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By DeepthiSajit

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A story of brother and sister who is apart because of the cruel play of faith but not ready to accept it... More

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CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER ONE
Chapter Three
CHAPTER FOUR
CHAPTER FIVE
CHAPTER SIX
CHAPTER SEVEN
CHAPTER EIGHT
CHAPTER NINE
CHAPTER TEN
CHAPTER ELEVEN
CHAPTER TWELVE
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
Chapter Fourteen
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
CHAPTER NINETEEN
CHAPTER TWENTY
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
CHAPTER TWENTY TWO
Promo
CHAPTER TWENTY THREE
Three New CHARCTERS
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR
CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE
CHAPTER TWENTY SIX
CHAPTER TWENTY SEVEN
CHAPTER TWENTY EIGHT
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CHAPTER TWENTY NINE
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CHAPTER TWO

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Pratiksha woke up early in the morning and managed to finish all the jobs and was going to get ready as she has to travel almost 2and half hours to reach there and before 10 she has to reach, at that time

Raj : Oh hello ma'am where are you jumping and going???  Did you finish the job that was told to you huh???

Pratiksha : Yes mama and I have to join my job today so I was just going to get ready

Raunak : You didn't understand what dad told yesterday, you are not going anywhere that's final. So better go back to kitchen and start working some of my friends are coming today and you are going to cook for them

Pratiksha : But....

Sheela : No ifs and buts you will disobey us let me see

Megha : She will

Raj : Oh here comes her savior

Megha : Yes I am her savior no doubt, Prati go get ready quickly no one is going to say anything and I have asked manoj kaka sa to come and pick you up

Raunak : Don't you dare pratiksha other wise the consequences won't be great for both of you

Megha :  What will you do maximum you will beat us we will tolerate it, but she will go and that's final

At that time Gautama call in Megha's phone

Gautam : Meghu where is prati is she ready to go??? 

Raj : Oh so you were also a part of this plan isn't it.....

Gautam : You guessed it was uncle, prati go get ready quickly and no one is going to stop you. If they dare to they will know who actually gautam is he said in a dangerous tone

Megha : She will go you don't worry she will call you once she reach now bye

Gautam: OK bye and all the best bachaa

Pratiksha : Thanks bhai, she left for getting ready not before looking at megha who gave her a assuring nod

Other side all the players except for our sleepy captain was gathered in the living room of the hotel

Virat :  Oh God this ro at least for today he could have woke up earlier, I think he wants the manager to know that he is a sleepyy head. And ritsi you didn't try to wake him up

Ritika : As if he will wake up...... 

Rohit : That's enough you both I am up. He said descending the stairs..... 

Others : Wow captain not bad huh!!!!!

Listening this he made a done face and their comes a noise

Mahi : Stop teasing my kiddo

They all run towards mahi and rohit was the first one to hugg him

Rohit : Thanks for joining as our new mentor and assistant coach bhai I don't know what I will do with them without you

Mahi : I am always their with you bachaa, by the way I heard that a new manager is joining and it's a direct selection is it true???

Ict : Unfortunately Yes.....  They said in unison

Sakshi : They don't seem happy at all what is the matter girl's

Athiya : Nothing bhabhi it's just some little kids trapped in adult body trowing tantrums that no one can restrict them

Sakshi : Hmmm that means he or she is going to have a hard time right

Anushka : It's not he it's she

Sakshi : That's cool but let's wait and watch if she will run away like the others or not

Tanvi : She will not. She said descending the stairs talking to gautam in video call

Gautam : Hai bhabhi hai all

Others : Hello gautam

Gautam : Mahi bhai, my sister and tanus best friend cum sister is joining as your manager today I hope that you all will treat her like your own

Mahi : Of course gautam we will, we do small pranaks and masti apart from that we never make anyone feel unwelcomed

Gautam : She is like tanvi for me and all I want is her to be happy and I hope she will get the happiness that she deserves

Sakshi : For sure gautam you don't worry at all

On the other side pratiksha reached the ict complex she was really nervous because of what she had heard about them and was scared if she receives the same treatment that she gets from her house. Seeing her tension kaka sa said

