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By DeepthiSajit

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A story of brother and sister who is apart because of the cruel play of faith but not ready to accept it... More

Preview of the story
CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER ONE
CHAPTER TWO
Chapter Three
CHAPTER FOUR
CHAPTER FIVE
CHAPTER SIX
CHAPTER SEVEN
CHAPTER NINE
CHAPTER TEN
CHAPTER ELEVEN
CHAPTER TWELVE
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
Chapter Fourteen
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
CHAPTER NINETEEN
CHAPTER TWENTY
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
CHAPTER TWENTY TWO
Promo
CHAPTER TWENTY THREE
Three New CHARCTERS
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR
CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE
CHAPTER TWENTY SIX
CHAPTER TWENTY SEVEN
CHAPTER TWENTY EIGHT
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CHAPTER TWENTY NINE
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CHAPTER EIGHT

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They all brought her to the hospital

Megha :  Doctor!!!  Doctor!!!  Please come quickly please..... 

Doctor :  Oh God what happened???

Megha :  Doctor my sister is serious please save her I begg you doctor please save her I have no one else in this world other than her please save her!!! 

Doctor :  I will do my best, rest is in the hands of God so keep praying

Doctor :  Sister get the structure ready, and shift her to ICU fast, we don't have much time to waste

The nurse and ward boy brought the structure, shreyas placed prathiksha in the structure they took her to the ICU

After reaching the ICU  , the nurse said

Nurse :  You all can't come inside, so please wait outside, we will inform you all about the patience condition after doctor check's her

Shreyas :  From the first day I felt a strange connection with you, as if you have some relation with me and because of that connection I don't want to lose you, please come back for all of us. Your best friend, your Di and your brothers are nothing without you for them come back

Megha :  Please come back baacha your Di will be waiting for you.... 

Rohit :  Please come back for your ro bhai kiddo

Soon she was taken inside the ICU and the huge door closes in front of them , and all of them were muttering prayers for her recovery.

Maybe this is the first time the whole ict is praying for something or rather someone. There eyes held nothing but gratitude for her who gave them a second chance to leave

Soon mahi and tanvi reached city hospital as siraj had texted mahi about the hospital

Tanvi ran towards megha and took her into a hug comforting her

Tanvi :  Be strong Di, nothing will happen to our prati she can't leave all of us easily she will come back for you  , for me and for all her loved ones

Megha :   I failed tanu, I failed to save her from that monster, because of him my sister is fighting between life and death, she is the only family I have tanu I can't lose her.... 

Tanvi :  You will not lose her Di, she will be alright, doctor will soon say that she is fine

While mahi tried to counsel an emotional rohit

Mahi :  Don't worry ro, nothing will happen to her she is strong our prathiksha is strong, God is not cruel enough to take her away from us

Rohit :  Bhi you know that i never had a sister and I always wanted one, and through her I got one but I couldn't protect her. If I am alive today  infact if all of us are alive today it's only because of her, God can't do this to us please ask him to give me my sister back please bhai

Mahi :  Please rona band karo baccha usa kuch nahi hoga, vo hum ma sa kisi ko chodka nahi jayaga, please tum himmath rakho aur sambhalo khud ko. As her name says she is the hope of our lives and nothing will happen to that hope

Rohit :  Bhai do you know who this raunak is???

Mahi :  Yes , meghas brother and prathikshas step brother but why are you asking about him??? 

Rohit :  It's him it's him Who had send goons to attack us and kill prathiksha it's him bhai!!!

Mahi :  Goons???  You guys met with an accident right??? 

Rohit :  No!!! 

On the other side jaddu went to ashwin who was lost in his thoughts

Jaddu :  Ash, are you alright did got hurt any where???

At that time he came out of his thoughts

Ashwin :  Huh,  No I am not hurt she saved me from getting hurt. It's so strange know jaddu like some people come into our lives as complete strangers but end up becoming the one to whom we are so grateful. Today I am standing before you only because of her, she gave me a second chance to live nothing should happen to her otherwise I will not be able to forgive myself

Jaddu :  Nothing will happen to her ash, all our prayers are with her. She will be fine soon

Megha due to the sudden shock did not notice the ict boy's and now when she noticed she was shocked to see Rahul

Megha's pov

No No this cannot be possible, he is really alive or am I hallucinating if he is really alive then why didn't he looked for her, maybe if he
Is some other Rahul not the one I am thinking

God if he turned out to be the one I am thinking, then why didn't he recognize her or maybe he is still not aware of the fact that she is still alive and vise versa

Megha :   Umm Rahul,  if you are comfortable then can I ask you something.... 

Rahul :  Yes go ahead..... 

Megha :  I just wanted to know your full name and your parents name

Rahul :  Why??? What do you have to do with it???

