NAYA AASHIYANA

Par Kritika_1809

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Slow Updates Based on 5 years leap Join the journey of two adorable couples tanshi and abhira This story i... Plus

Author's note
Character sketch
Oberois
Birlas
Yaadein
Responsibilities
Maa Ka Vada
London Calling
Ajeeb sa Ehsas
Angel Or Zindagi?
Phir Le Aaya Dil ❤
Toota Hua Dil 💔
badalti cheejhe
Inauguration Ceremony
Beeta Kal ?
Purane Dard, Naye Ghaav 💔
Heartbroken Goodbye 💔
Jana Anjana Rishta 🥹
Miracle Baby
Shocking Reality (Tanu's Entry🎉)
Sach Ka Samna
Regret🥺
Abhi's Pain 🥺💔
Akshu's Guilt😭💔
When Abhi Met Junior 💕
Opening the curtains from the Past
Announcement
Manshi Met Akshu🥹
We Are With you 🫂
Family Ka Pyar🥹
Aaj din chadheya😍💕
Akshu's firm stand🔥🔥
Accha ji main Hari 😌😂

Dosti ka Dard 🫂

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Par Kritika_1809

Flashback ▶️:

Ak: Rishi tumhe yaha ke colleges ke baare main pata hai kya

Biji: akshu beta Rishi ne khud yahi se padhai ki hai kal hi vo udaipur Gaya tha apne result ke baare main Raji ko batane ke liye
(Let me tell you biji manshi ke father ko Raji keheti hai , jinhone 'kasam' serial dekhi thi unhe pata hoga)

Biji: are puttar mai tujhse puchna hi bhul gayi kesa hai Raji kya kaha usne use pata hai na tum dono yaha ho ?

Ri: biji voh

Man: are bi biji aap bahot sawal karte ho obviously papa ko pata hai Varna vo pareshan ho jate na , aapko call aaya kya unka ki ham yaha aaye kya ham kaha hai nahi na dekho pata hai papa ko isliye call nahi Kiya, hai na hai na Bhai

Rishi nods reluctantly,akshu suspiciously look at them but not said anything

Man: akshu tum college ke bare main kyu puch Rahi thi professor banne ka irada hai kya

Ak: nahi Manpreet actually student banne ka irada hai

Ri: akshu tumne kaha tum shadi shuda ho i mean education pura nahi hua hai kya tumhara

Ak: Rishi mera education pura hua hai masters Kiya hai maine par ab mujhe ek alag field main Jana hai

Man: kaunse batao na plz

Ak: buisness management studies, actually bachpan se yehi karna tha par main khud pe sure nahi thi par ab mujhe yehi karna hai kyunki Mera pehela education mai use nahi kar sakti kisi bhi job main aur aur main nahi bata sakti uske baare main I am I am sorry (she remembered her music and music therapy job)

Ri: akshu don't be sorry tumhe taqlif hogi aesi baat kabhi bhi ham tumse nahi puchenge aur ab tum iss parivar ka hissa ho tumhari bhi apne opinions aur privacy hogi jiska ham respect karenge

Ak: thank you Rishi par vo college

Man: are Bhai ne bhi toh BMS Kiya tha tum bhi unhi ke University se karo na kyu Bhai

Ri: yeh accha idea hai mujhe bhi tassli rahegi

Ak: kya sach main tumhari university main mujhe admission milega

Ri: kyu nahi milega bilkul milega

Ak: toh ab sirf job ki tension hai

Manshi: job?

Ak: haa job sirf padhai nahi main part time job bhi karungi

Rishi was about to said no

Ak: don't worry khudko jyada stress nahi dungi bas thode ghante ka kaam karungi jitna mujhse ho sake

Ri: okay sweetheart, ab breakfast ke baad college chale ya kal Jana hai ?

Ak: nahi nahi brekfast ke baad chalte hai

Biji: thik hai chalo aa jao sab

After breakfast:

Akshu takes blessings from biji

Biji: Aaj hi Tera admission ho puttar

Ak: thank u biji

Manshi: chale

Ak: chalo

Manshi/ak: bye biji

Biji: dhyan se jana bacchon

Akshu's admission got done in rishi's University, akshu feeling so happy manshi adores her genuine big smile (which they saw first time)

Rishi hugs akshu lightly, akshu hugs him back

Ri: happy?