Manoj kaka sa : Prati bachha tum chinta math karo sab tikh hojayaga aur tanu bhi toh hain na woh tum hari himmat banaga. Aur mein pahala yeh ki driver thi main janti hu unha bas toda zyatha masti karthi hai par dil ki bohut saf log hai

Pratiksha : Thanks kaka meri hosila badana kaliya yeh rak lo she said handing him over some money

Manoj kaka sa : Apni kaka ko dhanya vad math bol aur tuna jo mera liya kiya aur Kar rahi huna us ehsan ka aga meri bata kuch bhi nahi hai aur main tum se kabhi paisa manga nahi na toh aaj bhi nai chaiye

Partiksha : Tik hai kaka bas mujhe apni ashirwad do. She said and bend down to take his blessings

Manoj kaka sa : Jeete raho aur khush raho

He left from there and pratiksha entered the gate and security stopped her, she showed them her letter and smiled at them and they smiled back at her and showed her the way to front room where all were present

She stood in front of the living room where everybody was present including tanvi and was a bit confused about going in at that time  she bumped into someone causing her and that person to stumble a bit. It was ziva who was running towards Ms and others

Pratiksha : I am so sorry bachha hope you are fine

Ziva : I am fine di.....  Oh my God prati Didi I missed you so much your zivi missed you so much  she said hugging her tightly

Pratiksha : Zivi kiddo I didn't know it was you I also missed you so much mera bacha . But how come you are here???

Ziva : Dada joined the team as mentor and assistant coach, so we came with him and it has been long since I met all my dear chachu's and mamu's come I will introduce you to them. She pulled pratiksha with her and she by mistake landed in shubmans arm's who helped her from falling

They had a brife eye lock and he thought

Oh God she is so beautiful and cute but why does her eyes reflect so much of pain. Soon pratiksha broke the eye contact and stood up

Pratiksha : I am so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you hope you are fine and thanks for saving me from falling

Shubman:  Yes Yes I am fine, hope you are not hurt

Pratiksha : No I am not. Seeing her dhoni comes to her and took her in a tight hug

Mahi : Pratu mera bachha how are you???? You know your mahi bhai missed you a lot kiddo

Pratiksha : I am fine bhai, and I missed you too

Sakshi : What about me???

Pratiksha : Of course bhabhi. She said and went to hug her she hugged her back
At that time athiya came back after attending a call. And ran to her to hug her

Athiya : Pratiksha meri jaan I missed you so much, I can't believe that you are here

Pratiksha : Athi Di I missed you and I am so happy that I met you here

Tanvi : It seems that my number is in the end don't forget that she is my best friend cum sister

Mahi : Sorry but your number is not even going to arrive

Tanvi :  Huh!!!!!

Mahi : Acha sorry I was joking, go meet her. Tanvi ran towards Pratiksha and spinned her then put her down

Tanvi : I thought you won't come, but I am glad you did

Pratiksha :  When you call me how can I not

Tanvi : I know it wasn't easy at all for you to come. But glad that you managed now you will not go anywhere

Pratiksha : No it was not but all thanks to Di and bhaiya because of them I could manage

Mahi : Pratu met him he is rohit sharma the captain of the team and she is ritika his wife. He said pointing to rohit and ritika

Pratiksha : Hello ma'am hello sir I am pratiksha she said politely with a smile

Rohit and Ritika : Hello, and pratiksha please don't call me ma'am just call me Di

Pratiksha : But

Ritika : No ifs and buts if you can call athiya Di than you can call me also

Pratiksha : OK ma'am sorry Di...... 

Mahi : Bachaa now you go meet the officials they must be waiting for you . You can meet the others later , we will be here itself

Pratiksha : OK bhai. She left to meet the officials

Athiya : Tanvi You did great by recomending her to the officials, it was needed for her after what she is going through. And boy's like tanvi she is very precious to me also so don't you dare think of troubling her

Mahi : Yes she is right I won't tolerate if I get to know that you all are troubling her. I can assure you all one thing that she is the best manager that you all could ever ask for, try to accept her after that you all will find it difficult to let her go  from you all

Sakshi : She is the reason because of which our ziva is alive today , if she wasn't there I don't know what would have happened that day.

