Creativity:15/15
When the story was written, it was so creative in how the author did the story and how it felt formal, but it also felt very royalty-like, which makes any sense. It was still interesting and very much enjoyable to read the way that this author did it.
Originality: 15/15
This was definitely a story that I had not read. I enjoyed it. I enjoyed this story so much because of how the author did everything; it was like they did it in steps, which they did not. Take away from the characters the way that there was so much elegancy in the story, yet it still had the concerns. It had the stress, it had the worry, and it had everything as well, which made it phenomenal to read. It was just a very interesting story. And very different
Storytelling: 15/15
When reading the story, I felt like I was back in the old days. And I'm not saying that isn't good, because I enjoyed it. But that's what I felt like. I felt like I was back in the old days, listening. to a grandmother, grandfather, etc. Tell me a story of something in their past, which I enjoyed because it was a feeling of comfort for me but also a feeling of Freedom. But it was also a refreshing story. It was different, and I appreciated it.
Character: 15/15
I quite enjoyed the characters. They were all different in their own unique way, and that is something that I love and look forward to because, at the end of the day, if the characters aren't unique or I can't connect to them, then the story is not going to be enjoyable to me. However, I could not connect with the characters. They were still enjoyable to read.
Story Flows: 15/15
The flow of the story was delightful. I didn't see anything wrong with it. There were no errors. There was no sudden structure. There was nothing that was out of place. All the sentences flowed very nicely.
Cover Design: 15/15
I do feel like the story and the cover represent each other very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
At the end of the day, I find that stories like these are the reasons I like to review them because this story is phenomenal, and the way that Author. Writes each and every character, as well as the storyline, is beautiful. I don't understand why my authors are not being recognized because these authors, like this one, write stories from the heart. These are the stories that I live for. These are the stories I look for. These are the stories I would read. I'm not all about reading a lot of popular stories. For me, I want to read stories that don't have a lot of votes or don't have a lot of comments because those are the best stories to read.
Chapters I read:3
Total points:100
Summary of the book:
What is the fear of a nation? The sound of war? The death of a king? The Kingdom of Yellow Mountain is not immune to fears. As news of the monarch's death spreads. The family Peerless knows this is a time to act with boldness. A weak king cannot occupy the throne and a fragile kingdom cannot survive a war. Family Patriarch Peregrine Peerless and chief aide to the kingdom grapples with a cantankerous queen mother and disloyalty in court as a new heir takes the throne. Meanwhile, the pressure is on for Adolph Peerless, a strict judge, to follow a trail of handbills pointing to anarchy. With them is Duchess Hoopoe, a woman aspiring to become a royal investigator steeped in a tragic case of her own. Assisted by a network of family and friends, including a daughter trapped in an arranged marriage and a comical preacher, they visit the upper class and the underbelly of society to get to the bottom of a string of crimes threatening to corrupt the stability of the nation.Regular Updates!"Peerless"All works copyright Carpathia. HRH Carpathia. This novel is a work of fiction and any resemblance to persons or places is entirely coincidental.
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