𝐁𝐔𝐓𝐓𝐄𝐑𝐅𝐋𝐘 𝐁𝐓𝐒 𝐀𝐖𝐀𝐑𝐃𝐒 [𝐂𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐝]

𝐉𝐇𝐒 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒

1) 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐔𝐍𝐃𝐄𝐑𝐂𝐎𝐕𝐄𝐑 𝐅𝐀𝐌𝐎𝐔𝐒 𝐖𝐑𝐓𝐈𝐄𝐑 (Judged by @Winkwink07)

TITLE: 8/10

The title is simple and to the point.

COVER OF THE BOOK:  6/10

DESCRIPTION: 16/20

The description made me want to read the story.

GRAMMAR: 7/10

The writing is very good but there are some grammatical errors.

VOCABULARY: 8/10

Vocabulary is good but could have been better.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

The first chapter is very interesting which made me read the whole story.

PLOT: 15/20

The plot was very good at the beginning but in the end, it got a little clumsy.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 8/10

The interaction between characters is very good.

TOTAL:77/100

2) 𝐉𝐄 𝐓'𝐀𝐈𝐌𝐄, 𝐈𝐌𝐁𝐄𝐂𝐈𝐋𝐄

TITLE: 9/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

Looks congested!

DESCRIPTION: 17/20

GRAMMAR: 10/10

VOCABULARY: 10/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

PLOT: 17/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

TOTAL: 90/100

Overall review: I loved the way you described every little thing like their appearance, emotions and clothes, everything. They go through several emotions for each other and I loved it especially when put through words. It was humorous and I laughed put loud at all the taunts and jokes haha! Overall it was a good book but I wish you complete it early!