Megha :  Nothing much just to confirm something

Rahul :  OK fine, so my full name is Rahul mishra and my parents name is anand mishra and ganga mishra and I also have a little sister named prathiksha mishra whom I foundly call prati. We all were a happy little family but I think God didn't like me seeing happy, so in an accident he took my loved ones away and left me alone in this world, but I still believe that my sister my prati is still alive and one day I will find her

Megha was shocked to hear what Rahul said and what she thought actually came true, out of shock she ran out of the hospital

Megha :  Sorry I am sorry!!!!

Everyone was confused seeing her running out

Mahi :  Tanu go behind her and check if she is actually fine or if something is bothering her, we all are here with prathiksha

Tanvi : OK

Tanvi also ran behind her

Surya :  That was so strange of her to react like that, hope there is nothing big

Mahi :  Boy's are you all alright, did anyone of you got hurt fighting with the goons, if anyone has got hurt then please go and get yourself treated

Shubman :  No bhai, she didn't let anyone of us get hurt  instead she herself took all the pain

Mahi :   OK now what's all this goons and all huh???  Ro as usual you forgot to explain the rest

Rohit :  Sorry bhi, woh you know me right....  So what happened is, we were coming back from the dhabha after dinner and he explained everything to mahi

Mahi :  Oh my God!!!  Seriously ishan this is what you said as small accident  , you guys were attacked by goons actual freaking goons!!!  They were about to kidnap her and you said that it's a small accident.....  And why didn't anyone of you called me huh??? 

Ishan :  I thought you might get worried that's why???  And nothing big happened so......

Mahi :  Nothing Big huh???  You are standing in front of the hospital right in front of the ICU  a poor girl is inside the ICU fighting between life and death, still you are saying that nothing big happened really!!!! 

Ishan :  Sorry bhai, I didn't mean that, what I was trying to say that we all are fine so.....

Mahi : Ishan you think that only you boy's matter to me, the girl inside she is nothing to me, But no you all are equal to me, I can't bare something happening to anyone of you. There was a time when me and Sakshi thought that we almost lost our Ziva but prathiksha acted as our daughters life saving angel  , only because of her we got our ziva back so for me she is not less than God in the form of human . And because of her only your brothers and best friend is standing before you like this, still you are saying that nothing big happened as if you are not valueing her or what she did for you all I don't understand why you all can't just accept her, you know what just forget it!!!! 

He said and was about to go out but at that time doctor came outside, by the time megha and tanvi came back from outside

Megha :  Doctor how is my sister, is she out of danger???  Please tell me something doctor you are scaring me

Doctor :  Look I don't want to lie to you, she is serious and has not got her consciousness back due to being hit by some glass material to be specific something like tube light her right hand got fractured, and a lot of blood is lost due to being hit in the head and hand , we need two bag of a+ve blood, unfortunately our blood bank doesn't have enough of blood required for the treatment, if we couldn't arrange enough of blood and didn't start the treatment right now, Then I am sorry we wouldn't be able to save her!!! 

Megha :  Please doctor don't say that, we will somehow try to arrange the blood, just save my sister because she is the only person I have in this world please doctor please!!!

Doctor :   As I said if you can arrange the required amount of blood, then maybe we can save her, otherwise I am sorry

Mahi :  We will check doctor that if any of the blood banks out side have two bags of a+ve blood just give us a little time

Doctor :  We don't have enough time, if something is to be done it must be done immediately, we can't wait for you to arrange blood from outside, by that time the patient might die

Rahul :  No, doctor please check my blood group because as far as I remember it's a+ve  ,  No wait!!!  Yes it's a+ve doctor you can take my blood I will give her blood

Doctor :  But after giving so much of blood you will feel weak and tried, you might also lack energy to play tomorrow So think before you say

Rahul : Don't worry about that doctor, right now she is important so please focus on that, if I have to skip the match tomorrow then also it's fine, because she gave me my life back and if in someway I can help her that's the best thing for me

Doctor :  OK, then go with the nurse  , sister take him

Rahul left with the nurse

Doctor :  Don't worry, you all will get her back

Unknowingly a big brother is saving his sisters life megha thought

Shubman :  Ishu I think mahi bhai is still upset with you,  you should talk things out with him

Ishan :  I know shub and what he said is true I should have been a little more careful with my words anyway it's not the right time to talk things out, once we get the news that she is out of danger then I will talk to him

Meanwhile Gautam call Tanvi

Gautam :  Tanu what's happening huh, my doll how is she

Tanvi :  She is still not out of danger bhaiyu until and unless they doesn't inject blood into her body, she will not be safe

Gautam :  I am taking the next flight to India I want to meet my prati soon

Tanvi :  You don't have to come bhai, we all are here with her and trust me she will be fine, OK please don't take stress

Gautam :  OK but please be in touch and keep updating me about her health

Tanvi : OK..... 

After she cut the call gautam think

Whoever did this to you prati I will find them and punish them, I will not spare anyone who has hurt my sister. Mr raunak mishra if it's you who is behind all this then get ready to die, from the bare hands of gautam raichand I will not leave you, you have to pay for what you have done!!!!

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