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📚Reading List 📚
❄️The Last Philosopher❄️
❄️The Right To Die❄️
❄️Rich Re:grets❄️
❄️The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth❄️
❄️Rebellion - Prince Of Dawn❄️
❄️Subterra Heart❄️
❄️The Diary Of A Model (The Contract)❄️
❄️To Steal A Weeping Window❄️
❄️The Adventures Of Rel Rel Lost Mirror 2nd Edition❄️
❄️The Edge Of Truth❄️
❄️Machine Heart: A Story Of Mystery And Intrigue❄️
❄️Close Enemies❄️
❄️Dear Myrtle Cove❄️
❄️Reflections Of Choice❄️
❄️Saving Michael❄️
❄️EVAUGHN❄️
❄️False Hate❄️
❄️Outbreak: The First Surge❄️
❄️The Burden of a Secret❄️
❄️Destined Strangers❄️
❄️DELONIX❄️
❄️Tale of the Princess❄️
❄️❀ 𝐍𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐥𝐮𝐧𝐨𝐬𝐢𝐬 ❀ | 18+❄️
❄️Empire: playing dice❄️
❄️The Mind Of A Tipsy Teenager❄️
❄️Return of the Youngest Auclair❄️
❄️US v THEM❄️
❄️The Great Pretende❄️
❄️The Prince and the Punk❄️
❄️Claire: The Diary of A Model 2[The Journey]❄️
❄️Unseen Fragments❄️
❄️Empress Of Self - Ruin❄️
❄️IYO❄️
❄️Tangled Claws❄️
❄️Their Little Princess❄️
❄️Hunted: Destructive Outbreak❄️
❄️Bitter Sweet Affair❄️
❄️Feverish Revenge❄️
❄️FOG OF THE HEART❄️
❄️House Of Zale❄️
❄️Poor in heaven/The lake club❄️
❄️Lie To Me❄️
❄️The Healing Bond❄️
❄️Curse Of Noble Blood❄️
❄️The Prep Diary: How The Prep Became So Preppy❄️
❄️what do we count in a galaxy filled with unlucky Stars?❄️
❄️Of moons and blood❄️
❄️Bloody Royals /18+❄️
❄️Someday, Somewhere, Somehow❄️
❄️Ambrosia Promise❄️
❄️The Lost Chronicles of a Villainess❄️
❄️In The Thorns Of A Castle❄️
❄️The Dream Of Dead❄️
❄️Wrong Planet/ X Together❄️
❄️Rich Man's Ransom // Huening Kai FF✔️❄️
❄️Fated To Be You❄️
❄️Jake Rose The Werewolf❄️
❄️Shadows Of Deceit❄️
❄️The Gap❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Crown Of Spells❄️
❄️Mayapuri- City Of Dreams...❄️
❄️Dungeon❄️
❄️Falling For Jackson Again!❄️
❄️Luna Bloodlust✔️❄️
❄️Best Night Ever❄️
❄️A Touch of Fate❄️
❄️Who Killed Vivrr? ||Tomorrow X Tomorrow❄️
❄️The Lethal Heptagon❄️
❄️How To Survive Murder❄️
❄️The Stalker*Book One*❄️
❄️Love At Dawn❄️
❄️This Is The Fall❄️
❄️Luminaries❄️
❄️Heart Waves❄️
❄️So What If You Love Me?❄️
❄️ViperSong❄️
❄️Guardians Of Heavnsworth❄️
❄️New World Magic❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Not My Little Sister❄️
❄️Stay❄️
❄️Aetheria Falling❄️
❄️1000 Years Of Light❄️
❄️Through Thick And Thin❄️
❄️Auctioned To The Ruthless Billionaire❄️
❄️Finding Love Again❄️
❄️The Beast's Untamed Desire❄️
❄️Solace❄️
❄️In The Night Sky❄️
❄️The Slient Chase❄️
❄️Just Three Days❄️
❄️This Is The way It Goes, I Guess❄️
❄️River Haven Hotel❄️
❄️The Princess And The Fox❄️
❄️Admiring The Light❄️
❄️SHS❄️
❄️The Dragon Emperor❄️
❄️Slate Gray❄️
❄️Their Angel❄️
❄️Veiled Desires❄️
❄️Kendra❄️
❄️Going After The Wrong Guy❄️
❄️Amethyst❄️
❄️Winter Solace❄️
❄️Why Not Us❄️
❄️The Elf Witch❄️
❄️Dream In The Ashes❄️
❄️Keepers of Pokémon❄️
❄️The LoveYou Gave Me❄️
❄️The Pentagon Paradox❄️
❄️"Divine Reckoning: Mahabharata's Resurgence in Kaliyuga"❄️
❄️I'm right here❄️
❄️DARKNESS TOGETHER❄️
❄️ɢʀᴇᴇɴᴠɪʟʟᴇ ʜɪɢʜ ꜱᴄʜᴏᴏʟ ꜱᴇʀɪᴇꜱ: 𝙼𝚄𝚁𝙳𝙴𝚁 𝙸𝚂 𝚃𝙷𝙴 𝙲𝙰𝚂𝙴❄️
❄️UNLOCK YOU❄️
❄️Fool's Pledge❄️
❄️So Far Away❄️
❄️Break Me & Remake Me❄️
❄️PARADISE | Caught In The Fire❄️
❄️Lost in Blue❄️
❄️The Twelve Stars❄️
❄️Sincere's Game - The Name Game❄️
❄️Amongst the Waking Dreams❄️
❄️Mysteries Of Riverwood❄️
❄️THE Destiny Brought Them Together❄️
❄️The Deer and The Wolf❄️
❄️Penny - Guardian❄️
❄️A Christmas Without Spirit❄️
❄️A Bead In The Lost Woods❄️
❄️The 6 devils ...will they last❄️
❄️Guarding Hearts' Whimsy❄️
❄️The Bullied Girl❄️
❄️THE MAN BEHIND MY MIND❄️
❄️The God's Game❄️
❄️Refrain❄️
❄️Peerless❄️
❄️The Moon Is New.❄️
❄️Life Within The Halls❄️
❄️VEILED ROSE❄️
❄️𝐄𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐃𝐚𝐦𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧❄️
❄️Foreign Objects❄️
❄️Dear Mocha❄️
❄️Hello Butterflies❄️
❄️𝐖𝐇𝐎 𝐈𝐒 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑?❄️
❄️𝐍𝐎𝐓𝐇𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐓𝐎 𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄❄️
❄️Default Title - I Accept The ❤❤ Conditions Of Love ❤❤❄️
❄️The Chronicles: Mark's Adventures❄️
❄️Threads✔️❄️
❄️The Tales of Evergreen: On Weed-Overgrown Bed❄️
❄️Family - UNITED STRENGTH❄️
❄️The storyThreads Of Fate❄️
❄️HIRAETH❄️
❄️Heir of Shadows and Destruction❄️
❄️His Devilish Queen❄️
❄️Dragoniers❄️
❄️Finding Death❄️
❄️Tears Of Love❄️
❄️JOURNEY OF LOVE❄️
❄️Public Relations❄️
❄️It's A Dangerous Life❄️
❄️I do believe in your galaxy//KTH FF❄️
❄️Heroine❄️
❄️Trust Me❄️
❄️Behind the spotlight {T.K}❄️
❄️Beyond the grave {T.K}❄️
❄️Unnoticed (an original Musical)❄️
❄️THE SURGEON'S SOLITUDE❄️
❄️You're alright, Larusso❄️
❄️Station❄️
❄️The Kingdom❄️
❄️Stay Mine❄️
❄️Oregon Trail: A mystery in plain sight❄️
❄️NOOR❄️
❄️Lost In The Fray❄️
❄️Written in the Stars || TWD❄️
❄️My Guardian Angel❄️
❄️The First Draft❄️
❄️Made It Big❄️
❄️poetic thoughts❄️

