Devir FF-Saanson Ko

By srushtiloveskv18

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Karanvir Sharma a strict IAS officer crosses path with Debattama Saha a budding singer and a student,The stor... More

Character Sketch
Chapter-1
Chapter-2
chapter-3
chapter-4
chapter-5
chapter-6
chapter-7
chapter-8
chapter-9
chapter-10
chapter-11
chapter-12
chapter-13
chapter-14
chapter-15
chapter-16
chapter-17
chapter-18
A good bye note
chapter-19
chapter-20
Chapter-21
chapter-22
chapter-23
chapter-24
chapter-25
chapter-26
chapter-27
chapter-28
chapter-29
chapter-30
chapter-31
chapter-32
chapter-33
chapter-34
chapter-35
chapter-36
chapter-37
chapter-38
chapter-39
chapter-40
chapter-41
chapter-42
chapter-43
chapter-44
chapter-45
chapter-46
chapter-47
chapter-48
chapter-49
chapter-50
chapter-51
chapter-52
chapter-53
chapter-54
chapter-55
chapter-56
chapter-57
chapter-58
chapter-59
chapter-60
chapter-61
chapter-62
chapter-63
chapter-64
chapter-65
chapter-67
chapter-68
chapter-69
chapter-70
chapter-71
chapter-72
chapter-73
chapter-74

Chapter-66

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By srushtiloveskv18

Chandigarh
Sharma's Mansion
Karanvir's Room

It was a beautiful sunny morning. Birds were chirping, and there was a pin drop silence, and Karan walked out from the washroom

This was Karanvir's Outfit





Karan exuded charm and sophistication as he donned a crisp white shirt, perfectly complemented by his brown formal attire.The first three buttons of his shirt were left casually undone, adding a touch of effortless allure to his appearance.

Karan looks at himself in the mirror and sprays perfume on himself and wears his wristwatch and leaves his shirt 3 buttons open as it is now a style of him to leave his 3 buttons open

And he sets his blazer and he turns and was about to leave but just when his gaze falls on a photo which was placed on tea table and fumes in anger after seeing the photo and he walks towards the photo and picks it up and says ujjwal....ujjwal....

And ujjwal comes running in room

Ujjwal-ji sir

Karan glares at him and says yeh photo mera room mein kaise aayi

Ujjwal looks at the photo and gulps in fear and says sorry sir pata nahi kaise aayi

Karan-tumhe kaise pata nahi kiseko bhi permission nahi hai mera room mein aane ki siva tumhare

Ujjwal-haan sir woh hi pata nahi kaise

Karan-nahi aane chahiye yeh sab mera room mein

Ujjwal-ji sir next time se dhyaan rakhoga main

Karan gives the photo to ujjwal and glances at the photo, but within a second, he removes his eyes from the photo, and he walks away by murmuring subha subha mood off kare diye

Ujjwal looks at the photo sadly

This was the photo

Drawing Room

Karan walks downstairs, and tushar sees him and greets him

Tushar-good morning, sir

Karan-good morning kya hai mera aaj ka schedule

Tushar-aaj aapki bohat important meeting hai CM sir ne aapko milne bulaiye hai kuch bohat urgent hai

Karan-thik hai phir, let's leave now mujhe bhi site visit karena jaane hai phir meeting ke liye nikalne hai

And he was about to leave

But just when he hears a femina voice, Karan...

Karan doesn't turn and takes a deep breath and says, "How many times should l tell you don't call me Karan

And that voice says problem kya hai iss mein

And a melodious voice rings in his ears Karannn....I love you Karannn...Karannn chodaiye na koi dekh lega,yeh main aapka liye lekar aayi hoon aaj woh rose day tha na toh sab lok ek dusre ko rose de rahe tha toh maine socha main aapka liye bhi le aao rose

Karan closes his eyes, and he raises his eyebrow in irritation and turns and looks at the owner of that voice, and finds bhavna

Karan-tumhe kitna baar smajho main bhavna ki don't call me Karan

Bhavna-toh kya kaho main tumhe Karan

And she holds his hand and Karan looks at her hand which is holding his hand and he removes her hand from him and says karanvir thik hai

Bhavna gets angry but she hides her anger and smiles at him sweetly and says tum office jaa rahe ho breakfast toh kare lo,tum aaj kal kuch khaate bhi nahi ho zyadya chef ne baneiye hai tumhare liye Punjabi breakfast plz kha...

Karan-tum kyun mujhe hamesh kehta rehti ho ki mujhe yeh karena chahiye aur yeh nahi karena chahiye,are you my wife? No,fit this in your mind

Bhavna-haan main thodi hoon tumhari biwi tumhari biwi toh debat...

