Ashiana ( New )

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Chapter-1 Meri Duniya Hai Tujhme Kahin
An information with the msg for the Silent Readers
Chapter-3 Satranga Hai Ye Ishq Re

Chapter-2 Mujhe Apni Dulhan Banao

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"Woww..So many dishes..," Naina exclaimed excitedly as the female servitors removed the plates of the bowls

Rajveer smiled, looking at this cheerful Naina.

They were in a grand Dining Room. And many food items were kept on a large beautiful table.

"Wo..wo kya hai usme ?," Naina asked alluding her finger towards a golden basket. The reason of her attraction towards it was the items kept in it were shining. The basket was on distance from the reach of her hand but near to Rajveer who was sitting opposite to her

"Always like a curious kitten..," He thought in his mind

"Ye yahan ke special fruits hain..,"
Rajveer replied with his enchanting smile," Khaogi..," He asked further

Naina nodded avidly.

As a female attendant standing nearby extended her hand to give that basket to Naina, Rajveer showed her his palm and himself did the work.

"Aap kyun ?," Naina asked in a little low voice

"Special guest ka special welcome hona chahiye..Right, Capt. Naina Ah Singh..," He stated smilingly while staring deep into her eyes

And Naina's cheeks turned pink. Also she felt huge happiness, hearing her name in his special style, after such a long time.

In a respectful manner, Rajveer now signalled those attendants to leave.

"Aree par..," Before Naina could object, they were already left from there on his wish

"Ye kya kiya aapne ?," She asked cutely

"Why..Do you want those Haseenaas to stay with us ?," He questioned back with a playful smile and Naina's face flushed this time

"Always a Master of Strategy and Communication class..," Her mind processed

"Enjoy..," He said,not giving her more time to analyse on it though she could already do it that he himself wanted to do the courtesy for her

She tasted the fruit.

"Kaisa laga ?," He asked

"Umm..Majedar..," She answered enjoying it fully

Rajveer smiled.

"Now try that silver one..," When she finished the first fruit, Rajveer said to try another one

"This one ?," Naina asked chirpily while picking a fruit from the basket

"Yeah," Rajveer sounded

And Naina immediately tasted the fruit with excitement

"How is it..?," After sometime, he asked to know her response

"Ye to aur bhi jyada achchaa hai.
Sachchi..," She told with astonished expressions on her face

And Rajveer's smile became wider.

"I'am sorry..Main to bhool hi gayi..
Aap bhi lo na..," She produced in a low voice, feeling embarrassed

Rajveer giggled, seeing her expressions and pronounced,

"It's okay. I'm already done and full too..You enjoy because you are hungry..,"

"Are you sure ?," She asked

"💯 %," Rajveer replied

"Okay," Naina resonated and started this time with the dishes kept near her.

"Soo delicious..,"

She was tasting all the dishes one by one and was also sharing her opinions about them with Rajveer.

All the while, he was only listening to her and looking at her with extreme love.

"Sir, Sir..," She snapped

"Hmm," He sounded, blinking his eyes

"Wo curd ka bowl pass kijiye na..," Naina requested

"Haan..Just a second," Rajveer
said while lifting up the bowl and forwarding his hand towards her

She held the bowl and peeped into his eyes deeply. That forced him to think about their previous moment in the mess of KMA.

"Curd mera favourite hua karta tha..," Naina exclaimed, keeping the bowl on an empty place near her on the table. ( imagine the song in the background )

कहानी सुनो, ज़ुबानी सुनो..हां
मुझे प्यार हुआ था..मुझे प्यार हुआ था...

"But I left it completely. Phir kabhi mann hi nahi kiya khane ka...
Never..," She went ahead, now lifting up two small bowls from her side

कहानी सुनो, हां...ज़ुबानी सुनो..
मुझे प्यार हुआ था..मुझे प्यार हुआ था...

Rajveer could clearly sense her pain in her voice. He knew very well what she meant by.

"Aaj phir salon baad ise khane ka mann kar raha hai..," She added, putting the curd in both the small bowls

दीवानी हुई, मस्तानी हुई..
तेरी चाहत में कितनी बेगानी हुई..

"to aap mujhe company denge na..,"
Naina asked with her teary eyes, now handing over him one of the small bowls between the two

"Zaroor..," Rajveer proclaimed smiling slightly with his wet eyes

Both enjoyed curd, looking at each other with peaceful smile on their faces

"Sweet..," Rajveer asked her at last

Naina nodded.

As Rajveer raised his hand to pickup the plate of the sweets, Naina held his hand, saying,

"Unhoon..Aap nahi..Let me do the courtesy this time," She requested very softly and Rajveer couldn't deny her

हो ओ..दीवानी हुई, मस्तानी हुई..
तेरी चाहत में कितनी बेगानी हुई..

From the plate of sweets, she picked one of the piece and forwarded her hand to his mouth.

"Naina pehle..," Rajveer couldn't complete as Naina requested him again,

"Please,"

He tilted his head in a "Yes".

