almost on the verge of tears as well as Tsunade and Shizune

Fugasaku: I know this is sudden...

Fugasaku sighs

Fugasaku: For some time, it was rumoured that the leader of the Akatsuki was in the hidden rain village. So Jiraiya-boy personally asked Y/n-boy to come with him on the mission with him to which Y/n-boy agreed to.

Sakura: The leader of the Akatsuki was in the hidden rain?

Sai: It is a hard place to get into

Kakashi nods

Kakashi: But they were still able to get in

Fugasaku: There, Y/n-boy and Jiraiya-boy come up against the leader Pain.

Fugasaku: Pain was a former student of Jiraiya-boy.

Sakura: Student!? Jiraiya-sensei had students?

Tsaunde explains to them about Nagato, Konan and Yahiko

Tsunade: I didn't expect them to turn out like that...

Kakashi: But to corner the likes of Y/n and Lord Jiraiya..? How did Pain do it?

Fugasaku: He possessed the rinnegan just like Y/n-boy!

Kakashi was shocked

Sakura: The rinnegan?

Shizune explains the rinnegan to Sakura and how it's a jutsu that was with the sage of six paths

Fugasaku: And not only that...there were six of them who had the rinnegan also!

Kakashi: No way! How is that possible!?

Fugasaku: We learnt the trick of Pain but Jiraiya-boy is currently looking after Y/n so he can't tell us right now

Fugasaku looks down to the ground

Fugasaku: Y/n-boy decided to go up against the main Pain alone...we were not able to know what in the world happened to him till we saw him floating on the river

Sakura and Tsunade looks down to the ground...

Fugasaku: We tried to escape! But Y/n got hit with blasts and paper from the blue haired girl. And that then led us to now...

Fugasaku looks at Naruto

Fugasaku: I have now told you everything...

Naruto was looking down at the ground tears about to swell in his eyes

Naruto: You let them go didn't you granny..?

Tsunade looks at Naruto with a weary face

Tsunade: That's right

Naruto: Why would you allow such a reckless thing!? You let my brother and Pervy Sage go into a reckless place like that!? How dare you.!!!!

Naruto started screaming but Kakashi holds him back

Kakashi: Enough Naruto! You of all people should know how Lady Hokage is feeling...

Naruto looks at Tsunade as she looks absolutely depressed with the fact she had almost lost Y/n and Jiraiya at the same time....she almost lost her loved ones

Naruto: Damn it!

Naruto turns around to the door and walks off

Sakura: Naruto!? Where are you going!

Naruto looks towards the door

Naruto: If Pervy sage was the fifth Hokage instead of Granny..he wouldn't have let Granny take such a risk! Never!

Naruto opens the door and walks out. Sakura was about to go after him but Tsunade says her name

Tsunade: Sakura...it's alright. Just let him be.

Kakashi; I apologise lord Fugasaku...

Fugasaku: It's okay..I really believe that that boy loved Y/n-boy and Jiraiya-boy...

Naruto walked out of the Hokage's office as he starts to think of the times with him and Y/n and all the times that they were together and all the good times that they had

Naruto: I know that he may not be dead...I really hope that he isn't dead!!

Naruto continues to walk through the village with a depressed look as he feels wind past right past him as he looks up

Naruto: Y/n...

Naruto kept seeing things that reminded him of Y/n which causes him to smile. Naruto walks and sees Iruka

Iruka: Yo Naruto! I heard you were quite active on missions! Everyone in the village is talking about you! How about we go and catch up with some ramen?

Naruto looks down to the ground

Naruto: No thanks....

Naruto walks off leaving Iruka to wonder what happened to Naruto and what causes him to be like this.

Timeskip

Naruto was sitting on his bed as he looked to the other bed that was there but didn't see Y/n sitting there at all

Naruto: Why...

Naruto opens the door to his and Y/n's apartment as he walks towards a store that him and Y/n always used to steal from. He then sits down on a bench....

And just cries....

Iruka: Naruto...

Naruto wipes his tears as Iruka walks closer to him

Iruka: I heard what happened about Y/n....

Naruto stays there in silence

Naruto: I would have wanted him to watch over me...like he always did...I wanted him just maybe to see me become hokage

Iruka: He isn't fully dead Naruto...he still might have a chance

Naruto: But it's a small chance....and I don't know...

Iruka: I know Y/n wouldn't want you to be sad forever. He saw you as a brother he loved! He would never want you to be so depressed

Naruto: Thank you...Iruka-sensei...

Thanks for reading!!

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