I have returned to this book with some bad news and some good news...
firstly, this book is now canceled!! so sad :(
BUT, (and this is the good news,) I have started a new one with several improvements,
1. I actually properly planned out the events of this new one instead of making stuff up as i went along (like how i did with this one (oof)) the entire story and every panel is planned out from start to end!
2. I'VE HEARD YOUR COMPLAINTS, this new one should be MUCH easier to read since the text is decently sized and I plan on keeping the size about the same throughout the whole thing.
3. BETTER WRITTING!!! I've MAJORLY cut back on the dialogue. "Show don't Tell" is with us this time fellas.
4. BETTER VISUALS!!! no more slapping on sprites with dialogue bubbles, EVERYTHING will now be drawn by me!!! admittedly the art wont be the best but it'll do the trick.
You can find it now on my profile, it's titled "The Bond to Lift a Burden" (I'm not the best at coming up with names lol, it's just a silly little carachoco fluff story so does it even matter? lol)