Karan points index finger at her and shouts mera ghar mein yeh naam aane bhi nahi chahiye,mujhe iss naam se nafrat hai

And his eyes get fierce, and he leaves, and tushar goes behind him

Bhavna-itna hi nafrat hai toh usse replace kyun nahi kare deta aapne zindagi mein,3 mahina se tumhare saath rehti hoon lok happily married hokare biwi ko cheat kare deta hai aur ek tum ho l waiting for that day Karan jab tum mujhse shaadi kareke mujhe debattama ki jhaag de dooge

And she smiles evily

Karanvir's Room

Ujjwal was cleaning the room but the only question which was coming to his mind was that how come that photo came in this room as after Karan leaves and he cleans the room,locks it and the keys are just with him and
Karan then who must have kept the photo here
But the sad part was the mansion,room and Karan were not the same which they used to be once and each day he prays to waheguru to make everything even more beautiful than before

Mumbai
Babulnath mandir

The temple was crowded as usual, and there was a rush and long line for preaching Shiva ji

And just when a beautiful girl enters with puja thali in her hand

She was wearing a beautiful white color dress with red dupatta, and she was looking breathtaking, and she was none other than debattama

This was debattama's Outfit

Debattama radiated elegance in her stunning white dress, adorned with a vibrant red dupatta that draped gracefully around her. Her luscious locks cascaded freely, framing her face with an ethereal beauty that captivated all who beheld her. With every step, she exuded an aura of charm and allure, her presence drawing admiring glances from all directions. In her enchanting presence, it was impossible not to be mesmerized by her undeniable allure and timeless grace.

Everyone in the queue was looking at her

Lady 1-yeh ladki bohat sundar hai na roz aati hai yahan

Lady 2-haan handsome pati maagne aati hogi

Lady 1-nahi mile payega khud itna sundar hai toh itna Handsome pati kaise mileage bhagwan 19-20 hi deta hai perfect Jodi nahi baneti

And deba was looking at Shiva Ji and was smiling

An old lady who was standing behind debattama politely says beta kya baat hai tum roz aati ho kya maagne aati hoon bhagwan se asie accha var woh toh tumhe mile hi jaiyegi itna pyaari jo ho

Deba hears this and softly smiles at her
Says aunty ji koi bohat special wish hai mera usska liye main yahan aati hoon

Old lady-pati chahiye mera pota hai bohat acchi salary hai khush rakh sakte hai tujhe bane jao humari bahu

Deba feels weird at this proposal, but she was an old lady, so she didn't want to hurt her

Deba-nahi aunty yeh proposal mera kaam ka nahi hai

And she turns and her turns come

Deba puts water on shiva ji and then puts milk and while doing so she closes her eyes and says bhola baba aapse roz main ek hi cheez toh maagne aati hoon aur woh hai karan ki khushi,unki success aur acchi health,mujhe kuch nahi chahiye Shiva ji bas aap Karan ko hamesh khush rakhane,sukhi rakhane aur bohat success dena unko,woh sahi salamat rahe meri toh yeh hi dua hai aapse

She opens her eyes and puts flowers on Shiva ji

Debattama loves Karan a lot with time her love for him grew a lot,the only thing which she wants from almighty is that karan's happiness and good health

And deba joints her hands and with closed eyes says in heart main yeh toh nahi jaante ki karan ab mujhse pyaar karte hai ya nahi par jab hum saath tha maine unka pyaar ko mehsoos kiye hai,kehta hai aapne pyaar ke saath spend kiye huaein ek pal bhi itna haseen hote hai ki usse ek pal ke sahara aap aapki pura zindagi jiya sakte ho,mujhe taqeeta dena ki main karan ke bine jiya sako,jo ki namukin hai par hum ab phir kabhi ek hosakte hai yeh bhi toh mukin nahi hai wajah aap jaante ho

And a tear drop falls on from eyes, and it falls near to Lord shiva's statue. This was a sign that God has granted her wish

Deba opens her eyes and wipes her tears and moves in sides, and she walks out

Chandigarh
Karanvir's Mansion
Drawing Room

Bhavna walks towards the sofa and says tanu,bipin aur raghav tum teeno bday party ki arrangement mein lage jao kal mera karan ka bday hai l want that to be a grant one

Bipin hears this and says par mam sir unko gussa aaye gaye toh

Bhavna-oh cmon karan gussa mein bhi mujhse pyaar hi karega jaise usse so called behanji debattama se karte tha main debattama se 1000 times more beautiful aur stylish hoon Karan akhir kitna din mujhse pass aane resist karega ek din khud hi sindoor bhar dega aur aapne bane lega