❄️Shattered Souls❄️

45 6 2
By StoryTellerAD

Creativity: 15/15

I honestly wish that there was more of this poetry. This poetry was so phenomenal, and the way that you could feel everything the author was writing made the poetry in this story amazing.


Originality: 15/15

this story is so different from other poetry because you can feel what's going on with the author and all the emotions now. Poetry is very hard to understand because reviewing it is a little different than normal stories because this is pretty much the author telling the story through their eyes. This author did such an amazing child with it. That brought chills to me.


Storytelling:15 /15

I really don't give storytelling. I feel like this is real. This is a life experience this author has experienced. That being said, it was still very much a reflection of what was going on in their life. Because of that, it is a kind of storytelling, and the way that they did it was phenomenal.


Character: 15/15

I can't really say that I'm giving the 15 points for a character because when it comes to poetry, they really don't have characters like a normal story, but I am giving it because the character of this story is the author. The poems are their characters in one way or another. And the way I can relate to each poem makes. It's worth giving them the 15 points.


Story Flows: 15/15

There's nothing wrong with the poems at all.


Cover Design:15 /15

The cover and the poems worked perfectly together.


Final Thoughts:10 /10

At the end of the day, this is another story that I don't understand. Why are they not eating reviews and not getting good knowledge? The author really puts their heart and soul into these palms. And you can tell when you read them. They are so deep and so beautiful and so pure. These are the stories that I look for, the way the author does these stories, and the way that the author puts their heart and soul into these stories, poems, and this work. You can tell.

Chapters I read: all of the book 


Total points:100


Summary of the book:

"I wrote poems. It was lost and broken. They couldn't be found and to be fix because of you."Title: Shattered Souls (Formerly "Lost Poems Of A Broken Soul.)


AUTHORS WARNING

Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

🪷A.D🪷



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