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By DeepthiSajit

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A story of brother and sister who is apart because of the cruel play of faith but not ready to accept it... More

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CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER ONE
CHAPTER TWO
Chapter Three
CHAPTER FOUR
CHAPTER FIVE
CHAPTER SIX
CHAPTER EIGHT
CHAPTER NINE
CHAPTER TEN
CHAPTER ELEVEN
CHAPTER TWELVE
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
Chapter Fourteen
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
CHAPTER NINETEEN
CHAPTER TWENTY
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
CHAPTER TWENTY TWO
Promo
CHAPTER TWENTY THREE
Three New CHARCTERS
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR
CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE
CHAPTER TWENTY SIX
CHAPTER TWENTY SEVEN
CHAPTER TWENTY EIGHT
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CHAPTER TWENTY NINE
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CHAPTER THIRTY
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CHAPTER THIRTY ONE
Thirty Two
Thirty Three
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CHAPTER SEVEN

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Goons : Lagta hai they don't understand normal warning, let's show them what we are. Ja us ladiki ko pakad

Ishan : Haath bhi math lagana bhari padaga

They didn't listen to him and one goon went and got hold of prathikshas hands

Rohit : Leave her!!!! I said leave her. He roared

While groning in pain due to the goons tight hold prathiksha said

Prathiksha : Kidnapper uncle , kidnapper uncle you might have got the wrong person it might be some other prathiksha not me I am very nice, I don't trouble people

Goon : No you are the one who we are looking for, we are not mistaken

Prathiksha : Woh kehta hai na ek jaisa saath log hota hai, like wise it might be someone else

Goon : No see this, isn't this you, he said showing her a photo she went speechless for a moment. Abhi chup chap hamara saath chalo agar in logon ko zinda dekhna hai toh

He said pointing towards ict

Prathiksha : Please in logo ko kuch math karo aap logo jaha bolaga mein chalna ko tayar hu

Ict : Are you mad!!! Do you even have an idea about what you just said now

Prathiksha : Yes , for all your safety I have to do this, Now please don't look at me and just leave from here

Surya : No we are not going anywhere without you

Ict : Yes, agar yeha se jayega toh hum sab saath jayega

Prathiksha : Guys this is too much, are you not understanding the seriousness of the situation......

Ict : We said know without you we will not go anywhere

Goon : If your discussion is over, come

They tried to take prathiksha with them and at that time Rahul pushed him making prathiksha hide behind them

Ict : If you have guts take her from here

They said standing in front of her covering her from all sides

Goon : Lagta hai aisa nahi managa tum logo, toh fir tik hai

He tried to punch Rahul but he moved away and punched him hard in his stomach like this the boys started fighting with the goons beating and punching them hard

Suddenly prathiksha noticed that two of the goons were coming towards yuzi and surya with a tube light and was about to hit them but she pushed them and the light hit her hand making it bleed hard

Rohit : Prathiksha!!!!

Virat : Are you both OK

Surya : Yes, but her

Rahul : She will be fine

Again two more goons were going to hit shubman , ashwin , rohit virat and rahul with a huge brick and wooden stick but prathiksha pushed the five of them and got seriously injured.

The ict was shocked seeing her covered in blood and lying unconscious in shreyas arm's , soon the police came and took the goons with them , before going they said

Goons : Hum nee hamara kam kar liye jo hama bola tha that was to kill her. And Now the world will hold the men in blue responsible for her death , Sad that you lost this gem jisna aapna jaan ka kurubani de di tum logo ke liye

Goon : Now we can tell Raunak bhai that his job is done

The police took them and the ict was too shocked to react to the situation

Other side

Raunak : Kya police nee pakda, ek kaam diya tha woh bhi nahi hua tum logo se, but wait what she is dead really!!!!

Megha comes there hearing raunaks voice and got shocked to listening to the conversation

Megha : Who is dead huh??? I asked you something who is dead ???

Sheela : No one else but your dear sister, that manus prathiksha

Megha : What!!!! You...... You...... Guys killed her.....

Raj : Yes we killed her..... Hum nee bola tha naa tum ha woh jaha bhi hogi we will find her and kille her

Megha : No this is not true, meri behen ko kuch nahi ho sakti, if something happens to her by mistake also I won't spare any one of you

Raunak : She is no more, so even if you do something also it would be too late

Megha : Raunak ye tune tikh nahi kiya, I will definitely punish you for this

She said and ran away from there

Other side ict was feeling terrible seeing prathikshas condition

Rohit : Let's quickly take her to hospital nothing will happen to her

Virat : Before we take her we should do something to stop her bleeding

Rahul tide a hand kerchief in her hand and Surya tide on covering her head

Hardik : It's too late guys, how will we take her to hospital, I don't think we will get a vehicle right now

Rohit : It's not too late and more over it's a high way so many vehicles will pass by and we will try to stop one of them . Before that we need to wake her up

The boys tried waking up an unconscious prathiksha

Shreyas : Prathiksha please wake up, don't worry us nothing will happen to you we all are with you know please wake up

Shubman : Listen, we all need to thank you know for that you have to wake up, please prathiksha wake up, not for us but at least for ro bhai please wake up.