Tanu,Bipin, and Raghav exchange a look with each other and glares at bhavna they hated her so much that they were waiting for that moment wherein they would get a chance to slap her tight on face

Bhavna dreamily smiles and looks at them and says jao ab yahan se shakal kyun dekh rahe ho meri aur jo kahan hai woh ready rakhane

And they leave

Bhavna-bas ab aaj raat ka interzaar hai

And her gaze falls on karan's photo

which was kept on side table and she picks it up in her hand and roams her hand on his picture and says main tumhe majboor kare dungi kal ki party mein tumhari aur meri engagement ki announcement karena ke liye

Administrative Office
Karanvir's Cabin

Karan was flipping pages of a file and was thinking regarding an official issue, which he has came crossed and was thinking about a way to fix it

And just when there is a knock on the door , he says in his husky voice hnn Come in

Tushar walks in and says sir woh CM sir se milne jaane hai na waqt hogaye hai

Karan-haan tum chalo main aaye rahe hoon

Tushar-okay sir

And tushar was about to turn but just when his phone rang and song plays Tu zarrori sa hai mujhe ko

Karan who was closing his file hears this song and his hands gets freezed and he gets flashes of his intimate moments with debattama and a beautiful brezee touches his handsome face and he was lost in the land of memories and moments which is in the book of his beautiful life which once he had lived but he remembers something and pulls his soul and heart back from that land,as no longer he want to travel back to that land

he inhales a deep breath and then exhales it and looks up at tushar and says yeh ringtone band karo next time se yeh gaana mujhe suna nahi dena chahiye,ab jab mera cabin mein aao phone silent par rakh kare aane smajha

Tushar-okay sir

Karan stands up and walks ahead, and tushar follows him

And as karan walks out from the cabin, all female employees look at him and start hushing and gushing over his looks

Ria-shalu look at him yaar he is so hot,inki biwi kitna lucky hogi na

Shalu looks at karan and finds his shirt 4 buttons casually open, and she says haan yaar l wish humein bhi asie hi ladka mile

But karan didn't hear their convo

Driver opens the door of the car, and Karan says nahi aaj main drive karonga

Tushar looks at karan and then at the driver and signs him not to let karan drive the car

Driver nods his head and says, "Sir woh aap ghar jaate waqt drive kare lena abhi main kare leta hoon drive plz

Karan-okay waise bhi behaas kareke koi fayad nahi hai

And he gets into the car and tushar sits beside him and they droves off

Tushar looks at karan and says in mind aapka mood thik nahi hai sir aur jab mood thik na ho tab drive nahi karena chahiye,waise bhi ab aap pehle ki tarah khush nahi rehta,adhura hogaye ho aap sir,kaash ki main yeh aapko kabhi smajha paate

AfterSometime
CM office

Karan walks towards the cabin and knocks the door and he gets a reply come in

Karan walks inside and salutes him and says jai hind sir

CM stands up and salutes him back And says jai hind Karan plz have a seat

Karan sits on chair and says thank you sir,aapne mujhe bulaiye???

CM-haan woh

And he gives him a envelope and Karan takes it from his hand and pulls out a letter from it and he reads the letter and then looks at CM

CM-you are been transferred to Mumbai,congratulations and l wish you all the very best for your endeavors and l hope you will bring more good change to Mumbai also has you brought to chandigarh,aaj raat ki flight hai tumhare pharso se joining hai karan aapne khayaal rakhane

Karan's heart gets heavy at this and eyes gets red but he holds back his emotions and stands up and says sure sir jai hind
And he walks out

And as he walks out from cabin tushar sees him and says kya huaein sir

Karan-main baad mein baat karonga tumse

And he takes the keys from the driver and droves off

Tushar-kya hogaye sir ko suddenly

Karanvir's Mansion
Drawing Room

Bhavna was taking rounds around the Drawing room by wearing her night gown with very dark lipstick and open hairs

Bhavna-aaj toh karan mujhe par fida  hojaiyega debattama kya khobhsuraat thi bas pink lipgloss aur open hairs aur main toh bohat beautiful hoon,main hoon Karan ke type ki hoon

And just when Karan enters and bhavna smiles and walks towards him

Bhavna-hii Karan,you are back

Karan don't looks at her and keeps on walking and she gets irritated at this and she immediately holds his hand and keeps her hand on his shoulder from behind and says karan dekhao na mera taraf,main kitna beautiful lage rahi hoon,ek nazar toh dekh lo mujhe karan,kyun mera paas nahi aate tum,m l not hot or beautiful

