An enchanting love story

By krishnapriya_2710

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What if there was one more fire born? What if she liked Krishna? Read to find out more More

Cast
The curse
Just a note
The invitation
Notice!
The Birth of Draupadi!
The birth of our shree Mahalaxmi!
The First Meet (part 1)
The First meet (part 2)

The birth of Dhrishtadyumna

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By krishnapriya_2710

The kingdom of panchaal was in full hustle and bustle for the Yagn and the birth of the future heirs of panchaal.
Somewhere,
in the castle of Dwarka

"Kanha! Chalo,hume abhi panchaal ke liye jana Hain"said balram dau
"Hain Hain, Aur mujhe tum sab se kuch bat kahne Hain"said the protector of the world Krishna
Jagannath said filled with excitement and glee "I am going to reunite with my priye, Laxmi"
Before shesh Naag could have replied their mother, the wife of king Vasudev called them
"Lalla,dau chalo deri ho rahe hai!!" Said mata devki excitement and anxiousness evident in her voice
As they set off to their journey Subhadra couldn't stop talking because of excitement
The whole family was laughing at Subhadra's behaviour


In Panchala Rajya
A man sat in front of the sacred fire, many priests busy in chanting prayers and adding ghee or some may say purified butter in the fire to keep the flames burning
As the high priest said "king Draupad you may now give the ahutis for your preferred child."
As drupad stood up and gave the ahutis or one says scarifies, them being such as
" I , the king of panchala ,Drupada give the first ahuti my sword.
This sword signifies that my child should be one of the greatest warrior in history of the land aryavrat has ever seen"
And so many more

The guests watched in awe as the fire grew higher and higher up until almost reaching the skies
"Oh! King Drupad the gods have granted you with a boy as strong as a mountain,

Body of steel ,

The boy who will be the cause of the death of the kuru guru Dronacharya

Oh the mighty king he will be called upon the name of Dhrishtadyumna!"  Said a priest
As the fire began to take the shape of a man
Down as he stepped on could see the divine power he had from a mile away

As Krishna smiled and muttered "the time is coming sooner than expected dear.."
As Parth or one might call Arjun asked "what time is coming soon Madhav?"
Before Krishna could reply the first fire born stepped out of the Agni khund

He walked down and asked for the blessings of all the priests there and stood in front of his father and elder sister . He touched his father feet's and asked for his blessings king drupad broke down into tears and hugged him to his heart and said ayushman Bhava , the sister joined in the soon family hug and consoled her father , Dhrishtadyumna not knowing what to do hugged his father by what he felt.
The guest felt emotions of their own   Some felt happy, some emotional and some on the other hand felt pure jealousy

"My son!" Said king drupad

To be continued

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Hello buddies how are you all?
Bit of a surprise isn't it ?
Well in this break that I took I improved my grammar and writing skills a bit
Tell how the chapter was!
Skipped a few scenes cause I was sleepyyyyy
Now now !
Vote target is : 15 hopefully

Till then take care 

Lub lub

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