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๐“๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐š๐›๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ค๐ข๐ฆ ๐Ÿ๐š๐ฆ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐œ๐ก ๐ข๐ง๐œ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ž๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ง ๐›๐ซ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ซ... More

โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 1 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 2 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 3 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 4 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 5 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 6 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 7 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 8 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 9 โ€
ใƒปโฅใƒป๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ง'๐™จ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™šใƒปโฅใƒป
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 10 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 11 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 12 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 13 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 14 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 15 โ€
ใƒปโฅใƒป๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ง'๐™จ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™šใƒปโฅใƒป
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 16 โ€
โ•ฐโ”ˆโซธ๊ง ๐‘ต๐’†๐’˜ ๐’”๐’†๐’“๐’Š๐’†๐’” ๊ง‚โซทโ”ˆโ”ˆโ•ฏ
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 17 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 18 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 19 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 20 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 21 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 22 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 23 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 24 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 25 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 26 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 28 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 29 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 30 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 31 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 32 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 33 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 34 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 35 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 36 โ€
โ•ฐโ”ˆโซธ๊ง ๐‘ต๐’†๐’˜ ๐’”๐’†๐’“๐’Š๐’†๐’” ๊ง‚โซทโ”ˆโ”ˆโ•ฏ
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 37 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 38 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 39 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 40 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 41 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 42 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 43 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 44 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 45 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 46 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 47 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 48 โ€
ใƒปโฅใƒป๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ง'๐™จ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™šใƒปโฅใƒป
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 49 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 50 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 51 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 52 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 53 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 54 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 55 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 56 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 57 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 58 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 59 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 60 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 61 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 62 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 63 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 64 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 65 โ€
โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 66 โ€

โ€ ๐‘ช๐’‰๐’‚๐’‘๐’•๐’†๐’“ 27 โ€

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Jin also came. He was legit fighting with firemen to stop the fire and to take his brothers out.

Jin: If something happened to them out I will sue you

All the brothers were begging in front of the fireman to save jimin and jungkook

Meanwhile with jimin and jungkook -

Both of them were shocked to see fire everywhere.

Jimin held jungkook's hand more protectively

Jimin tried to move from there while holding jungkook's hand but jungkook stopped on his tracks and said "hyung I am scared.... please do something I can't move"

Jimin hugged him and Said "I told you right I won't let anything happen to you....just trust me"

They both were coughing badly due to smoke.

They moved a little but a small burning wodden plank landed on jungkook's right arm making him cry out loud "ahhh...ahhh it hurts ahhh"

Jimin removed that plank with his own hand without caring about it burning.

They again started moving. As the whole mall is burning they are not able to find the exit.

After a while Suddenly Jimin stopped on his track and said "jungkook there is exit look"

Jungkook looked at where jimin was pointing and said "lets go fast"

They both were walking towards the exit but soon they noticed a wooden door which was completely burning was falling from 1st floor towards them (they were on ground floor)

Without thinking about himself jimin pushed jungkook away and before saying "go out without looking back"

That door falls down just near jimin's legs

Jungkook looked back being horrified and tried to say something. But jimin cut him off and said "GO OUT"

Jungkook didn't argued he got out of the mall and took a breath of fresh air then stated coughing badly

Hyungs and few firemen were standing just out the exit gate so they went towards jungkook.

Hyungs were very relieved seeing jungkook.

Hobi made him drink water

Jungkook coughed and said "my face...ahh it's burning"

Jin hugged him carefully making sure not to touch his burned area and said "hey hey its ok you are fine"

Jungkook relaxed a little feeling his Hyung's warmth

Yoongi on the verge of tears said "lets pour water on his face"

They poured water on his face. After few minutes he calmed down and said "jimin hyung....he is still inside... please save him"

Saying this he fainted

Namjoon patted his face and said "don't close your eyes please....wake up"

Soon Paramedics came. They laid him on the stretcher and took him inside the ambulance.

Hyungs's heart broke seeing them putting oxygen mask on him and putting IV on his hand.