Ak: super duper happy mujhe laga hi nahi tha itni jaldi admission ho jayega

Man: ho gaya na doll ab khush

Manpreet joins the hug

Ak: bahot khush

Trio breaks the hug

Man: chote akshu ko leke gadi main baith Mai abhi aaya

Man: okay Bhai

After sometime Rishi comes

Ri: akshu shopping chale

Ak: shopping par kyu

Ri: kal se ham london aaye hai aur tumhare pass koi kapde nahi hai Aaj toh mai jo hospital ke waqt tumhare liye 2 dress laya tha usse Kam ho gaya lekin ab tum clg jaogi toh naye kapde lagenge na

Ak: Rishi it's ok na ye 2 dress acche hai mai yehi pehnungi baad main first salary hogi tab le lungi kuch mujhe jyada kapde nahi chahiye

Ri: no akshu koi compromise nahi mai tumhe aese 2 dresses main gujara karne nahi dunga ek kaam karte hai tumhari first salary hogi tab tum mujhe kapde dilana ok par meri maa ab plz chalo shoping kal tumahara clg ka first day hai I want that to be best okay

Man: ha akshu yaar plz kal ka din toh special hoke rahega

Akshu smiles seeing their affection towards her

Ak: tum dono manoge nahi na, chalo

After shopping they return home,

Ak: kya tha yeh tum dono ne 4 dress bolke mujhe 10 dress dilwa diye wo bhi mehenge wale kyun simple Punjabi dress bole the na maine

Man: akshu c'mon yaar itni pyari si ladki clg main Punjabi dress pehen ke ghumegi not fair ye London hai

Ri: aur london ko bhi pata chale dunia ki most cutest girl uske yaha padhne aayi hai look tum Jo bhi pehnogi acchi lagogi par Western clothes main tumhe clg student wali feeling aayegi

Ak: Rishi main Western lene wali thi par meri salary ke baad abhi Jo afford kar sakti hun

Ri: chup bilkul salary hogi tab ham dono ko shopping pe le Jana ham mana nahi karenge lekin ab main

Manshi: ham tumhari ek nahi sunenge

Ak: okay my shaitan doston chalo ab biji wait kar rahi hogi

Man: biji ham aa gaye

Biji: akshu inn dono se kaho baat na kare mujhse

Ri: biji kya hua hai

Biji: tum dono abhi bhi batana chahoge kya hua hai

Ri: biji kya, papa?

Biji: Raji ko phone Kiya tha maine tab pata chala tum dono ke liye uska phone kyu nahi aaya

Man: biji voh

Biji: Manpreet jhooth mat bolna iss baar , jan gayi hun main phone nahi aaya kyunki use tum dono ki koi chinta nahi hai phone nahi aaya kyunki usne tum dono ko ghar se nikal diya hai

Akshu shocked, Rishi Manpreet bends their head down in shame

Biji: itni badi baat chupa di tum dono ne mujhse aur keh rahe the sab thik hai Rishi puttar tu Raj ko batane gaya tha apne results ke baare main mujhse kya kaha tha tune biji aap tension mat lo mai papa ko manalunga
Aur chote tu tujhe bhi nikala usne koi batayega hua kya hai

Manshi: biji vo doll/sweetheart

Ak: biji kya puch Rahi hai tum dono kya bol rahe ho isme bhi meri chinta kyu aese kese ho tum dono ab toh plz sach batao ya mai room me jau kyunki tum dono ko mujhe nahi batana Mai toh tum dono ki kuch nahi (said in hurtful tone)

Manshi: akshu stop

Ri: dobara aisi baat mat karna sach janna hai na thik hai
Biji mai gaya tha oberoi house papa se baat karne tab papa ne meri ek nahi suni phir (he narrates whole story that how Manpreet come and what happened how Raj insults them and said get out)
Biji akshu we are sorry I know hamne galati ki hai ham mante bhi hai (Manpreet nods in yes)

