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A story of brother and sister who is apart because of the cruel play of faith but not ready to accept it... More

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CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER ONE
CHAPTER TWO
Chapter Three
CHAPTER FOUR
CHAPTER FIVE
CHAPTER SIX
CHAPTER SEVEN
CHAPTER EIGHT
CHAPTER TEN
CHAPTER ELEVEN
CHAPTER TWELVE
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
Chapter Fourteen
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
CHAPTER NINETEEN
CHAPTER TWENTY
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
CHAPTER TWENTY TWO
Promo
CHAPTER TWENTY THREE
Three New CHARCTERS
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR
CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE
CHAPTER TWENTY SIX
CHAPTER TWENTY SEVEN
CHAPTER TWENTY EIGHT
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CHAPTER TWENTY NINE
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CHAPTER NINE

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The wife's of the cricketers were worried about them and prathiksha as they were not able to connect with non of them in phone

Anushka : God knows what is happening there I wonder why non of them are picking up the phone

Natasha : Wait let me try again , maybe if someone pick the phone

She tried calling them again and yashaswi picked up the phone

Yashaswi : Hello bhabhi

Natasha : What is this, yash why non of you are picking up the phone huh??? Do you even know how much tensed we all were, not knowing what is happening there

Yashaswi : Sorry bhabhi, wo toh almost everyone's phone is dead that's why you couldn't connect with us

Natasha : Fine, now tell me how is prathiksha is she out of danger, what did the doctor said

Yashaswi : Due to being hit, her right hand got fractured and there was a lot of blood loss, now only after giving her enough of blood they can continue the treatment

Natasha : Oh God, hop that she will be safe and what about you all are you guys alright

Yashaswi : Yes we are, she didn't let anything happen to us, and she will definitely be safe bhabhi

Natasha : If anything is there please do call, and if you guys want any kind of help from our side please say

Yashaswi : OK bhabhi, I will call you if anything is needed and trust me she will be fine

After sometimes of rest Rahul comes out of the ward

Mahi : Are you OK baccha, are you still feeling weak

Rahul : No bhai I am fine, right now only I gave blood know so feeling a bit tried, rest I am fine

Mahi : OK then don't keep standing, sit down

Virat : Megha are you fine???

Megha : Yes I am and thanks rahul for giving your blood to my sister

Rahul : She gave me a second chance to live and this is the least I can do for her, so you don't have to be thankful

At that time doctor comes out

Megha : Doctor how is my sister she is fine know please tell me Doctor she is out of danger know.........

Doctor : Yes she is, we have successfully completed the treatment and now we have to wait for her to gain consciousness after that we can shift her to normal room , but as I said her right hand is fractured so at least for two to four weeks she has to get complete rest and in between you have to bring her for physiotherapy. And due to being hit in the head she might have a slight headache for a few days and if it persists please consult with the neuro surgeon and there are a few medicines that she should take without fail that I will tell you later, any way she is fine now And great job young man you saved her

Doctor said patting rahuls shoulder and left from there

Tanvi : Thanks bhai , you saved her

Rahul : Don't thank me tanu, she gave me my life back and I only gave her my blood

Meanwhile ishan approached mahi

Ishan : Bhai I am sorry, I know I shouldn't have said like that it was very rude from my side if you felt hurt please forgive me please forgive your kid

Mahi : It's okay ish I just wanted you to realise your mistake and I can never be angry with you .

Prathiksha gained consciousness and started opening her eyes

Nurse : You gained consciousness, do you want to meet anyone in particular???

Prathiksha : No, no one in particular

Nurse : OK then I will inform the others outside and doctor that you gained consciousness

Nurse went outside and informed others

Nurse : The patient has gained consciousness, you can meet her now but make sure that you don't over crowde and disturb her

Mahi : OK sister

Jaddu : Megha I think you should go meet her, first we will wait here

Megha : No, I want the seven of you to meet her first, and because of you only we got her back Rahul bhaiya so you have to be the first one to meet her

The seven of them went inside and saw prathiksha was sitting in the bed with two pillows supporting her head and had wires attached in her hand, the nurse left giving them privacy

Rohit : Baacha how are you feeling now, tu tikh hai na jyada dard to nahi hora ha hai

Prathiksha decided to tease them a little

Prathiksha : Who are you all???? I don't know you all, how did I end up here.... Did you guys kidnapped me and dumped me here??? Oh God my head why is it paining so much!!! Ahhh

They were shocked and didn't know what to do

Virat : Oh God!!! Jeese I think she lost her memory, she can't remember anyone of us and how all this happened what will we do now???

Ashwin : Now this was the only thing left to happen, Now what will we do???

Surya : Prathiksha, are you sure that you don't remember us, please try again you will definitely remember us

Prathiksha : Prathiksha??? Is that my name??? Such a nice name wonder who kept it for me??? And yes I certainly don't remember you

Yuzi : She even forgot her name, Ab hum kya kaara , doctor ko baatha de kya???

Shubman : Let's, do a last try prathiksha do you remember megha your sister and tanvi your best friend

Prathiksha : Megha huh??? Do I even have a sister, and Tanvi who is she ???

Rahul : She has really lost her memory, if not she would have at least rememberd her name and Who Tanvi and megha is let's do on thing let's inform the doctor and see what he is saying

Yuzi : Prathiksha don't give stress to your brain, it's okay if you don't remember anything......

Prathiksha : OK. She said innocently and started laughing loudly, Oh God look at all your face you guys are hell scared!!! Do you guys really think that I lost my memory, umm ro bhai I was just trying to prank you guys and guess what you guys got pranked!!!