One person from Paramedics said "we have to take him to hospital"

Jin nodded and said "hobi namjoon you both go with him..... yoongi and I will come after taking jimin"

They took jungkook to hospital who was having difficulty in breathing

Meanwhile with jimin-

After pushing jungkook out he sighed in relief and said "thank God he is out"

A tear left from his eyes out of happiness

But now he was stuck inside. The door was very big and he couldn't jump over it and there was also no other way to go out

He started thinking how to go out.

The fire started increasing more. Smoke was aslo increasing making it hard for him to breath.

He was coughing hardly and took a support of one shelf which was not burning.

Suddenly he felt burning sensation on his left hand he turned around and saw fire the the shelf and on the sleeve of his left hand and also on his stomach.

Outside the mall-

After ambulance left for the hospital jin and yoongi went towards firemen. Yoongi grabbed one firemen's coller and said "you all are good for nothing....it is your job to save people right then why are you not saving my brother.... did you saw jungkook's condition how badly he was coughing.....jimin...he is still inside he must be scared do something please

Firemen: we are trying are best sir but fire is too much we are not able to control it. We called more firetrucks also Our few men are inside they are trying their best please calm down

Yoongi left his coller and broke down in tears.

Jin hugged him and said "I never felt this helpless in my entire life....why is it happening with us... there jungkook struggling on the hospital bed and here jimin struggling inside with fire"

Yoongi: it is my fault....I left them to attend a call.

Jin: it's no one's fault yoongi... whatever is written in our fate is bound to happen

Inside the mall-

He panicked and immediately got away from the shelf and started tapping the burning area with his right hand in order to stop it from burning (which was already burned while removing Plank from jungkook's arms.)

He stopped the fire of his left hand and stomach but it was burned.

It was hurting very badly. He started crying out of pain. He blowed air from his mouth on his hand to get relief from pain but that was not helping.

He sat on the floor accepting his fate "I never thought I would die in this kind of situation" he chuckled sadly

The exit gate was just a few metres above him but because of the burning door he couldn't go out

Meanwhile few more firetrucks arrived and started extinguishing the fire

Once the fire was in control few 2 men along with small fire extinguisher were about to go inside.

Jin interrupted and said "my brother is inside please save save him...he is 14 years old"

fireman 1 patted his back and said "don't worry sir...we will do our best"

They both went inside and saw the burning door on the floor blocking the way.

They used the extinguisher and extinguished it's fire.

Once the fire was stopped they saw jimin sitting on the floor coughing badly.

Fireman 1 rushed towards him and firemen 2 was controlling the fire inside

Firemen 1:"kid we are here to save you. Can you stand up"

Jimin felt a hope of his survival. He tried to stand up but couldn't

Fireman 1 picked hin up carefully and started moving outside (jimin was the only one stuck inside).

Jimin winched in pain because while picking him up fireman 1 unknowingly touched his burned area

Firema 1 : its ok its ok you are safe now

Once they three came out jin and yoongi ran towards them.

Jin: my baby...oh my god

He tried to take jimin from firemen 1 but he stopped him and said "he is burned very badly be careful"

Jin nodded and took him in his arms "jimin baby....can you hear me"

Jimin nodded a little and said "jung-kook? Ho-w i-s h-e

Yoongi: they took him to the hospital he'll be fine

Jin went towards the ambulance and said to paramedic "we need to take him to hospital"

Paramedics immediately laid him on the stretcher and took him inside the ambulance. They put oxygen mask on him.

Jin: yoongi you go with jimin....I'll come with car

Yoongi nodded and went inside the ambulance

While on the way to hospital. Paramedics treated his wounds temporarily. They noticed his condition getting worse

Yoongi was crying and paying for him to be safe "jimin... please be strong...be strong for hyung baby...I'll die without you"

Jimin looked at yoongi crying and said weakly "hy-ung I a-m f-ine....do-n't cr-y"

Yoongi sobbed and said "you call it being fine"










To be continued

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