One by one all the others left leaving the team alone. And Rahul can't help but feel connected to her because she looks exactly like his sister and name is also same

Rohit : I told you all know that she is not like the other three, many people are attached to her and consider her as their family. So don't think of messing with her

Ict : Whatever we can't tolerate another manager and we will definitely throw her out of the job

Rohit : Listen I already told you that you guys are playing a risky game, my job was to warn which I did rest is up to you all. But if you guys land your self in trouble I might not be able to help you all out

He also left leaving a confused yet determined ict behind

Pratiksha reached the office where the meeting is held, she entered inside the room

Bcci official : Welcome ms pratiksha please have a seat

Pratiksha : Thank you sir

Bcci official : We had gone through your resume, you have a really good academic qualification which is great and even when we spoke with the officials of team England they were also all praise about you

Pratiksha : Thank you sir, in fact I had the best time working with them and it was truly a learning experience for me

Bcci offical : Now coming to your job as a manager of ict, they are not like the other team and Listen this job is not going to easy because they are going to trouble the hell out of you, they will try all the way possible to throw you out of the job. And will you run away like the other three??? 

Pratiksha : No sir this job is very important to me and I will not leave this job, until and unless I decided to quit this job myself

Bcci offical : OK we appreciate your confidence and have Complet faith in you, if you need any kind of help you can always approach anyone of us and try to know the team closer it might help and still if you face any kind of trouble please feel free to approach us

Pratiksha : OK Sir

Bcci offical : OK now you can leave after signing the contract for six months and after that if the team members and mentors recommende we will renew your contract. But only if you don't join any other team

Pratiksha :  OK I understand sir

Bcci offical : OK then here you go, they gave her the papers and she signed it she left to meet tanvi after submitting her documents

Other side the ict is ready to welcome her in their style

Rishab : Ishu my boy are you ready. I don't want any kind of mistake to happen

Ishan : Of course bhai, and when I plan something their is no chance of mistake

Virat : What are you guys going to do

Siraj : The same thing that we did when our third manager came to meet us, but here there is a slight difference

Hardik : And what's that

Ishan : Instead of two balloons an entire box of water balloons will be emptied on the top of her head

Surya : But guys it's her first day and will it be fair to welcome her like that, especially when she is close to so many people in our ict family most importantly mahi bhai

Rishab : Come on surya bhai to throw her out we need to start troubling her from the first day and she won't complaint to anyone

Shami : What if she does????

Rishab : We will take care of that , she is coming now move a bit other wise we might also end up drenching

Pratiksha stood in front of them in order to speak to them and as planned the box emptied but she moved a bit and accidentally pushed the box causing it to empty directly on the ict 's head

Ict : What the actual fuck!!!!!

Pratiksha : Oh God I am so sorry I didn't see...... Wait she saw the remote in ishans hand and understand that it was mend for her and she started laughing

The entire ict was dumbfounded seeing her laughing but found it cute

Virat : Why are you laughing, did something funny happened here

Pratiksha : Sir what's more funnier than you all right now, I am feeling very bad for you all it was actually meant for me right but you guys ended up being the prey of your own trap. Waisa I have only heard that khud ka kiya khud par hi bhari padna now I have seen it also. I won't tell this to anyone it will be our top secret

Shubman : You!!!!

Pratiksha : What . You all wanted to throw me out of this job and your first attempt successfully failed keep trying but I am never gonna run away like the other three

Jaddu : That day is not far when we actually throw you out

Pratiksha: Let's see. I think you guys have better jobs to do rather than throwing me out , I think for you all throwing me out is not that important

Ict : Of course For us throwing you out of this job is important and we will definitely do that by hook or crook "

Pratiksha : For me this job is important, So I will secure it.  No matter how much hard I have to work and how much troubles I have to face I am never going to leave this job....

Shreyas : Are you challenging us

Pratiksha : Of course not its a promise that I have done to myself, that until and unless I decided to quit this job I won't leave this job . And may be you guys might need time to accept me but I can tell you all on thing that I will try my level best to be a part of you all. Saying this she left from there ......

Rohit : Oh God guys I told you know she is not like the others, see how you all ended up falling in your own prank. Now change your clothes before you all catch cold. And better try to accept her

Others : We try to accept her Never!!!!! . Saying  this they stormed off to their room and rohit stood there siging at his team's antics

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