Creativity:15 /15
Now, I'm going to be honest because I'm a very honest reviewer. I'm not a big fan of fan fiction, and the reason I say this is because people get very obsessive when it comes to certain celebrities, BTC, etc. But that being said, I do feel like this story's creativity was interesting to read.
Originality:10 /15
I'm not sure if it was 100 percent original, and the reason I say that is because I've read similar BTS stories like this, and I've read similar fan fiction stories that are kind of like this, but I will give it credit for the way that the author does write the story. It is very unique, but. There is a lot to the story as well.
Storytelling:10 /15
Storytime, once again, was very interesting. I do feel like when it comes down to it, there was a lot that was needed. To be reiterated or looked at
Character: 10/15
The characters were interesting. I can say that I'm not sure if they were able to develop for. I didn't really see a lot of flaws in the characters.
Story Flows: 15/15
I did not see any sentence structure errors or grammar errors or sentences that did not flow right Everything seemed to be good with this story.
Cover Design: 15/15
Cover represented the story very well. It was a very beautiful cover.
Final Thoughts:10/10
At the end of the day, it was a very interesting story, but here are my two with the story. Once again, this is not to be malicious or mean. These are my thoughts as a reviewer who has reviewed a lot of stories and has been doing this for a while. Once again, this is not my first account. This is just the account I am on now. I feel like the story jumps too much. The first chapter is a very beautiful chapter. It seems like a really good chapter, but there is so much in it that I feel like it's clutter. And I say this because the author starts off really well, very strong, very interesting, and very lovely. But then they jump, and then they jump, and then they jump. And it's like they jump, not like little jumps. They jump into, like, the future type jumps. Now, when you are jumping into the future, that's fine. However, the way that the author is doing it is so out of the park. Crazy that it is hard to read and understand a story when you start off somewhere in the story and then you're somewhere else in the story. And then, out of the blue, you're jumping, and you're just. Like what just happened? So for me, I feel like the author should go back and really think about that part of the story because I the story is a very lovely story. And I'm not telling the warrior to stop writing because it is a fantastic story at the end of the day. However, keeping track as a reader is hard because the author has so much going on.
Chapters I read:3
Total points:85
Summary of the book:
Y/N and Taehyung find themselves bound by an arranged marriage orchestrated by their parents, but beneath the surface of their seemingly conventional relationship lies a tapestry of hidden stories. Y/N carries the weight of her past, a tale of resilience and strength born from personal struggles, while Taehyung bears his own secrets and complexities. Despite the facade they maintain for the sake of their marriage, genuine care and affection grow between them, creating a poignant narrative of two souls discovering each other's hidden depths while navigating the expectations of their families and society. This story is a journey of love, understanding, and the power of human connection amidst the backdrop of societal conventions.
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