Virat : Prank!!! Really!!! So you have not lost your memory???

Prathiksha : Yes I have not lost my memory, aur nahi toh kya sirf aap logo ko hi prank karna allowed hai kya

Rohit : Oh God Prathiksha you literally gave us a heart attack for a sec, Is this the time to do such prank huh

Yuzi : Not funny at all

Ashwin : This is not done Prathiksha ,you don't even know how scared we all were

Surya : Is this how you prank someone very bad

Prathiksha : OK OK I'm sorry, but yeah on a serious note I am fine and thank you bhai for saving my life by giving me a share of your powerful cricketer blood. She said dramatically

Rahul : I don't know from were you learned to do so much of drama, any way you don't have to be thankful, if I am standing in front of you it's all because of you so I should be the one thanking you, Thanks for saving my life

Prathiksha : OK I will accept this one thank you on behalf of all the seven of you, and now no more thank you OK

Virat : OK ma'am....

Prathiksha : And ro bhai don't feel guilty that you couldn't protect me infact non of you should feel guilty because if you guys wanted you all could have let the goons kidnap me but you guys didn't and instead choose to fight with them, which is something that I will always be grateful for. You all know in my entire life apart from mahi bhai gautam bhai tanu athiya di and meghu Di, no one has fought for me the way you guys fought. Sab kehta hai ki mein ek manhus hu jo dusro ki khusiyon mein nazar lag kar ussa barbad karthi hu

Rohit : No baacha don't say that

Prathiksha : Sab kehati hai, ki mein iss duniya mein aatha hi aapna maa papa aur bhai ki jaan la li, meri waja sa nana naani Dada dadi ko logo se bahut kuch sun na padda, ultimately unki mauth ki zimadar bhi mein hi bani and I couldn't afford to be blamed again for someone's tears . Aaj agar aap mein se kisi ko kuch ho jaatha tho uski zimmadar mein hota, aur mein aapni bhabhi yo ke ankho mein assu nehi dekh sakti

Rohit : And for that you choose to hurt yourself ???

Prathiksha : Hah tho mein hu hi manus, jis kisi ki bhi life mein jaau usa brbad krka rakhta hu, meri wajha se meghu di aapni hi ghar mein paraya ho gaya, and I know bhai apart from you non of them like me so it's better know you all can get ride of me if I die

Rohit : Ye kya bol rahi hu tum, pagal vagal ho kya huh ek do baar prank kya kar diya iska matlab ye nahi hai ki, they don't like you or want you to die hum mein se koyi ithni bhi buri nahi hai ki kisi ke mauth mein khushi dhooduga so please don't say like that

Ashwin : Look Prathiksha , we know that what we did is wrong , but we never wanted you to die and megha tumhara bina adhura hai she can't leave without you neither tanvi and gautam, ek do log tumha pasand nahi karthi toh kya hua tum un logo ko bhi chod dungi jo tume ha aapna manthi hu

Prathiksha : OK OK fine, mein aisa hi baatha rahi thi dil pe math lo, I think you guys should go back and take some rest remember that you guys have a match to play for that both physical and mental rest is needed so go take some rest play well and make our country proud

Virat : But you are in this condition, so how can we go....

Prathiksha : Aree I am fine, aur waisa bhi mera khyal rakh na ke liya meghu di aur tanu hai na, so don't worry about me and focus on the match

Surya : OK we will go , but promise us that you will take care of your self and will also rest properly

Prathiksha : I promise I will,

At that time doctor enters

Doctor : So Prathiksha , how are you feeling right now??? Is there any kind of pain discomfort or something like that

Prathiksha : No, doctor it's just that my right hand is paining so much

Doctor : It's fractured know, so it will pain but don't worry it will heal soon you just have to take proper rest do your physiotherapy correctly and take your medicine correctly

Prathiksha : Can you tell me exactly how much time it will take to heal

Doctor : Maximum two to four weeks if you do the physiotherapy correctly it won't take much time, any way you have to stay here today you will get discharged tomorrow

Prathiksha : OK doctor

Doctor : Take care, I will meet you later

The doctor left and only the boys and prathiksha was left in the room

Prathiksha : Guys I think you all should also leave it's getting late guess

Ashwin : OK we will leave now, but take rest and get well soon.... And come back

Others : Take rest and get well soon

The boys also left leaving Prathiksha alone

Megha : She is fine know???

Virat : Yes she is, it's just her hand is paining due to being fractured nothing else

Mahi : Boy's let's leave now, remember you have a match to play tomorrow and for that you guys have to take rest

Megha : Yes you guys leave, I'm there know I will take care of her and once again thanks for saving her

Rohit : We will take a leave now please take care of her and if you need anything please don't hesitate to contact us

Tanvi : OK then I will also stay here with you Di in case you need any help in the night

Megha : No need tanu I can manage it's only a matter of few hours, you go take rest and come back tomorrow morning

Tanvi and the ict boy's left and megha went to the room were Prathiksha was admitted

On the other side

Raunak : What!!! She is out of danger, you only told know she is dead and now out of danger huh!!! I just asked you all to do one thing properly and you guys couldn't do that don't you feel ashamed to call yourselfs goons idiots!!!

Sheela : Don't know what power she has that she gets saved every time and Who are this boy's??? How did they met her???

Raj : Her new job holds a lots of mystery and until and unless we do not solve that mystery we will not get the answer for this question

Raunak : How long for how long will they be able to protect her like this, one day she will definitely die and this time I will take her life by my own bare hands

Get ready Prathiksha Maut tumhara kareeb hai bahut kareeb!!!! He laughed evily





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