Rohit : Kiddo I am sorry i promised you that I will always protect you but I failed I am so sorry prati, but please for the sake of your bhai please get up

Prathiksha responds in half conscious voice

Prathiksha : Bhai..... I don't....... Think I will..... Survive may be this is the last time I am talking to you all..... Please don't feel bad that you couldn't save me..... This was is my
faith.... And you all have to accept it

Rahul : No prathiksha please don't say that nothing will happen to you, if something happens we will not be able to forgive ourselves

Prathiksha : I.... Don't.... Want....... Anyone of you to...... Feel guilty...... It's my destiny..... Just promise me that you all will play well tomorrow and..... Make our country and everyone..... Else proud..... I will see the real power of men in blue from heaven.... Just play well...... For me our country and for everyone

Ashwin : Please don't say like this prathiksha nothing will happen to you and you will be there in the stadium to witness our victory , please don't lose hope

Prathiksha : I will.... Witness your...... Victory from..... Heaven.... Just play well..... So that my efforts behind saving you all doesn't get wasted..... And you all must be feeling happy right now,..... That the trouble you all were trying to throw out.... Has gone out of your life....

Virat : Prathiksha we never meaned anything that we said please don't close your eyes please trust us we will let nothing happen to you

Prathiksha : Ro bhai..... Never hold yourself or your team responsible for what happened to me.... This was bound to happen to me one day..... Just forget that.... Someone like this ever existed in all your life's and move on......

Rohit : No, you will be fine and we will do everything that will save you

Prathiksha : I..... Don't know if I can be saved.... Bhai..... But I am glad that I ........ I met you...... All, you..... Guys are the best.... And I will always be grateful to God that he let me spend a few days.... With..... Such wonderful people..... Rahul bhai.... You....
You..... Resemble.... My real brother.... If he was alive.... He would have looked like you...... finally I can join my family and I am happy that God allowed me to meet someone who resmebled my brother and that too with his name..... Play well and make our country win.... Guys......

She said and got unconscious in shreyas arms....

Ict : Prathiksha!!!!

Other side the ladies mahi and tanvi was worried for the boys and prathiksha

Tanvi : Why are they not back till now, it's too late I am feeling weird like something bad has happened

Anushka : Non of them are picking the phone also which is very strange

Athiya : Yes, How much ever busy she is prathiksha never fail to pick my calls even rah also

Natasha : When, I last talked with harry he said that they all are in a near by dhaba for having dinner, and since it's not too far they should be back by now

Ritika : They also have a match tomorrow

Mahi : Wait let me try calling vi once more, and you all try calling your respective partner's, and tanu try calling either prati or shub or ish, let's just hope that one of them pick the call

Ladies : Okk

Megha was passing by the high way to the ict apartment to make sure that Prathiksha was fine and she saw the ict boy's standing helpless with an unconscious prathiksha in shreyas arms. She immediately stopped the car

Megha : Prati baccha, what happened to you kiddo please open your eyes baccha please look at your di please doll

Rohit : We need to take her to hospital immediately otherwise she won't survive please help us

Megha : First tell me how did this with her huh??? Just tell me dammit!!!!

Ishan : We will explain everything later first let's take her to hospital , it's more important

Megha : I will take her to hospital alone, you all can go back to your apartment, all your family must be worried moreover you all have a match tomorrow

Ict : We all are coming with you, and we don't care about match or anything else

Megha : Listen I don't have time to argue with you all, so you all can do whatever you all want. But nothing should happen to my sister, otherwise you all will be held accountable for her condition

Ict : We know that we have not done anything wrong, and prathiksha herself will tell you that

Megha : Better you all didn't , But I am telling you all if something wrong happens to her, I will forget that you guys are the reputed player's of the country and you all will see the worst of me!!!!

With great difficulty they took prathiksha to hospital and all of them were praying for her safety.

While ishan left a message to mahi explaining about prathikshas condition

And mahi was shocked reading the message

Sakshi : What happened all well????

Mahi : No nothing is well.... Our prathiksha and boy's met with an accident, the boys are fine but prathiksha....

Tanvi : What happened to prathiksha bhai

Mahi : She is serious and they are taking her to hospital, they don't know if she will survive or not

Listening this tanvi sat in the floor with a loud thud

Tanvi : Why God??? Why only her!!!! I can't lose my best friend, bhai take me to the hospital right now!!! She screamed

Mahi : Tanu relax baccha we will go.... Don't stress yourself. We both will go and you all wait here

Sakshi : Please keep us updated about her condition

Mahi : Okk

Tanvi and mahi left to the hospital

Athiya : She is a pure soul, she certainly don't deserve this please save her God!!!!

Rohit 's pov

I never had a sister, And wanted one through her I got one and you can't snatch her from me God, please save her a pure and cheerful soul like her never deserved this she gave me a second chance to live and now you have to give her a second chance God

You can never leave this brother prathiksha you have to come back for me, mahi bhai, for your Di and tanu you have to come back baccha , megha is nothing without you kiddo please don't leave her alone. God save my doll's life . Whoever you are Mr raunak I will not spare you, you have hurt my sister and
you will suffer for that, I will make sure you suffer

What do you all think will prathiksha survive????

Will Rohit be able to know who raunk actually is????








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