Holding her index finger and thumb, He took the half piece of the sweet, expecting that she will now loose her hold from it but when Naina didn't do it, he narrowed his brows a little unable to understand her intention.

Naina cordially smiled and took her hand back with that half piece of the sweet in her hand and with all the love and respect, she ate it, commenting,

"This was the best thing till now that I enjoyed..,"

सदाएं सुनो, हां...जफाएं सुनो
मुझे प्यार हुआ है..मुझे प्यार हुआ है...

Rajveer was again taken over by her boldness.

He graciously smiled back with his scarlet cheeks.

While drinking water,Naina smilingly shook her head over his blush.

"Ghoomne chalein," She asked, leaving her chair now

"Whatt ?," Rajveer asked back with little shock while leaving his own chair

"I mean aapka sundar sa Ashiana ghumane.," Naina cleared "Aapko dhundhate hue adha to maine khud se hi ghoom liya tha but I guess there is much more to see..," She further appended with vivaciousness while crossing him

But Rajveer held her wrist.

Naina stopped but didn't turn to him.

"Ruko Naina..Pehle Meri baat suno," His voice grave and authoritative

Naina closed her eyes once to get some strength to speak what she wanted to say.

"Please, Sir..Kuch mat kahiye..Ji lene dijiye mujhe in khubsurat palon ko jo naseeb se mujhe chand lamhon ke liye mile hain..," She pleaded

सदाएं सुनो, जफाएं सुनो..हां
मुझे प्यार हुआ है..मुझे प्यार हुआ है...

And Rajveer sighed deeply feeling helpless.

But again with firmness, he stated,

"Thik hai..Lekin sirf kuch pal..
Dhyan rakhna, sirf kuch pal..,"

Naina nodded lightly still not looking at him. He left her wrist and she walked ahead sieging her tears inside her eyes.

मुझे प्यार हुआ है..मुझे प्यार हुआ है...

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Dehradun Hospital

"Dr. Dr..How is the condition ?," A man voiced out

"Until we do a thorough check, it would not be right to say anything right now..Have some patience Capt. Aalekh," Dr. Jayesh spoke and entered the operation theatre

Aalekh's eyes emerged tears. Nilu put her hand on his shoulder, giving him some strength. He held back her palm tightly.

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"Sab kitna sundar aur aalishan hai na..," Naina commented while slowly and softly holding his hand during their walk

"Hmm," Rajveer hummed, looking at her affectionately

He was making her visit the other magnificent rooms of his Asiana which she hadn't seen.

All the while she was holding his hand and also glancing at him on time to time with pure love.

तेरे आने की खुशबू, तेरे जाने का मंजर..
तुझे मिलना पड़ेगा अब जमाना हुआ..।।

While visiting across a lavish bedroom, Naina asked naively,

"This is your Bedroom ?..To wo
kya tha jahan aap mile the mujhe ? Wo aapka Bedroom nahi tha ?,"

As usually, her questionnaire was open and as always, he was satisfying her curiosity by answering her questions.

"Wo bhi tha. I have 4 bedrooms here..," He gave the answer

"Ohh..Got it now but I guess this one is the most beautiful..," She remarked

And Rajveer simpered tenderly.

Now they moved in other area, seeing which Naina articulated sprightly,

"And here is the chair of the King of this Asiana where he sits and passes orders..,"

Rajveer chuckled on her humorous tone.

"Yahan order nahi diye jate bus pyar se request ki jati hai kyunki zaroorat hi nahi padti kabhi order dene ki. Didn't you observe how I was speaking to all of them and behaving with them?," Firstly, he explicated and then asked her

"Yeah, you are right, Sir. That's why you were talking to all of them with so much respect and love. It's really so so sweet..," Naina adduced, as she recalled his talking way with those attendants especially with females

"Absolutely but what did you think Capt. Naina Ah Singh ?, " Rajveer asked teasingly, in her ear

"Aaa..wo..kuch bhi to nahi..,"
Naina moved ahead, hiding her embarrassed face

Rajveer grinned, following her.

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"It's really so amazing...," Naina announced, seeing the two marvelous views before her eyes

Now, it was the time for capturing the nature's beauty again.

"I consider these two places to be the most beautiful places here especially the first one..," Rajveer pronounced

"Indeed, it is..," Naina rhymed with him

Visiting, two other aesthetic places with him, Naina now reached to a winsome garden.

While sauntering there, she evolved a small wish to embellish her hair with Gajra ( Flower garland ) so with full respect and love, she requested to the gardener pair to make one for her which they happily accepted.

Rajveer smiled a little as somewhere he was getting worried now from inside.

In no time, the pair prepared a beautiful Gajra for her. Naina thanked them with a gratitude filled smile.

"It's getting late, Naina..," Rajveer reminded her

Naina turned and moved to him.

"Ise laga dijiye na, Please..," She solicited him, ignoring his statement

सदाएं सुनो, जफाएं सुनो..हां
मुझे प्यार हुआ है..मुझे प्यार हुआ है...

Rajveer lovingly fixed the Gazra in her hair and Naina pleasantly smiled.