Ak: bass Rishi stop it

Ri: akshu plz ek baar meri

Ak: I said stop it ab sirf mai bolungi aur tum dono sunoge, dost mante ho na tum dono mujhe toh mere dost kisi dard se gujar rahe the ye mujhe pata kyu nahi chalne Diya Mera dard suna samjha mujhe mere baby ko mere dard ko apna mana even tum dono ko puri baat pata bhi nahi phir bhi par apne dard ki bhank tak lagne nahi di tum dono ne ek baar bhi mujhe mere doston ka dard samaj ne hi nahi Diya I am hurt Rishi Manpreet ye expect nahi Kiya tha maine tum dono se

Manshi: akshu ek baar hamari

Ak: kitne chance the tum dono ke pass kitne haa hospital se nikalte waqt, airport pe ,plain mai kal raat Aaj subah lekin nahi akshu pareshan hogi akshu ko kuch nahi batate, hai na dost manke tum dono ne Aaj mujhe aise paraya Kiya hai mera haq Cheena apne doston par se kyun Kiya tum dono ne ye sweetheart doll keh ke Aisa paraya kar Diya mujhe (akshu cries)

Manshi held her and asks her to sit on sofa they bend down infront of her wipe her tears and held her hands

Ri: akshu I am sorry we are sorry I know hamse galti huyi hai par tumhari halat uss waqt sahi nahi thi baccha tu apne khud ke dard ko sambhal nahi paa Rahi thi tujhe aisi halat main dekhke ham toot Gaye the toh tumhe hamara dard batake aur hurt kyu kartey ham batane wale the par cheeje thodi sambhal Jane ke baad ham tujhse kuch nahi chipane wale the

Ak: baat chipane ki nahi hai baat na batane ki hai itna sab kuch ho gaya tum dono ke saath phir bhi tum dono ne mere bare main socha toh mujhe bhi toh haq hai na apne doston ko sambhal ne ka

Man: offcourse hai doll we are really sorry yaar biji aur tumhe ham sab batane wale the par sahi mauka ka intezar kar rahe the trust us akshu ham tumhe sach main apna mante hai hamari iss family ka hissa mante hai tum bahot important ho yaar ham dono ke liye

Ak: thik hai maaf Kiya Maine tum dono ko par aage se promise Karo ham apne dard ek dusre ke saath share karenge bilkul nahi chupayenge ye dosti ka Dard ham saath milke face karenge promise Karo dono

Manshi held her hands, akshu also held their and smiles seeing them

Biji: bahot galat Kiya Raji ne par ab jo hua so hua ye biji hai apne teeno bacchon ke liye bacchon tum bilkul mat daro ab ham sab ek saath hai

Biji hugs manshi and akshu

Ak: ab tum dono ne sab kuch bata diya hai toh meri bhi zimmedari banti hai mai aap sabko sab kuch batau apne bare main

Ri: akshu nahi iski koi

Ak: jarurat hai Rishi aur mujhe hai don't worry I am okay now
Akshu narrates her story from her childhood to her marriage and then Neil's death in short
Atlast remembering neil and her one baby she cries badly unable to control anymore manshi hugs her from both side biji also hugs her they all are try to calm down her but crying after listening akshu's pain

Ri: akshu akshu sweetheart calm down baby ke liye shant ho jao use taqlif nahi deni hai na hame I am sorry akshu jo kuch bhi tumhare saath hua mujhe samaj nahi aa raha mai kya kahu par ab tu akeli nahi hai akshu tere dost Teri biji tere saath hai akshu

Man: yes akshu we are family now tu main Bhai biji aur aanewala ya aanewali baby bass itni si choti aur pyari si family hamari family ham tere saath hai akshu ham sab milke baby ka khayal rakhenge tum chinta mat karo

Ri: ye baby sirf tumhari akeli ki zimmedari nahi hai hamari bhi hai tum aur baby iss Ghar ka hissa ho sahi kaha Manpreet ne we are family

Biji: haa akshu beta ham Tera pariwar hai aur tu hamara ham sari mushkilo ka samna saath main karenge beta Aaj se tu oberoi parivar ki beti hai (kissed her forehead)

Biji hugs her 3 kids and they smiles looking at each other

Precap: tanshi face-off 🤭💕







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