Karan was boiling in fire of anger after her this action and shameless words and he jerks off her hand from his shoulder and also frees his hand from her hold and turns and looks at her with fierce red eyes and shouts how dare you

Bhavna gets scared but she says in heart Karan gussa mein hai yeh hi mauk hai karan ke pass aane ka gussa mein aadmi ka dil control mein nahi hote

Bhavna-kya galat kaha maine karan,tum Jawan ho,handsome ho,hot ho,lakho ladkiyaan maarti hai tum par aur phir bhi tum asie ho,you deserved to be loved karan,kyun nahi aate mera pass,tumhare dil mein aaj bhi debattama hai na usski khobhsuraati ka jaadu abhi tak gaye nahi hai na tumhare dil aur dimmag se issliye move on nahi kare paye rahe na tum,mera pass aaya jao karan mera pass bohat pyaar hai tumhare liye

And now karan's anger has got erupted like a volcano and he shouts bhavna mind your tongue,zubaan smabhalo aapne,hote kaun ho tum mujhse asie baatein karena wali,sirf ek dost ho meri jo itna mahino se mera ghar mein hai bine kise reason ke,kyun mujhse Chipkane ki koshish karti ho tum aur usse ladki ka naam kyun leta rehti ho tum maine bohat baar kaha hai mat lo usska naam phir kyun leti ho

Bhavna-karan jab tumhe usska naam se problem hai toh mera pass ky...

Karan snaps his finger infront of her and says mujhe dur raho bhavna bohat dur raho warna main bhul jaoge ki hum college time friends hai aur yeh shameless baatein mera samne aaj ke baad mat karena warna woh rahe darwaaz you are free to go out don't waste my time

And he hurriedly goes upstairs
Bhavna squeezes her fist and says itna Badi insult isski bohat padi kimyaat chukane padegi karan

Karanvir's Room

Karan enters in room and removes his blazer and places it on sofa And he sits on sofa and looks at the room and gets the flashes of him chasing deba,they kissing eachother on bed and his gaze falls on a sofa chair and he gets the flash back of deba sitting in his lap and him sitting on sofa

Ab naa dil ko kisi ki aadat ho
Ab naa dil ko kisi ki aadat ho
Ab naa phir se kabhi mohabbat ho

And by now karan's eyes were moist,he started getting flashes right from his first meet with debattama till how it all came to an end and as he remembers that very last moment,his emotions got changed like the needle of clock

Itni bhi khwaahish naa rahi
Kisi se chahat ho

And he takes a deep breath to bring himself back in his current state

Teri mujhko naa ab zaroorat ho
Teri mujhko naa ab zaroorat ho
Ab na phir se kabhi mohabbat ho

Dardon ke saaye mein
Milti ab raahat hai
Teri tamanna nahi
Tujhse judaa hoke seekha ab jeena hai
Ek tu zaroori nahi
Itni bhi khwahish naa rahi
Kisi ki hasrat ho

But the very next moment he cracks up and tears starts flowing down his eyes as this place chandigarh gave him everything which anyone could wish for

Dil pe teri na ab hukumat ho
Dil pe teri na ab hukumat ho
Ab na phir se kabhi mohabbat ho

But today when he is about to leave this city and place forever he doesn't have that things in his life

Karan*in heart*-chandigarh mein mera Bachpan pura huaein,yahan DM bane kare aaye aur yahan hi mom dad ko bhi hamesh ke liye kho diye aur yahan hi toh mujhe woh bhi mile thi na,jise main itna nafrat karte hoon jitna ki duniya mein koi kise se nahi karte par chandigarh se main aaj kuch lekar nahi jaa rahe yahan hi sab mile tha aur yahan hi sab mujhse cheen(snatch) gaye

Ab na dil ko kisi ki aadat ho
Ab na phir se kabhi mohabbat ho

Mumbai
Evening

Debattama packs her bag and indu sees her

Indu-deba hogaye kaam accha ka

Deba-ji didi aaj ka jitna bhi appointments tha parlor ke sab pura kare diye maine ab kal aaogi

Indu-accha thik hai dhyaan se jaane

Deba smiles at her and says ji didi

Deba walks out and pushes the door and walks out from beauty salon,debattama left her successful corporate career post that terrible incident where in she got the punishment of breathing without her breath,from then till today she has not got completely prepared to start working in corporate,so for sometime she has joined in a parlor and works here as a beautician so that she can manage her daily expenses and can have a decent living for herself

Deba-aaj thoda sa late hogaye,ghar par mera koi wait kare rahe hai subha se aaj toh bohat naraz hojaiyega woh...

Who must be waiting for debattama?why karan hates deba so much??? Why they got separated,what destiny holds for them....

For all the answers stay tuned for next update














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