Creativity:15 /15
I find that this is a very interesting story when it comes to creativity and dealing with aliens. I'm not sure if it is a good interpretation of aliens. At the end of the day, it is still an alien-based story. I've read similar stories based on aliens, but the way the author does it is still very creative because, once again, you are returned and have no memory of what's going on or what has gone on.
Originality:10 /15
I definitely won't say that in the original story because, once again, aliens on top of werewolves and vampires are very popular in the writing world. I can honestly say this because I've read it all, but it's. It's still a very interesting story to read, and how the author does it intrigues me. Being abducted and in the woods, I'd say, is the original button, not really, because a lot of stories when it comes to abduction always seem to happen in the woods. Now, I'm not saying this to be mean or malicious because I am not that type of person to me. It's just not 100 percent original. But it still has certain parts of it that make it different.
Storytelling: 15/15
The storytelling is definitely there, but to me, it doesn't feel like it's really storytelling. I feel like it's seen what's going on through the person, like the main character's point of view and what she's going through. And this is actually one of the stories that I can honestly say, and I don't see a lot of them where it's not really storytelling, or you feel like somebody's telling you a story or that you're like in a story, Yada.. yada, yada, things like that for me. It is the main character letting you see what's going on through their eyes, and it's still not a bad concept at the end of the day; it's still storytelling, just not in the sense of how I feel when reading the story.
Character:10 /15
Characters are average teenage characters. There's nothing very special about them. I'm not saying that they won't progress or they won't develop as the story goes on. But from my perspective, I don't see much coming from them besides a lot of the secrets about the alien abduction. Bond that each of them has nothing. else really vibes for me when it comes to these characters. Besides their friendship, I really appreciate their friendship and can feel the bomb that all of them have.
Story Flows: 15/15
When it came down to the flow, I did not see any grammar sentences. Structure.. or error. In any of the story.
Cover Design:15 /15
Its cover designed for the story and the story concept very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
It's the end of the day. This is not to be mean. Once again, I am not here to be mean. I'm here, to be honest. This is not a story that I would continue to read. I have had my film when it comes to certain stories, and when it comes to the supernatural, I have. I have yet to find something that intrigues me or wants me to read it. I haven't really come across many stories like that. For me, this story is just about aliens, and I feel like when it comes to the supernatural such as vampires, werewolves, and aliens, they are so overplayed, and there's not much you can do with them. I did not see that the story was not a good story because I enjoyed the story. But at the end of the day, it is not a story that I would continue to read just because I've had my fulfillment of the supernatural when it comes to things like this. However, the author still has a very good concept. The only issue I had was character development. I did not feel like the characters in the 1st three chapters were developing at all. I mean, at the end of the day, the girl had been abducted by aliens, and she did not show a lot of emotion, a lot of fear, a lot of questioning, or anything like that. In the three chapters that I read, she was frustrated. And she did want to know what happened to her, but there was nothing more. It was just bland to me, and I feel that way. For example, when it comes to a character who was abducted, they knew they were abducted. There should be more to it. There should be trauma. There should be sadness, and they did say that there was sadness in her chats that she didn't understand. But I feel like a character should go through it. And I feel like she really did it when it comes to this character. All she was concerned about was telling her friends.
Chapters I read: prologue and. three chapters
Total points:85
Summary of the book:
Status: ongoing (updates every Saturday @ 5pm uk time)Jeremiah is the last person Dee should be friends with - after all, he broke her best friend's heart. But when both of them get entangled in a strange extraterrestrial experience, they're forced to put aside their differences and work together to understand what happened to them. And as an alien outbreak threatens the safety of the world around them, they realize that their connection goes beyond the strange extraterrestrial experience they shared. In the midst of chaos, they discover that there's more binding them together than they ever imagined.
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