Holding her both shoulders, he made her turn to him and spoke in a grave voice,

"Bahut ho gaya, Naina. Avoid karna band karo ab. Tumne kuch aur lamhe chahe aur maine wo bhi de diye. Now, listen to me..,"

"I will..Bus ek akhiri mauka aur de dijiye..Mandir le jakar ek baar bus mujhe, apke sath itne sundar aur pyare lamhon ko dene ke liye, Bhagwan ka shukriya kar lene dijiye phir main aapko nahi rokungi..," Naina beseeched

It was the matter of Thanking to Almighty, so Rajveer didn't have any other option except to accept her wish.

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Dehradun Hospital

"Dr. Narayan," Leaving his bench, Aalekh instantly ran to him as he saw Dr. Narayan, coming out of the operation theatre

"6 goliyan lagin hain. The condition is critical but we are trying our best..Don't worry..," Dr. Narayan who is familiar to Nilu's family, informed to Aalekh

But Aalekh didn't get relief as he could read his dull and tensed face so asked bluntly,

"Is there any hope, Dr. ?,"

Dr. Narayan took a second, before framing the sentences.

"Look Aalekh, A doctor can make his true efforts that we are already doing, rest of what is to happen and what not, it is the will of God only.,"
He responded insightfully

Aalekh's eyes now shed tears, followed by Nilu.

Dr. Narayan put his hands on both of their shoulders, before leaving.

"Papa..Mumma..," Nihar's voice caught Aalekh and Nilu's attention

Reminder- Nihar- 5 years old son of Aalekh and Nilu

He arrived here with his grandparents.

"Aalekh beta..Nilu beta..Naina...
Ky..kya kaha Dr. ne ?," They asked with their scared faces while holding pool of tears in their eyes

Aalekh and Nilu looked at each other with their wet eyes when Nihar held his grandparents' index fingers firmly in his tiny hands as if trying to convey them the msg that he is with them.

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Climbing up the stairs of the most sacred place,

Naina now reached to the Divinity's home with Rajveer where there was peace and tranquility in every particle of the air because of the blessings of Lord Shiva And Goddess Parvati.

Rajveer and Naina both joined their hands and bowed down their heads with full faith before the statues of Supreme Power.

"Mujhe takat dena Ishwar ki main apne maksad me kamyab ho paun..," Naina prayed and opened her eyes and started searching something among the puja's items

"Mujhe himmat do Bhagwan ki is baar thoda sa bhi kamjor pade bina, main Naina se wo bol paun jo itni der se usse kahne ki koshish kar raha hoon..," Rajveer prayed and opened his eyes with determination

"Go back, Isse pahle ki tumhare vapas jane ke sare rashte band ho jayein..," He produced with heavy feelings but his voice full resolute.

Naina's hand became stilled for a second and couldn't move for quite a while but again she put her hand to work with force.

"Kya dhundh rahi ho ? Tumne suna nahi what I said. Vapass jao yaha se..Just leavee this place of mine...," Seeing that Naina is still not listening to him, Rajveer raised up his voice this time, producing some bitter words

But Naina smiled as she found that what she was searching for.

"Chali jaungi..," She answered this time and turned to him holding the thing in her hand

Rajveer contracted his brows.

"Ek baar meri mang me ye sindur bhar dijiye. Phir main yahan se chali jaungi...," Naina averred with smile while forwarding her hand to him

है तमन्ना, मुझे अपनी दुल्हन बनाओ
मेरी मांग को अपने प्यार से सजाओ..।।

Her voice extremely calm and compose but Rajveer felt an upheaval inside him.

"What," Came out from his mouth

"Kya hua aise shock me kyun dekh rahe hain. Mana ki hume hamare pyar ko zahir karne ka bhi mauka nahi mila..lekin ye ( looking towards the Deities )..Ye to hamesha se hi hamare us sachche magar adhure pyar ke sakshi rahe hain na..To kyun na aaj inke hi samne, aap hamare us adhure pyar ko uski manzil dekar use poora kar dein..," Naina voiced out meaningfully

तेरी लेले बलाएं, तेरे सदके उतारें
है तमन्ना हमें, आप अपना बनायें...।।

Rajveer fell in a big dilemma while Naina was gawking at him, holding her breath in her throat.

नहीं मुश्किल वफ़ा, ज़रा देखो यहाँ
तेरी आँखों में बसता है, मेरा जहाँ..।।

And Rajveer again looked back in her eyes with his thoughtful ones. There was a turmoil inside him which Naina could apparently see.

सुन तो जरा, जो मैं कह ना सकी
मेरी दुनिया भी हो, तुम ही असरा..।।

She conveyed her emotions through her eyes which were entreating from him to listen her and fulfill her desire.

दुआएं सुनो, सजाएं सुनो
हमें प्यार हुआ था, हमें प्यार हुआ है..।।

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Note- I have edited here the lines of Kaifi Khalil's song "Kahani Suno" as per the demand of the update.

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What do you think ?

1 ) Rajveer, Naina ki mang bharega

2 ) Aur kya Naina vapas jayegi

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